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		By: Jody Bilbo Staton		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2013/08/your-turn-to-share-your-writing/#comment-37218</link>

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		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Sep 2013 15:30:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Carew was closer to Mother and Grizly than any of the rest of us, but what good could Howard the Coward Carew do against an enraged stallion? He had no weapon either except his great walking stick. To my astonishment, he came up behind Grizly and swung the stick hard against the muscled gray rump.
     Grizly gave a shriek of rage louder even than Carew’s, and spun to face his attacker. Again and again, Carew swung the walking stick, stumbling backward, somehow managing to stay on his feet.
     And then an angry braying split the air, and Bonesy and Pippin exploded out their open gate. My colt’s ringing neigh caught Grizy’s attention, spinning him to face this new challenge.
     Philip threw the pheasants off his shoulder, and drew an arrow on the gray stallion. Yet how could he hope to take down Grizly, and do it without striking either Carew or my mother?
     Bonesy had spun himself around. The mule struck out with two massive hard-driving rear hooves that knocked the rearing Grizly’s hind legs out from under him.
      Carew backed away, just missing being toppled himself by Grizly’s collapse. He dropped his stick and bent to scoop Mother into his arms. “Kill the beast,” he shouted at Philip.
     The big gray struggled to get up, but Bonesy’s kick had broken one of Grizly’s hind legs. “You must shoot,” David called out. “He is beyond dangerous, beyond saving.”
     Philip’s arrow struck the massive gray neck. The stallion thrashed, screaming with pain.
     And then I realized I had raised my own bow, and drawn an arrow from my quiver. I thought about Cinder. How could I do this? How could I kill any horse? And what’s more, to do it this way?
     There was another way, if only I had what was needed. Father had once made up a concoction of herbals and poison that he hoped could be a humane way of delivering a last kindness to a suffering animal, but he had found it difficult to determine the correct dosage for an animal as large as a horse. As far as I knew, we had none of it on hand. Nor would I have known how much it would take to put this huge stallion out of his misery, or how to safely administer it. Grizly was lying on the ground, but striking out with teeth and hooves wherever he could reach.
     I closed my eyes, whispered a quick prayer asking for Father to be my guardian angel, opened my eyes, and let the arrow fly. It struck Grizliard square where his heart would be. He thrashed once, and was still.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Carew was closer to Mother and Grizly than any of the rest of us, but what good could Howard the Coward Carew do against an enraged stallion? He had no weapon either except his great walking stick. To my astonishment, he came up behind Grizly and swung the stick hard against the muscled gray rump.<br />
     Grizly gave a shriek of rage louder even than Carew’s, and spun to face his attacker. Again and again, Carew swung the walking stick, stumbling backward, somehow managing to stay on his feet.<br />
     And then an angry braying split the air, and Bonesy and Pippin exploded out their open gate. My colt’s ringing neigh caught Grizy’s attention, spinning him to face this new challenge.<br />
     Philip threw the pheasants off his shoulder, and drew an arrow on the gray stallion. Yet how could he hope to take down Grizly, and do it without striking either Carew or my mother?<br />
     Bonesy had spun himself around. The mule struck out with two massive hard-driving rear hooves that knocked the rearing Grizly’s hind legs out from under him.<br />
      Carew backed away, just missing being toppled himself by Grizly’s collapse. He dropped his stick and bent to scoop Mother into his arms. “Kill the beast,” he shouted at Philip.<br />
     The big gray struggled to get up, but Bonesy’s kick had broken one of Grizly’s hind legs. “You must shoot,” David called out. “He is beyond dangerous, beyond saving.”<br />
     Philip’s arrow struck the massive gray neck. The stallion thrashed, screaming with pain.<br />
     And then I realized I had raised my own bow, and drawn an arrow from my quiver. I thought about Cinder. How could I do this? How could I kill any horse? And what’s more, to do it this way?<br />
     There was another way, if only I had what was needed. Father had once made up a concoction of herbals and poison that he hoped could be a humane way of delivering a last kindness to a suffering animal, but he had found it difficult to determine the correct dosage for an animal as large as a horse. As far as I knew, we had none of it on hand. Nor would I have known how much it would take to put this huge stallion out of his misery, or how to safely administer it. Grizly was lying on the ground, but striking out with teeth and hooves wherever he could reach.<br />
     I closed my eyes, whispered a quick prayer asking for Father to be my guardian angel, opened my eyes, and let the arrow fly. It struck Grizliard square where his heart would be. He thrashed once, and was still.</p>
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		By: bethteliho		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2013/08/your-turn-to-share-your-writing/#comment-37215</link>

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		<pubDate>Tue, 03 Sep 2013 14:03:54 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[OMG I DID NOT MEAN TO SEND THAT YET, HOW DID I SEND THAT?
(Take 2: a continuation. UGH)

&quot;Shall we sit down?&quot; Jim gestured to the front row. The only sound was the shuffle of our feet and the pop of candles as the wicks burnt, sending ominous shadows across the dim sanctuary. We sat in the pews, pivoting to face him. I stayed behind Baron, close enough to have my hand on his lower back without being obvious. I wanted to stay arced with him, even though it was clear to me by now that I couldn&#039;t pick up anything from the professor: he was a Normal.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>OMG I DID NOT MEAN TO SEND THAT YET, HOW DID I SEND THAT?<br />
(Take 2: a continuation. UGH)</p>
<p>"Shall we sit down?" Jim gestured to the front row. The only sound was the shuffle of our feet and the pop of candles as the wicks burnt, sending ominous shadows across the dim sanctuary. We sat in the pews, pivoting to face him. I stayed behind Baron, close enough to have my hand on his lower back without being obvious. I wanted to stay arced with him, even though it was clear to me by now that I couldn't pick up anything from the professor: he was a Normal.</p>
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		By: bethteliho		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2013/08/your-turn-to-share-your-writing/#comment-37212</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[bethteliho]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 03 Sep 2013 13:56:25 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[From the finished-but-still-editing: Tree of Life: Book One in The Order series

My heart leapt and began pounding in my throat. He was different than I expected. He had black, messy hair. A thick, unkempt beard. He wore loose clothing over his thin frame. If I didn&#039;t know better, I&#039;d think he were homeless. But then again, I knew the type. The professor-living-on-the-outskirts type. His smile made his eyes crinkle in that way that makes you want to trust somebody. He walked toward us with an outstretched hand. We shook with him; Baron introduced me as Mandi, like we had planned. He asked us to call him Jim.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>From the finished-but-still-editing: Tree of Life: Book One in The Order series</p>
<p>My heart leapt and began pounding in my throat. He was different than I expected. He had black, messy hair. A thick, unkempt beard. He wore loose clothing over his thin frame. If I didn't know better, I'd think he were homeless. But then again, I knew the type. The professor-living-on-the-outskirts type. His smile made his eyes crinkle in that way that makes you want to trust somebody. He walked toward us with an outstretched hand. We shook with him; Baron introduced me as Mandi, like we had planned. He asked us to call him Jim.</p>
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		By: DeeAnna Galbraith		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[DeeAnna Galbraith]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Aug 2013 16:32:21 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2013/08/your-turn-to-share-your-writing/#comment-37062&quot;&gt;writersinthestorm&lt;/a&gt;.

yep. Early morning, in a big kitchen, and he doesn&#039;t care who sees.]]></description>
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<p>yep. Early morning, in a big kitchen, and he doesn't care who sees.</p>
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		By: Rebecca White		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Rebecca White]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Aug 2013 12:20:18 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2013/08/your-turn-to-share-your-writing/#comment-36987&quot;&gt;writersinthestorm&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank you much for the kind words. Makes this old lady happy (and hopeful that maybe the manuscript will eventually get published). -- I&#039;ve learned half of what I know about writing from this site. You guys are a great resource for those of us out here still feeling our way. Thanks again!]]></description>
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<p>Thank you much for the kind words. Makes this old lady happy (and hopeful that maybe the manuscript will eventually get published). -- I've learned half of what I know about writing from this site. You guys are a great resource for those of us out here still feeling our way. Thanks again!</p>
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		By: Normandie		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Aug 2013 14:04:41 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[From my September 15 release: Sailing out of Darkness
                                   Lonely isn’t lonely if one looks from outside in;
                             It’s just the inside out that makes a person feel so thin.

     Theodore Anderson clawed his way up the bank, grabbing handholds and pressing against rock with his bare feet. Why wouldn’t his legs work? Come on, move, move.
     Kicking only tightened the bindings around his ankles, at his thighs. What was wrong with him?
     The hulk skidded along the asphalt. Tires shrieked and air brakes hissed as the engine howled in protest. Teo turned. The massive silver grille reflected oncoming headlights, blinding him, and all he could do was raise his arms to protect his face, because he was too late. He’d never escape.
     And, dying, he woke.
     He inhaled slowly, letting the breath whoosh out between pursed lips. He was in his room, wrapped in a sheet. No demons roamed, and, while that truck may have jackknifed years ago and thousands of miles away, it was not here in Reggio sul Mare, on the Italian Riviera.
     So, why the dream now and in this place?
     He tossed off the covers, slipped on a pair of jeans and a shirt, and slid his feet into loafers. He couldn’t run off the tension, but he could walk. The tap of his cane on the sidewalk echoed in the pre-dawn.
     Like eyelids closed against the night, metal shutters hid the shop windows. He could picture the butcher’s just there, slabs of meat hanging from hooks, fowl complete with head and feet, prices by the kilo. He passed the greengrocer’s, two stores down. Next, the tabaccaio, which reminded him that he needed to buy stamps when they opened. He knew the shopkeepers by sight after five years of walking these streets, even if he didn’t know all by name.
     In the distance, an engine revved. Most in town would stretch and yawn as they slowly woke. The bakers, though, were even now sliding dough into ovens, yeasty morsels he could buy in a few hours to nibble with a strong espresso. But not yet.
     His tap-tap continued down the hill to the shore where he stepped onto the rocky sand and rebalanced. Waves crested and broke, hidden by the fog, though lights from the nearby hotel illuminated enough beach to keep him from falling. He kicked off his shoes and moved to the water’s edge, then whispered, “Sono qui.”
     That elicited a smile. “I am here,” he repeated.
      Not there. No longer there.
     “Okay, I’m up and out.” He aimed this message skyward. “I assume that’s what you—or someone—wanted.”
     The sea wrapped his ankles and splashed the tip of his cane. The walk had cleared his soggy brain, and the eerie quiet of a mist-clad sea sat well with him. He stood still and listened to the soft slosh as the waves hit sand. But no one spoke, neither God nor man.
     He’d begun to turn away when she stepped out of the fog, white on white with a touch of gray, followed by a flash of light skin and dark hair. Puzzled, he stared.
     Slowly, her form emerged, and a bright smile bridged the dimensions. She beckoned. Did she wave at him? Teo peered over his shoulder and down the beach, but he was alone with only the sand and the sea and this vision before him. He expected to hear witchy moans next—or see a bubbling cauldron. Surely, this wasn’t an angel.
     “Che succede?” he called, wanting to know what was up, along with a why or two, but she didn’t speak. Perhaps she couldn’t.
     The sea sucked the wave, as if the sand inhaled then exhaled, breathing in water and filtering it out like a fish’s gills. He backed away, sliding damp feet into his shoes.
     Lights from the new hotel, the Albergo dei Romantici, illuminated the froth, showing off upturned rowboats that lined the sand like an army slumbering till day. Teo rarely ventured close to the developed boardwalk, but at this hour it seemed appropriate. No one else stirred. He was free to explore.
     This stranger’s appearance wouldn’t seem so odd if she had flesh and form that he could touch. Instead, she shape-shifted in the half light, one moment showing no more than a wispy outline, in the next, substance.
     There, now: a three-dimensional image. She didn’t possess Sophrina’s soft curves or that long, wavy hair. Her lips eased without seduction, an art she didn’t seem to know. Her lashes lowered, but not to shadow Sophrina’s penetrating stare. They dropped to hide her pain.
     How could he know that? He shook his head, puzzled when the understanding dropped into his mind with no prompting from either of them. His eyes snapped closed, then opened to scan the area. Perhaps he was merely dreaming.
     A pleasant dream to make him forget the nightmare? His mind playing tricks?
     He kicked the sand, then scored a trench with his cane. The effect seemed too real for a dream. Besides, a dreamscape normally stopped and rewound before either repeating the sequence or adding some new element.
     Why did his sleep-deprived brain conjure this woman, whose image he didn’t recognize? He’d left his bed, full of the need to walk. He should return and hope for rest.
     Right. As long as this haunting didn’t follow him into sleep.
     Someone laughed from around a corner. A second hushed the first. These two may have been the only others yet abroad this night, their voices echoing in streets silent except for Teo’s tap-tap-shuffle as he headed home. He leaned heavily on his cane. The damp had crept in, knife-like to his bones.
     Unlocking and pushing open the heavy outside door took energy, but the elevator to the penthouse floor chugged on its own, gears squeaking, to drop him in the small foyer. He used a second key, and he was home, wishing his eyelids felt as heavy as his body did.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>From my September 15 release: Sailing out of Darkness<br />
                                   Lonely isn’t lonely if one looks from outside in;<br />
                             It’s just the inside out that makes a person feel so thin.</p>
<p>     Theodore Anderson clawed his way up the bank, grabbing handholds and pressing against rock with his bare feet. Why wouldn’t his legs work? Come on, move, move.<br />
     Kicking only tightened the bindings around his ankles, at his thighs. What was wrong with him?<br />
     The hulk skidded along the asphalt. Tires shrieked and air brakes hissed as the engine howled in protest. Teo turned. The massive silver grille reflected oncoming headlights, blinding him, and all he could do was raise his arms to protect his face, because he was too late. He’d never escape.<br />
     And, dying, he woke.<br />
     He inhaled slowly, letting the breath whoosh out between pursed lips. He was in his room, wrapped in a sheet. No demons roamed, and, while that truck may have jackknifed years ago and thousands of miles away, it was not here in Reggio sul Mare, on the Italian Riviera.<br />
     So, why the dream now and in this place?<br />
     He tossed off the covers, slipped on a pair of jeans and a shirt, and slid his feet into loafers. He couldn’t run off the tension, but he could walk. The tap of his cane on the sidewalk echoed in the pre-dawn.<br />
     Like eyelids closed against the night, metal shutters hid the shop windows. He could picture the butcher’s just there, slabs of meat hanging from hooks, fowl complete with head and feet, prices by the kilo. He passed the greengrocer’s, two stores down. Next, the tabaccaio, which reminded him that he needed to buy stamps when they opened. He knew the shopkeepers by sight after five years of walking these streets, even if he didn’t know all by name.<br />
     In the distance, an engine revved. Most in town would stretch and yawn as they slowly woke. The bakers, though, were even now sliding dough into ovens, yeasty morsels he could buy in a few hours to nibble with a strong espresso. But not yet.<br />
     His tap-tap continued down the hill to the shore where he stepped onto the rocky sand and rebalanced. Waves crested and broke, hidden by the fog, though lights from the nearby hotel illuminated enough beach to keep him from falling. He kicked off his shoes and moved to the water’s edge, then whispered, “Sono qui.”<br />
     That elicited a smile. “I am here,” he repeated.<br />
      Not there. No longer there.<br />
     “Okay, I’m up and out.” He aimed this message skyward. “I assume that’s what you—or someone—wanted.”<br />
     The sea wrapped his ankles and splashed the tip of his cane. The walk had cleared his soggy brain, and the eerie quiet of a mist-clad sea sat well with him. He stood still and listened to the soft slosh as the waves hit sand. But no one spoke, neither God nor man.<br />
     He’d begun to turn away when she stepped out of the fog, white on white with a touch of gray, followed by a flash of light skin and dark hair. Puzzled, he stared.<br />
     Slowly, her form emerged, and a bright smile bridged the dimensions. She beckoned. Did she wave at him? Teo peered over his shoulder and down the beach, but he was alone with only the sand and the sea and this vision before him. He expected to hear witchy moans next—or see a bubbling cauldron. Surely, this wasn’t an angel.<br />
     “Che succede?” he called, wanting to know what was up, along with a why or two, but she didn’t speak. Perhaps she couldn’t.<br />
     The sea sucked the wave, as if the sand inhaled then exhaled, breathing in water and filtering it out like a fish’s gills. He backed away, sliding damp feet into his shoes.<br />
     Lights from the new hotel, the Albergo dei Romantici, illuminated the froth, showing off upturned rowboats that lined the sand like an army slumbering till day. Teo rarely ventured close to the developed boardwalk, but at this hour it seemed appropriate. No one else stirred. He was free to explore.<br />
     This stranger’s appearance wouldn’t seem so odd if she had flesh and form that he could touch. Instead, she shape-shifted in the half light, one moment showing no more than a wispy outline, in the next, substance.<br />
     There, now: a three-dimensional image. She didn’t possess Sophrina’s soft curves or that long, wavy hair. Her lips eased without seduction, an art she didn’t seem to know. Her lashes lowered, but not to shadow Sophrina’s penetrating stare. They dropped to hide her pain.<br />
     How could he know that? He shook his head, puzzled when the understanding dropped into his mind with no prompting from either of them. His eyes snapped closed, then opened to scan the area. Perhaps he was merely dreaming.<br />
     A pleasant dream to make him forget the nightmare? His mind playing tricks?<br />
     He kicked the sand, then scored a trench with his cane. The effect seemed too real for a dream. Besides, a dreamscape normally stopped and rewound before either repeating the sequence or adding some new element.<br />
     Why did his sleep-deprived brain conjure this woman, whose image he didn’t recognize? He’d left his bed, full of the need to walk. He should return and hope for rest.<br />
     Right. As long as this haunting didn’t follow him into sleep.<br />
     Someone laughed from around a corner. A second hushed the first. These two may have been the only others yet abroad this night, their voices echoing in streets silent except for Teo’s tap-tap-shuffle as he headed home. He leaned heavily on his cane. The damp had crept in, knife-like to his bones.<br />
     Unlocking and pushing open the heavy outside door took energy, but the elevator to the penthouse floor chugged on its own, gears squeaking, to drop him in the small foyer. He used a second key, and he was home, wishing his eyelids felt as heavy as his body did.</p>
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		By: writersinthestorm		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[writersinthestorm]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Aug 2013 05:36:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2013/08/your-turn-to-share-your-writing/#comment-37197&quot;&gt;Kaye Munroe&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks for letting us know, Kaye. This has been a fun week with such wonder excerpts to spark my imagination!
-Fae]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2013/08/your-turn-to-share-your-writing/#comment-37197">Kaye Munroe</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks for letting us know, Kaye. This has been a fun week with such wonder excerpts to spark my imagination!<br />
-Fae</p>
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		By: Kaye Munroe		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kaye Munroe]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 24 Aug 2013 20:28:27 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I just wanted to say that I&#039;ve enjoyed reading everyone&#039;s work so much, I saved the WITS email &#038; have come back every day to read the new postings!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just wanted to say that I've enjoyed reading everyone's work so much, I saved the WITS email &amp; have come back every day to read the new postings!</p>
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		By: writersinthestorm		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[writersinthestorm]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 24 Aug 2013 17:31:03 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2013/08/your-turn-to-share-your-writing/#comment-37179&quot;&gt;Carol W P (@Carol_W_P)&lt;/a&gt;.

Sounds like fun on this not-quiet Saturday. Thanks for sharing.
-Fae]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2013/08/your-turn-to-share-your-writing/#comment-37179">Carol W P (@Carol_W_P)</a>.</p>
<p>Sounds like fun on this not-quiet Saturday. Thanks for sharing.<br />
-Fae</p>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[writersinthestorm]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 24 Aug 2013 17:29:39 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2013/08/your-turn-to-share-your-writing/#comment-37182&quot;&gt;Kylie Addison Sabra&lt;/a&gt;.

You did a very nice job of developing poignancy for me as a reader, Kylie. Thanks.
-Fae]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2013/08/your-turn-to-share-your-writing/#comment-37182">Kylie Addison Sabra</a>.</p>
<p>You did a very nice job of developing poignancy for me as a reader, Kylie. Thanks.<br />
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