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		By: jamesr403		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48654</link>

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		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Mar 2014 17:32:52 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48651&quot;&gt;Mrs. Iris Lloyd&lt;/a&gt;.

Hi, Mrs. Lloyd -- you are right about both issues. A large number of characters can be very time-consuming to chart, and a character that only shows up for one line at a party may not be worth it. This is, of course, a judgement call, because the important thing is to write, not to chart, and it sounds like you are doing that (sixth novel, I am impressed!). My take is first, do this exercise at the second draft stage, and second, don&#039;t overdo it. Thanks for the kind words, and keep writing!
Best,
James Preston
PS and I thought I had a lot of cousins at fourteen!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48651">Mrs. Iris Lloyd</a>.</p>
<p>Hi, Mrs. Lloyd -- you are right about both issues. A large number of characters can be very time-consuming to chart, and a character that only shows up for one line at a party may not be worth it. This is, of course, a judgement call, because the important thing is to write, not to chart, and it sounds like you are doing that (sixth novel, I am impressed!). My take is first, do this exercise at the second draft stage, and second, don't overdo it. Thanks for the kind words, and keep writing!<br />
Best,<br />
James Preston<br />
PS and I thought I had a lot of cousins at fourteen!</p>
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		By: Mrs. Iris Lloyd		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Mar 2014 00:24:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I have read your article about charting the lives of characters who are both on and off the page and think it is a sound idea. I have just completed (first draft) my sixth novel and thought I would try it out.
I began with chapter 1, as suggested, and found it certainly rounds off all the characters and builds a whole believable and practical world around them, but have come up with the following problems:
I always write with a cast of thousands - I can&#039;t help it - comes of being born into a large family, I suspect, having 17 blood aunts and uncles and 32 cousins originally! I do manage to keep tabs on all my characters throughout the narrative. However, it takes a long time charting each one through the chapters. Also, it isn&#039;t necessary at, say, a party when a guest moves the plot on by, perhaps, a remark, but is not heard of again.
Secondly, in some of the chapters, the characters don&#039;t stay in one scene but move on in time so that there are two scenarios, which doubles up the charting details. It creates a lot of work.
So, I have come to the conclusion that I won&#039;t do the charting on paper but will keep the concept in my head throughout so that I know where everyone is all the time. I am looking forward to getting to know them all better!
Regards, Iris Lloyd]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have read your article about charting the lives of characters who are both on and off the page and think it is a sound idea. I have just completed (first draft) my sixth novel and thought I would try it out.<br />
I began with chapter 1, as suggested, and found it certainly rounds off all the characters and builds a whole believable and practical world around them, but have come up with the following problems:<br />
I always write with a cast of thousands - I can't help it - comes of being born into a large family, I suspect, having 17 blood aunts and uncles and 32 cousins originally! I do manage to keep tabs on all my characters throughout the narrative. However, it takes a long time charting each one through the chapters. Also, it isn't necessary at, say, a party when a guest moves the plot on by, perhaps, a remark, but is not heard of again.<br />
Secondly, in some of the chapters, the characters don't stay in one scene but move on in time so that there are two scenarios, which doubles up the charting details. It creates a lot of work.<br />
So, I have come to the conclusion that I won't do the charting on paper but will keep the concept in my head throughout so that I know where everyone is all the time. I am looking forward to getting to know them all better!<br />
Regards, Iris Lloyd</p>
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		By: dizzytangerine		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 28 Feb 2014 00:51:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hello! I&#039;ve just nominated your terrific blog for The Lighthouse Award. Acceptance of the nomination is entirely voluntary. You can find out more about the nomination at http://www.theroadtonewbery.wordpress.com

Awesome job! - Kathy]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello! I've just nominated your terrific blog for The Lighthouse Award. Acceptance of the nomination is entirely voluntary. You can find out more about the nomination at <a href="http://www.theroadtonewbery.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow ugc">http://www.theroadtonewbery.wordpress.com</a></p>
<p>Awesome job! - Kathy</p>
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		By: James R. Preston		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[James R. Preston]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Feb 2014 22:08:49 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48633&quot;&gt;Sharla Rae&lt;/a&gt;.

For me each book has started differently. The first was a casual conversation that lived somewhere in my subconscious for years, about how shallow the channel between Catalina and the coast is. The second was also a conversation, but it was two characters walking in and telling me all about their lives. I was the only person who could see them, but it&#039;s okay because I take my meds regularly. Heh heh. All kidding aside, in all cases my stories begin with character, someone I care about. I think about the story until I have some idea of how it works, then I use 4&quot; x 6&quot; cards for many of the scenes. So, like you, I am character, then story. Thanks for asking, Sharla. Maybe at some point Writers in the Storm will offer me t he opportunity to explore this in more detail. Oooh, then I will have to articulate my process; not sure about doing that.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48633">Sharla Rae</a>.</p>
<p>For me each book has started differently. The first was a casual conversation that lived somewhere in my subconscious for years, about how shallow the channel between Catalina and the coast is. The second was also a conversation, but it was two characters walking in and telling me all about their lives. I was the only person who could see them, but it's okay because I take my meds regularly. Heh heh. All kidding aside, in all cases my stories begin with character, someone I care about. I think about the story until I have some idea of how it works, then I use 4" x 6" cards for many of the scenes. So, like you, I am character, then story. Thanks for asking, Sharla. Maybe at some point Writers in the Storm will offer me t he opportunity to explore this in more detail. Oooh, then I will have to articulate my process; not sure about doing that.</p>
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		By: James R. Preston		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48642</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[James R. Preston]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Feb 2014 21:58:43 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48630&quot;&gt;thefanficassassin&lt;/a&gt;.

I agree. Novels are not written by committee, except one years ago called Naked Came the Stranger, which from all reports was awful.  &quot;Too many cooks&quot; is right.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48630">thefanficassassin</a>.</p>
<p>I agree. Novels are not written by committee, except one years ago called Naked Came the Stranger, which from all reports was awful.  "Too many cooks" is right.</p>
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		By: James R. Preston		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48639</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[James R. Preston]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Feb 2014 21:56:17 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48636&quot;&gt;Claire L. Fishback&lt;/a&gt;.

Claire, I&#039;m so glad you like it!  Thank you very much. It is interesting to think about actions outside of the storyline, and can reveal new dimensions to your characters -- I almost want to call them &quot;people&quot; because to us they are. I hope the technique works for you, and good luck!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48636">Claire L. Fishback</a>.</p>
<p>Claire, I'm so glad you like it!  Thank you very much. It is interesting to think about actions outside of the storyline, and can reveal new dimensions to your characters -- I almost want to call them "people" because to us they are. I hope the technique works for you, and good luck!</p>
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		By: Claire L. Fishback		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Claire L. Fishback]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Feb 2014 19:18:26 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[What an amazing and fun way to break down a novel! Great ideas here, for sure. I never thought I might need to know what Character X is doing when Character Y is robbing the liquor store. Fascinating! I can&#039;t wait to employ this technique!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What an amazing and fun way to break down a novel! Great ideas here, for sure. I never thought I might need to know what Character X is doing when Character Y is robbing the liquor store. Fascinating! I can't wait to employ this technique!</p>
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		By: Sharla Rae		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sharla Rae]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Feb 2014 18:32:55 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48573&quot;&gt;James R. Preston&lt;/a&gt;.

James, I&#039;m totally about the character and usually don&#039;t even think about plot points until the 3rd chapter. At that point, I know my characters well and it&#039;s easier to understand how they will maneuver toward my intended ending. Then, after chapter 5, I sit down for a few days and outline the rest of the book. It sometimes changes a but the logic of what has to happen doesn&#039;t. I look forward to hearing how you go about this.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48573">James R. Preston</a>.</p>
<p>James, I'm totally about the character and usually don't even think about plot points until the 3rd chapter. At that point, I know my characters well and it's easier to understand how they will maneuver toward my intended ending. Then, after chapter 5, I sit down for a few days and outline the rest of the book. It sometimes changes a but the logic of what has to happen doesn't. I look forward to hearing how you go about this.</p>
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		By: thefanficassassin		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[thefanficassassin]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Feb 2014 17:47:57 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48627&quot;&gt;James R. Preston&lt;/a&gt;.

I wouldn&#039;t discount it. Especially considering how logic varies from one person, or character, to the next and how that logic processes the pieces of a puzzle into the final picture differently.

The risk of a &quot;too many cooks in the kitchen&quot; scenario leading to the very point of intrigue in the novel becoming convoluted would be high.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/02/chart-your-characters-lives-on-and-off-the-page/#comment-48627">James R. Preston</a>.</p>
<p>I wouldn't discount it. Especially considering how logic varies from one person, or character, to the next and how that logic processes the pieces of a puzzle into the final picture differently.</p>
<p>The risk of a "too many cooks in the kitchen" scenario leading to the very point of intrigue in the novel becoming convoluted would be high.</p>
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		By: James R. Preston		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[James R. Preston]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Feb 2014 17:23:04 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hey, Assassin, thanks for the comment and the reblog! I appreciate that a reviewer sees how this Second-draft work can fix issues, mostly logical. As one reader of this blog pointed out, mystery readers in particular look at logical issues. It just struck me -- I wonder if that&#039;s why so many mysteries are first-person? Easier to track? Just a thought.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, Assassin, thanks for the comment and the reblog! I appreciate that a reviewer sees how this Second-draft work can fix issues, mostly logical. As one reader of this blog pointed out, mystery readers in particular look at logical issues. It just struck me -- I wonder if that's why so many mysteries are first-person? Easier to track? Just a thought.</p>
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