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		By: sjmn60		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51741</link>

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		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Apr 2014 12:39:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Great blog, Sharla! Now I&#039;ve got to sit down and think up some cool descriptions for crowds in the Dark Age and medieval periods, lol. That&#039;s going to be fun. I&#039;ve only used a (small) crowd once in my stories to ratchet up the tension and I think it worked very well to emphasize an aspect of my hero&#039;s character.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great blog, Sharla! Now I've got to sit down and think up some cool descriptions for crowds in the Dark Age and medieval periods, lol. That's going to be fun. I've only used a (small) crowd once in my stories to ratchet up the tension and I think it worked very well to emphasize an aspect of my hero's character.</p>
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		By: sbjamestheauthor		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Apr 2014 11:28:49 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;ve used crowds a few times in this one book I&#039;m writing. It&#039;s inevitable when the action takes place in a city. Crowds create great tension. I love the list you put the together!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I've used crowds a few times in this one book I'm writing. It's inevitable when the action takes place in a city. Crowds create great tension. I love the list you put the together!</p>
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		By: Sharla Rae		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sharla Rae]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Apr 2014 17:19:42 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51705&quot;&gt;MaryTate&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks Mary. I&#039;m with you on the crowd thing and emotions. But then when I watch TV and hear about another child abuse case or stolen child, I bawl my eyes out too. I can&#039;t help but think, what if that were my grandchild.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51705">MaryTate</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks Mary. I'm with you on the crowd thing and emotions. But then when I watch TV and hear about another child abuse case or stolen child, I bawl my eyes out too. I can't help but think, what if that were my grandchild.</p>
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		By: Sharla Rae		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51732</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sharla Rae]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Apr 2014 00:51:43 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51717&quot;&gt;Vanessa&lt;/a&gt;.

Is &quot;a fidget of children&quot; listed as a group of children somewhere? Heaven knows they do fidget. :)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51717">Vanessa</a>.</p>
<p>Is "a fidget of children" listed as a group of children somewhere? Heaven knows they do fidget. 🙂</p>
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		By: Sharla Rae		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51729</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sharla Rae]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Apr 2014 00:49:56 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51714&quot;&gt;Jacques Bybee&lt;/a&gt;.

I found the &quot;congress&quot; term on a site that gives the names of groups of particular animals. Maybe it&#039;s wrong but you have to admit it would be great use in many situations esp. if the group of people happen to be members of Congress. Ha! I did check out another site and they listed troop and Falange as a group of baboons. So perhaps I stand corrected. :)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51714">Jacques Bybee</a>.</p>
<p>I found the "congress" term on a site that gives the names of groups of particular animals. Maybe it's wrong but you have to admit it would be great use in many situations esp. if the group of people happen to be members of Congress. Ha! I did check out another site and they listed troop and Falange as a group of baboons. So perhaps I stand corrected. 🙂</p>
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		By: Sharla Rae		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51726</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sharla Rae]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Apr 2014 00:45:25 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51711&quot;&gt;Patricia Stoltey&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks for stopping in Patricia. Using crowds seems a small thing but if you put your character into the situation of a crowd it&#039;s good to watch her reactions and ask yourself why she reacted that way? Even if you later scrap the scene and put it in your x-files, the exercise will have taught you something about your character&#039;s personality.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51711">Patricia Stoltey</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks for stopping in Patricia. Using crowds seems a small thing but if you put your character into the situation of a crowd it's good to watch her reactions and ask yourself why she reacted that way? Even if you later scrap the scene and put it in your x-files, the exercise will have taught you something about your character's personality.</p>
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		By: Orly Konig-Lopez		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Orly Konig-Lopez]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Apr 2014 23:10:07 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51687&quot;&gt;lynhorner&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks, Lyn!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51687">lynhorner</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks, Lyn!</p>
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		By: Orly Konig-Lopez		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Orly Konig-Lopez]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Apr 2014 23:08:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51654&quot;&gt;Caffe Maggieato&lt;/a&gt;.

Glad you found it helpful. :-)]]></description>
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<p>Glad you found it helpful. 🙂</p>
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		By: Vanessa		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/04/using-a-crowd-to-create-tension-in-your-story/#comment-51717</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Vanessa]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Apr 2014 22:23:21 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Very useful and helpful; I can think of places to use a crowd in my current WIP. Thanks so much! I love collective nouns - I had to make up one for a group of children and decided on &#039;a fidget of children&#039;.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Very useful and helpful; I can think of places to use a crowd in my current WIP. Thanks so much! I love collective nouns - I had to make up one for a group of children and decided on 'a fidget of children'.</p>
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		By: Jacques Bybee		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jacques Bybee]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Apr 2014 21:40:38 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thanks for a great - I truly mean that a GREAT idea! I&#039;m certain, as I re-write parts of the Siege of Mahikeng (Mafeking) [South Africa], for my historical fiction ms., The Journal of Rudd,  that a crowd is certainly needed. Thank You.
BTW - In Africa, the collective noun for baboons is: a troop of baboons. Congress? Never heard that before, but currently, as in U.S.... yabetcha!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for a great - I truly mean that a GREAT idea! I'm certain, as I re-write parts of the Siege of Mahikeng (Mafeking) [South Africa], for my historical fiction ms., The Journal of Rudd,  that a crowd is certainly needed. Thank You.<br />
BTW - In Africa, the collective noun for baboons is: a troop of baboons. Congress? Never heard that before, but currently, as in U.S.... yabetcha!</p>
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