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	Comments on: Margie’s Rule # 6:  Make Your Opening Pop!	</title>
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		By: Jenny Hansen		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-65055</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenny Hansen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Nov 2014 03:43:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64833&quot;&gt;Margie Lawson&lt;/a&gt;.

Awwwww. I&#039;m proud of her too, Margie! She&#039;s worked hard and come a very long way. :-)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64833">Margie Lawson</a>.</p>
<p>Awwwww. I'm proud of her too, Margie! She's worked hard and come a very long way. 🙂</p>
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		<title>
		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-65043</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 13 Nov 2014 21:53:42 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64764&quot;&gt;Jenny Hansen&lt;/a&gt;.

Jenny --

I loved working with you in Immersion class. Your new title is a WINNER!

Rosaries Make Bad Thongs -- so perfect for your book!

Thanks so much for setting up the blog. Fabulous!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64764">Jenny Hansen</a>.</p>
<p>Jenny --</p>
<p>I loved working with you in Immersion class. Your new title is a WINNER!</p>
<p>Rosaries Make Bad Thongs -- so perfect for your book!</p>
<p>Thanks so much for setting up the blog. Fabulous!</p>
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		By: Make Your Opening Pop! &#124; Jen&#039;s Pen Den		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-65034</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Make Your Opening Pop! &#124; Jen&#039;s Pen Den]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 13 Nov 2014 16:26:31 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] I came upon this article by Margie Lawson this week: Margie’s Rule # 6: Make Your Opening Pop! In it, she discusses the do&#8217;s and don&#8217;ts of your story&#8217;s opening, as well [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] I came upon this article by Margie Lawson this week: Margie’s Rule # 6: Make Your Opening Pop! In it, she discusses the do&#8217;s and don&#8217;ts of your story&#8217;s opening, as well [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: ericjbaker		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64914</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[ericjbaker]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Nov 2014 00:02:39 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Inert storytelling is a book killer for me. Give me a world where the characters have no choice but to act. If a story could end on any random page without consequence for the heroes, it&#039;s got problems.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Inert storytelling is a book killer for me. Give me a world where the characters have no choice but to act. If a story could end on any random page without consequence for the heroes, it's got problems.</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64908</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Nov 2014 21:32:10 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64761&quot;&gt;Julie Glover&lt;/a&gt;.

Hello Two-Time Immersion-Grad Julie G!

I love working with you and your characters. Such smooth and empowered writing. I know I&#039;ll see your characters in print!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64761">Julie Glover</a>.</p>
<p>Hello Two-Time Immersion-Grad Julie G!</p>
<p>I love working with you and your characters. Such smooth and empowered writing. I know I'll see your characters in print!</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64902</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Nov 2014 19:46:18 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64749&quot;&gt;Helen Mongillo&lt;/a&gt;.

Hello Helen M!

Thank you! All the Lawson Writer&#039;s Academy dig deep and work with writers in the classroom just like I do. 

They impress me. I&#039;m proud to have them on the LWA faculty. 

I love my Mac Air. It&#039;s only three days old, and I feel like my Mac Air and I are one.  Cliche alert.  :-)

Mine will go to Florida tomorrow, and Washington, D.C. next week. Both trips are to teach Immersion classes. I&#039;m sure my light weight Mac Air will make me a happy working-in-airports-and-on-planes traveler!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64749">Helen Mongillo</a>.</p>
<p>Hello Helen M!</p>
<p>Thank you! All the Lawson Writer's Academy dig deep and work with writers in the classroom just like I do. </p>
<p>They impress me. I'm proud to have them on the LWA faculty. </p>
<p>I love my Mac Air. It's only three days old, and I feel like my Mac Air and I are one.  Cliche alert.  🙂</p>
<p>Mine will go to Florida tomorrow, and Washington, D.C. next week. Both trips are to teach Immersion classes. I'm sure my light weight Mac Air will make me a happy working-in-airports-and-on-planes traveler!</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64896</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Nov 2014 19:38:57 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64737&quot;&gt;LauraDrake&lt;/a&gt;.

Laura --

I know you never stop learning. You&#039;re a learning machine!  And it shows in your uber-strong writing. 

Kudos to you!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64737">LauraDrake</a>.</p>
<p>Laura --</p>
<p>I know you never stop learning. You're a learning machine!  And it shows in your uber-strong writing. </p>
<p>Kudos to you!</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64893</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Nov 2014 19:37:04 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64728&quot;&gt;Holly Robinson&lt;/a&gt;.

Hello Holly --

I&#039;m all about teaching the how-to&#039;s of deep editing. I developed psychological based deep editing tips, techniques, and systems. My courses are loaded with new ideas and examples and deep edit analyses.

If you haven&#039;t taken any of my online courses, or ordered the lecture packets for my courses, check out the course description for Empowering Characters&#039; Emotions. It&#039;s on my web site. Click on LECTURE PACKETS on the horizontal menu bar under the airplane header.  

If you have questions, please email me.

Love your on-screen energy!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64728">Holly Robinson</a>.</p>
<p>Hello Holly --</p>
<p>I'm all about teaching the how-to's of deep editing. I developed psychological based deep editing tips, techniques, and systems. My courses are loaded with new ideas and examples and deep edit analyses.</p>
<p>If you haven't taken any of my online courses, or ordered the lecture packets for my courses, check out the course description for Empowering Characters' Emotions. It's on my web site. Click on LECTURE PACKETS on the horizontal menu bar under the airplane header.  </p>
<p>If you have questions, please email me.</p>
<p>Love your on-screen energy!</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64890</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Nov 2014 19:28:41 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64725&quot;&gt;danamarton&lt;/a&gt;.

Dana --

I&#039;m sad you couldn&#039;t make the Immersion class in Washington, D.C. too.  

I&#039;m teaching 17 of those 5-day intensives next year. I&#039;m counting on seeing you in one of those Immersion classes!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64725">danamarton</a>.</p>
<p>Dana --</p>
<p>I'm sad you couldn't make the Immersion class in Washington, D.C. too.  </p>
<p>I'm teaching 17 of those 5-day intensives next year. I'm counting on seeing you in one of those Immersion classes!</p>
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		By: A. C. Cockerill		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2014/11/margies-rule-6-make-your-opening-pop/#comment-64887</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[A. C. Cockerill]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Nov 2014 19:25:36 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Perfect timing as always, Margie! I needed this reminder, this week. :-) Cheers, Ashley]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Perfect timing as always, Margie! I needed this reminder, this week. 🙂 Cheers, Ashley</p>
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