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		By: Tiffany Yates Martin		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81519</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Tiffany Yates Martin]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Apr 2015 18:03:20 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81441&quot;&gt;Anne&lt;/a&gt;.

That&#039;s so great to hear! (Not your challenges in your writing...but that this helped...) :) Hope revisions go really well, Anne. Thanks for your comment!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81441">Anne</a>.</p>
<p>That's so great to hear! (Not your challenges in your writing...but that this helped...) 🙂 Hope revisions go really well, Anne. Thanks for your comment!</p>
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		By: Anne		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Apr 2015 05:03:12 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is so great. A welcome jolt of how it can be better. I have been staring at a scene in my WIP and knew it was going to fall flat because the story is at the point where tension needs to be running high in the protag. The reader needs to FEEL it as it grows and grows. I vaguely told myself the reader would have to &#039;latch on&#039; and not let go till the big &#039;fall&#039; came... Just so they could fall too, but nothing I did was working well, only because I couldn&#039;t articulate this in my head. - Not making much sense, but just so you know, this post helped put everything into perspective. It really, really did. Thank you!!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is so great. A welcome jolt of how it can be better. I have been staring at a scene in my WIP and knew it was going to fall flat because the story is at the point where tension needs to be running high in the protag. The reader needs to FEEL it as it grows and grows. I vaguely told myself the reader would have to 'latch on' and not let go till the big 'fall' came... Just so they could fall too, but nothing I did was working well, only because I couldn't articulate this in my head. - Not making much sense, but just so you know, this post helped put everything into perspective. It really, really did. Thank you!!</p>
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		By: Tiffany Yates Martin		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81417</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Tiffany Yates Martin]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 26 Apr 2015 16:39:09 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81297&quot;&gt;Orly Konig Lopez&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks, Orly! Always happy to be here.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81297">Orly Konig Lopez</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks, Orly! Always happy to be here.</p>
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		By: Tiffany Yates Martin		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81414</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Tiffany Yates Martin]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 26 Apr 2015 16:38:30 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81384&quot;&gt;Susan A. Jennings&lt;/a&gt;.

I&#039;m so glad, Susan! Sometimes images like that are the easiest way to keep a storytelling technique in the forefront of our minds. Thanks for your note!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81384">Susan A. Jennings</a>.</p>
<p>I'm so glad, Susan! Sometimes images like that are the easiest way to keep a storytelling technique in the forefront of our minds. Thanks for your note!</p>
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		By: Susan A. Jennings		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Susan A. Jennings]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 25 Apr 2015 21:03:27 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Tiffany,I enjoyed this article. The lizard brain is going to stick in my brain every time I write a scene with suspense. The primary fear, excellent. Thank you.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tiffany,I enjoyed this article. The lizard brain is going to stick in my brain every time I write a scene with suspense. The primary fear, excellent. Thank you.</p>
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		By: Orly Konig Lopez		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81297</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Orly Konig Lopez]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 24 Apr 2015 13:23:50 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m late to the lizard party. Great to see you here, Tiffany! Thanks for blogging with us. :-)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I'm late to the lizard party. Great to see you here, Tiffany! Thanks for blogging with us. 🙂</p>
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		By: Tiffany Yates Martin		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81265</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Tiffany Yates Martin]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Apr 2015 14:24:32 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81259&quot;&gt;wendyleslie&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks for the note, Wendy. Glad it was helpful.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81259">wendyleslie</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks for the note, Wendy. Glad it was helpful.</p>
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		By: Tiffany Yates Martin		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81262</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Tiffany Yates Martin]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Apr 2015 14:23:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81256&quot;&gt;littlemissw&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank you! That&#039;s nice to hear--glad it helped.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/04/creating-tension-with-lizard-brain-writing/#comment-81256">littlemissw</a>.</p>
<p>Thank you! That's nice to hear--glad it helped.</p>
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		By: wendyleslie		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Apr 2015 11:30:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thank you, Tiffany. A clear cut solution to building tension and getting rid of endless fluffy writing. I can see the &quot;find&quot; tab working overtime. 
Cheers, Wendy]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Tiffany. A clear cut solution to building tension and getting rid of endless fluffy writing. I can see the "find" tab working overtime.<br />
Cheers, Wendy</p>
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		By: littlemissw		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[littlemissw]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Apr 2015 03:31:27 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Excellent. This is the clearest explanation of how to write tension I&#039;ve read in ages. Thanks for the tips.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent. This is the clearest explanation of how to write tension I've read in ages. Thanks for the tips.</p>
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