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		By: Last Weeks Links 9/14-9/19 &#124; B. Shaun Smith		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Last Weeks Links 9/14-9/19 &#124; B. Shaun Smith]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Sep 2015 20:42:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: The Dreaded Show vs. Tell with Shannon Donnelly #writersinthestorm #writingtips &#124; Wicked Dragon Writer Solutions		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 31 Aug 2015 07:37:42 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] Check out the article Tell Better; Show More at the link below or click HERE. [&#8230;]]]></description>
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		By: jeandaly		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 13 Jul 2015 19:16:09 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m looking forward to checking out your online courses. This post is extremely helpful. Thanks. I&#039;ll pass it on.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I'm looking forward to checking out your online courses. This post is extremely helpful. Thanks. I'll pass it on.</p>
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		By: marsharwest		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 11 Jul 2015 17:09:53 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[So glad I saved this post. Didn&#039;t realize it was you writing about Showing vs Telling, Shannon. Quite a few years ago I took your on line course, which helped me so much. I was clueless about the difference, and contest judges kept telling me I showed way too much. These tips are all good reminders. Now probably my biggest issue in #1. I have to watch having the character in dialogue tell something, I should&#039;ve shown. Cliche alert! The pendulum swings. LOL  Thanks so much for this. I&#039;ll share.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So glad I saved this post. Didn't realize it was you writing about Showing vs Telling, Shannon. Quite a few years ago I took your on line course, which helped me so much. I was clueless about the difference, and contest judges kept telling me I showed way too much. These tips are all good reminders. Now probably my biggest issue in #1. I have to watch having the character in dialogue tell something, I should've shown. Cliche alert! The pendulum swings. LOL  Thanks so much for this. I'll share.</p>
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		By: How to Reveal More &#124; jean&#039;s writing		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Jul 2015 13:02:23 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] Thanks to Writers in the Storm for a great post by Shannon Donnelly &#8211; Tell Better; Show More [&#8230;]]]></description>
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		By: Jim in Montana		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/07/tell-better-show-more/#comment-88106</link>

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		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Jul 2015 19:07:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/07/tell-better-show-more/#comment-88070&quot;&gt;sharon miller&lt;/a&gt;.

Personally, I tend to stop reading a book that&#039;s mostly tell. Otherwise the narrative has to be pretty darn compelling to hold my interest. I do read a fair amount of non-fiction where the author is telling about something or other and laying their views out. I will hang in there with telling fiction if the world of the story is really interesting to me. Some classic espionage stories fall in this category.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/07/tell-better-show-more/#comment-88070">sharon miller</a>.</p>
<p>Personally, I tend to stop reading a book that's mostly tell. Otherwise the narrative has to be pretty darn compelling to hold my interest. I do read a fair amount of non-fiction where the author is telling about something or other and laying their views out. I will hang in there with telling fiction if the world of the story is really interesting to me. Some classic espionage stories fall in this category.</p>
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		By: ramblingsfromtheleft		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/07/tell-better-show-more/#comment-88097</link>

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		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Jul 2015 15:48:24 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Shannon, could not get here in a timely fashion yesterday, so here I am now :)

I love this post. I love all your posts. Let me ask you a question about dialogue tags. It gets tired for me as a writer and as a reader to feel the need to &quot;&quot;describe&quot;&quot; to extract emotional meaning or to highlight tags ... when all I really want to do is let the characters talk for themselves. There is a school that poo-poos the ... he said ... she said ... but honestly it works to keep the words flowing while giving the reader a pause.

The question is:  when is it too damn much to give each dialogue tag such importance when we can just stick to &quot;smirk&quot; or &quot;smile&quot; and get on with what&#039;s important ... what the character is saying ??  Hope you get to me later :)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Shannon, could not get here in a timely fashion yesterday, so here I am now 🙂</p>
<p>I love this post. I love all your posts. Let me ask you a question about dialogue tags. It gets tired for me as a writer and as a reader to feel the need to ""describe"" to extract emotional meaning or to highlight tags ... when all I really want to do is let the characters talk for themselves. There is a school that poo-poos the ... he said ... she said ... but honestly it works to keep the words flowing while giving the reader a pause.</p>
<p>The question is:  when is it too damn much to give each dialogue tag such importance when we can just stick to "smirk" or "smile" and get on with what's important ... what the character is saying ??  Hope you get to me later 🙂</p>
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		By: Barrett		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Jul 2015 15:15:50 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Very helpful, thank you!]]></description>
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		By: sharon miller		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/07/tell-better-show-more/#comment-88070</link>

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		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Jul 2015 03:36:49 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Excellent advice, things I need to be reminded about regularly. So now I have a question: I read (or tried to read) a recently self-published book that has gotten rave reviews, even winning one of the Hoffer awards, but it is almost 100% telling. Very little dialogue, and tons of history and exposition in every chapter. Even when the author has two characters in the same scene, they often don&#039;t talk. We just get into their heads and learn what they think and there&#039;s minimal interaction between them. I don&#039;t know what to think, because it goes against everything I believe about good writing, but yet the critics and the Hoffer judges love it. I&#039;m afraid we are looking at a sea change in writing, and it worries me. If you want to know the title and author, email me if my addresss is available to you.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent advice, things I need to be reminded about regularly. So now I have a question: I read (or tried to read) a recently self-published book that has gotten rave reviews, even winning one of the Hoffer awards, but it is almost 100% telling. Very little dialogue, and tons of history and exposition in every chapter. Even when the author has two characters in the same scene, they often don't talk. We just get into their heads and learn what they think and there's minimal interaction between them. I don't know what to think, because it goes against everything I believe about good writing, but yet the critics and the Hoffer judges love it. I'm afraid we are looking at a sea change in writing, and it worries me. If you want to know the title and author, email me if my addresss is available to you.</p>
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		By: Mary Hagen		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2015/07/tell-better-show-more/#comment-88046</link>

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		<pubDate>Mon, 06 Jul 2015 21:41:15 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Very good suggestions.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Very good suggestions.</p>
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