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		By: Writing Links Round Up 5/16-5/21 &#8211; B. Shaun Smith		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Writing Links Round Up 5/16-5/21 &#8211; B. Shaun Smith]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 May 2016 20:33:45 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] Escalate Story Tension with Dirty Fighting [&#8230;]]]></description>
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		By: littlemissw		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105926</link>

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		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Feb 2016 06:47:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105914&quot;&gt;Jenny Hansen&lt;/a&gt;.

Oh no, no WiFi! That is seriously a nightmare scenario in my book. There&#039;s no rush, just thought I&#039;d check in. :)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105914">Jenny Hansen</a>.</p>
<p>Oh no, no WiFi! That is seriously a nightmare scenario in my book. There's no rush, just thought I'd check in. 🙂</p>
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		By: Jenny Hansen		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenny Hansen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Feb 2016 22:41:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105908&quot;&gt;littlemissw&lt;/a&gt;.

She will - she&#039;s been housesitting with no WiFi. She&#039;ll be back soon!!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105908">littlemissw</a>.</p>
<p>She will - she's been housesitting with no WiFi. She'll be back soon!!</p>
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		By: littlemissw		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105908</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[littlemissw]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Feb 2016 21:12:27 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105110&quot;&gt;TiffanyLawsonlnman NakedEditor&lt;/a&gt;.

Hi Tiffany. I hope you&#039;ll still have a chance to do the scene edits. If you do get a chance it will very much appreciated. :0)]]></description>
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<p>Hi Tiffany. I hope you'll still have a chance to do the scene edits. If you do get a chance it will very much appreciated. :0)</p>
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		By: Jenny Hansen		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105332</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenny Hansen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Feb 2016 20:46:25 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105110&quot;&gt;TiffanyLawsonlnman NakedEditor&lt;/a&gt;.

We understand! Just post when you&#039;re back.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105110">TiffanyLawsonlnman NakedEditor</a>.</p>
<p>We understand! Just post when you're back.</p>
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		By: littlemissw		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105131</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[littlemissw]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Feb 2016 05:27:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105110&quot;&gt;TiffanyLawsonlnman NakedEditor&lt;/a&gt;.

Oh dear! Good luck! And keep safe.]]></description>
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<p>Oh dear! Good luck! And keep safe.</p>
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		By: Heather W.		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105125</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Heather W.]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Feb 2016 23:24:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is really useful!  My family is actually really bad... for fighting cleanly.  It doesn&#039;t help write realistic fights.  Fights rarely escalate like I&#039;ve seen in other families or even amongst my friends.  So seeing these were eye opening!  And beyond useful.  :D  Thank you!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is really useful!  My family is actually really bad... for fighting cleanly.  It doesn't help write realistic fights.  Fights rarely escalate like I've seen in other families or even amongst my friends.  So seeing these were eye opening!  And beyond useful.  😀  Thank you!</p>
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		By: TiffanyLawsonlnman NakedEditor		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[TiffanyLawsonlnman NakedEditor]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Feb 2016 14:57:29 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Last 14 hours I&#039;ve been in a windstorm that keeps knocking out my internet and power.  Been knocked off the site trying to post the edited scenes a few times with loss of internet, I will be back down to the flatlands by tomorrow and will post the winning scenes then.    When do I get a window of being ON, my priority right now is posting to the class I am teaching.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Last 14 hours I've been in a windstorm that keeps knocking out my internet and power.  Been knocked off the site trying to post the edited scenes a few times with loss of internet, I will be back down to the flatlands by tomorrow and will post the winning scenes then.    When do I get a window of being ON, my priority right now is posting to the class I am teaching.</p>
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		By: carrienichols		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/02/escalate-story-tension-with-dirty-fighting/#comment-105101</link>

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		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Feb 2016 00:30:03 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I hope I&#039;m not to late but I have been deep in edits with my novella and only now coming up for air. Here&#039;s a fight scene from Snowbound with the Stork. My heroine is pregnant with the hero&#039;s baby and they&#039;re trapped in a snowstorm trying to hash things out. And they aren&#039;t fighting fair or saying what&#039;s really wrong.

He took a gulp of water and wiped his mouth on his sleeve. “Ted’s ex didn’t move two hours away. Joyce stayed in Granger where she belonged.”

“She stayed where she belonged?” Hadley&#039;s face flushed an angry red. “What sort of misogynistic sh*t is that?”

“You’re two hours away. You’re setting yourself up to be a single parent. Is that what you want?” He needed to get her back to Granger where he could at least try and protect her. Not that he had a very good track record protecting loved ones, but he had to try if he wanted to look himself in the mirror ever again. He refused to give up trying to do better for her, be better for her. What would have happened to him if Pete had given up? 

“I might not always be single, Quinn.” She popped a cookie into her mouth and gave him the stink eye him as she chewed, slow and thoughtful, then sipped her water.

Did she have someone in Chattanooga? That thought was a dull knife to the gut. “What the hell does that mean?” 

“I’ll have you know that up until a couple months ago men at work were hitting on me.”

Her words battered him like artillery fire. This was bullshit. Men were hitting on his Hadley? Like hell, he’d let that happen. He slammed his water bottle down. “Sh*t, Hadley! If you think I’m going to stand around on the sidelines and watch some other man be a father to my little girl, then you’d better think again.”

She slammed her bottle down. “Do you think I’m going to stay single the rest of my life to bolster your sagging ego?”

“No, I expect you to marry me and be a proper family, like we’re supposed to be.” Sweet Jesus, did he just yell a proposal at her? Oh yeah, that’s not going to be good.  
 
“Marry you! That is the most screwed up proposal I’ve ever heard.”]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I hope I'm not to late but I have been deep in edits with my novella and only now coming up for air. Here's a fight scene from Snowbound with the Stork. My heroine is pregnant with the hero's baby and they're trapped in a snowstorm trying to hash things out. And they aren't fighting fair or saying what's really wrong.</p>
<p>He took a gulp of water and wiped his mouth on his sleeve. “Ted’s ex didn’t move two hours away. Joyce stayed in Granger where she belonged.”</p>
<p>“She stayed where she belonged?” Hadley's face flushed an angry red. “What sort of misogynistic sh*t is that?”</p>
<p>“You’re two hours away. You’re setting yourself up to be a single parent. Is that what you want?” He needed to get her back to Granger where he could at least try and protect her. Not that he had a very good track record protecting loved ones, but he had to try if he wanted to look himself in the mirror ever again. He refused to give up trying to do better for her, be better for her. What would have happened to him if Pete had given up? </p>
<p>“I might not always be single, Quinn.” She popped a cookie into her mouth and gave him the stink eye him as she chewed, slow and thoughtful, then sipped her water.</p>
<p>Did she have someone in Chattanooga? That thought was a dull knife to the gut. “What the hell does that mean?” </p>
<p>“I’ll have you know that up until a couple months ago men at work were hitting on me.”</p>
<p>Her words battered him like artillery fire. This was bullshit. Men were hitting on his Hadley? Like hell, he’d let that happen. He slammed his water bottle down. “Sh*t, Hadley! If you think I’m going to stand around on the sidelines and watch some other man be a father to my little girl, then you’d better think again.”</p>
<p>She slammed her bottle down. “Do you think I’m going to stay single the rest of my life to bolster your sagging ego?”</p>
<p>“No, I expect you to marry me and be a proper family, like we’re supposed to be.” Sweet Jesus, did he just yell a proposal at her? Oh yeah, that’s not going to be good.  </p>
<p>“Marry you! That is the most screwed up proposal I’ve ever heard.”</p>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[lalouziane]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Feb 2016 21:27:18 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is very informative. I&#039;m going to be referring to this for awhile. Thanks for the post.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is very informative. I'm going to be referring to this for awhile. Thanks for the post.</p>
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