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		By: Be ready for #NaNoPrep &#124; Ronel the Mythmaker		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Be ready for #NaNoPrep &#124; Ronel the Mythmaker]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Oct 2016 10:18:55 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] is my main character? (I’ll know everything about her/him. Best childhood friend, worst moment, favourite colour, why she despises tea, [&#8230;]]]></description>
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		By: angelaackerman1		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Aug 2016 21:23:42 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/06/how-to-deliver-critical-backstory-using-the-setting/#comment-114190&quot;&gt;Calisa Rhose&lt;/a&gt;.

So very glad it helps, Calisa. I think scenes where the backstory is especially painful are the hardest to write--glad you worked through it.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/06/how-to-deliver-critical-backstory-using-the-setting/#comment-114190">Calisa Rhose</a>.</p>
<p>So very glad it helps, Calisa. I think scenes where the backstory is especially painful are the hardest to write--glad you worked through it.</p>
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		By: Calisa Rhose		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 08 Jul 2016 00:26:56 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[What a wonderful post, Angela! The hardest backstory I had to do was for a war hero who had PTSD and the horrible memories that caused it. That was painful for me to write because it was such a horrendous memory for him (it still makes me cry), and it was so hard to get it just right to convey what I needed, but not what I didn&#039;t to get the scene on the page without an info dump. Thanks for this clarification.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What a wonderful post, Angela! The hardest backstory I had to do was for a war hero who had PTSD and the horrible memories that caused it. That was painful for me to write because it was such a horrendous memory for him (it still makes me cry), and it was so hard to get it just right to convey what I needed, but not what I didn't to get the scene on the page without an info dump. Thanks for this clarification.</p>
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		By: Victoria Marie Lees		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Victoria Marie Lees]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 28 Jun 2016 21:46:31 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/06/how-to-deliver-critical-backstory-using-the-setting/#comment-113627&quot;&gt;angelaackerman1&lt;/a&gt;.

Now I agree with using snippets and dialogue to tuck in any back details that are necessary to move the present action forward.  I did this in my first story sold to Cricket where the mother died and that was why the teen was watching her brother while the Dad worked.  Then some details as to how the teen knew certain knowledge to better the present situation and get the kids out of trouble.  Thanks so much for this, Angela!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/06/how-to-deliver-critical-backstory-using-the-setting/#comment-113627">angelaackerman1</a>.</p>
<p>Now I agree with using snippets and dialogue to tuck in any back details that are necessary to move the present action forward.  I did this in my first story sold to Cricket where the mother died and that was why the teen was watching her brother while the Dad worked.  Then some details as to how the teen knew certain knowledge to better the present situation and get the kids out of trouble.  Thanks so much for this, Angela!</p>
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		By: angelaackerman1		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 28 Jun 2016 20:05:35 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/06/how-to-deliver-critical-backstory-using-the-setting/#comment-113492&quot;&gt;Victoria Marie Lees&lt;/a&gt;.

It&#039;s hard to answer this without knowing just how important the story is on the current story, but my advice is to really challenge yourself as to whether the backstory is needed. If you take it out, are the story stakes no longer clear? Is the character&#039;s motivation uncertain? 

You can include it at any word count, but any backstory you include must FURTHER the story in some way, ADD something important that ties into the current scene (context) and be something where it can not be delivered in another way (such as symbolism, etc.) The shorter the story, the more I would look into what you could do through dialogue and symbolism, and whether alluding to something (such as a past trauma or event) is all you need, rather than showing it more fully. 

With children&#039;s magazine fiction, you especially don&#039;t want to pull readers away from the current story (as would happen if you used flashbacks). So if you include some, make it a snippet, such as a detail that suggests something important, or symbolizes a reason behind a behavior, an emotion, etc.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/06/how-to-deliver-critical-backstory-using-the-setting/#comment-113492">Victoria Marie Lees</a>.</p>
<p>It's hard to answer this without knowing just how important the story is on the current story, but my advice is to really challenge yourself as to whether the backstory is needed. If you take it out, are the story stakes no longer clear? Is the character's motivation uncertain? </p>
<p>You can include it at any word count, but any backstory you include must FURTHER the story in some way, ADD something important that ties into the current scene (context) and be something where it can not be delivered in another way (such as symbolism, etc.) The shorter the story, the more I would look into what you could do through dialogue and symbolism, and whether alluding to something (such as a past trauma or event) is all you need, rather than showing it more fully. </p>
<p>With children's magazine fiction, you especially don't want to pull readers away from the current story (as would happen if you used flashbacks). So if you include some, make it a snippet, such as a detail that suggests something important, or symbolizes a reason behind a behavior, an emotion, etc.</p>
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		By: Motifs and Symbols and Themes – Oh My! - Kindle Publishing		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 28 Jun 2016 15:55:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] and fun to use, because they’re shortcuts; you don’t have to keep reminding the reader with flashbacks and backstory – you can have them look at the symbol, and the reader gets [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] and fun to use, because they’re shortcuts; you don’t have to keep reminding the reader with flashbacks and backstory – you can have them look at the symbol, and the reader gets [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Writing Links Round Up 6/20-6/25 &#8211; B. Shaun Smith		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Jun 2016 20:22:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: Victoria Marie Lees		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Victoria Marie Lees]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Jun 2016 00:52:33 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is excellent information, Angela! Thank you so much for sharing this with writers.  I learn so much here and share it generously online.  I write mostly YA short adventure stories and need to watch how much backstory I offer.  Word count is very tight, like 1800 words in the Cricket Magazine market.  Yet I feel some short clips of backstory are needed even in short story to explain why the MC feels the way he/she does.  What are your takes, Angela, on including backstory in short stories--especially YA short stories with tight word counts?  Oh and by the way, I need to get a Pinterest account to be able to see your tip sheet.  I&#039;m very interested in seeing that.  Thanks for all you do to assist writers.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is excellent information, Angela! Thank you so much for sharing this with writers.  I learn so much here and share it generously online.  I write mostly YA short adventure stories and need to watch how much backstory I offer.  Word count is very tight, like 1800 words in the Cricket Magazine market.  Yet I feel some short clips of backstory are needed even in short story to explain why the MC feels the way he/she does.  What are your takes, Angela, on including backstory in short stories--especially YA short stories with tight word counts?  Oh and by the way, I need to get a Pinterest account to be able to see your tip sheet.  I'm very interested in seeing that.  Thanks for all you do to assist writers.</p>
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		By: Motifs and Symbols and Themes--Oh My! &#124; Writers In The Storm		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 24 Jun 2016 13:12:56 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] and fun to use, because they’re shortcuts; you don’t have to keep reminding the reader with flashbacks and backstory – you can have them look at the symbol, and the reader gets [&#8230;]]]></description>
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		By: Top Picks Thursday: For Readers and Writers 06-23-2016 &#124; The Author Chronicles		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Top Picks Thursday: For Readers and Writers 06-23-2016 &#124; The Author Chronicles]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Jun 2016 17:01:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] The element of setting occupied several bloggers this week. Kristen Lamb lays out how to use setting with purpose and how setting and symbolism form the perfect combination. Becca Puglisi also discusses setting and symbolism and offers 4 tips for using setting to create a mood, while Angela Ackerman shows how to deliver critical backstory using the setting. [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] The element of setting occupied several bloggers this week. Kristen Lamb lays out how to use setting with purpose and how setting and symbolism form the perfect combination. Becca Puglisi also discusses setting and symbolism and offers 4 tips for using setting to create a mood, while Angela Ackerman shows how to deliver critical backstory using the setting. [&#8230;]</p>
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