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		By: Lyn		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Jun 2017 22:43:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: Laura Drake		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Apr 2017 22:41:26 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/09/nail-that-first-line-2/#comment-126725&quot;&gt;Wendy Pearson&lt;/a&gt;.

You&#039;re right about that, Wendy. Absolutely gorgeous writing!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/09/nail-that-first-line-2/#comment-126725">Wendy Pearson</a>.</p>
<p>You're right about that, Wendy. Absolutely gorgeous writing!</p>
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		By: Wendy Pearson		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Apr 2017 21:34:20 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Laura, 

What a great post! I read both this one and your Last Line post that you posted today April 21st. Awesome!

I know you&#039;re asking for first lines but I wanted to mention these two first paragraphs
of White Oleander. I have always been struck by them:

“The Santa Anas blew in hot from the desert, shriveling the last of the spring grass into whiskers of pale straw. Only the oleanders thrived, their delicate poisonous blooms, their dagger green leaves. We could not sleep in the hot dry nights, my mother and I. I woke up at midnight to find her bed empty. I climbed to the roof and easily spotted her blond hair like a white flame in the light of the three-quarter moon.

“”Oleander time,” she said. “Lovers who kill each other now will blame it on the wind.” She held up her large hand and spread the fingers, let the desert dryness lick through. My mother was not herself in the time of the Santa Anas. I was twelve years old and I was afraid for her. I wished things were back the way they had been, that Barry was still here, that the wind would stop blowing.

Also, the last lines of this book, tie into these paragraphs. Beautiful way to poetically weave it into the book and end with it too.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Laura, </p>
<p>What a great post! I read both this one and your Last Line post that you posted today April 21st. Awesome!</p>
<p>I know you're asking for first lines but I wanted to mention these two first paragraphs<br />
of White Oleander. I have always been struck by them:</p>
<p>“The Santa Anas blew in hot from the desert, shriveling the last of the spring grass into whiskers of pale straw. Only the oleanders thrived, their delicate poisonous blooms, their dagger green leaves. We could not sleep in the hot dry nights, my mother and I. I woke up at midnight to find her bed empty. I climbed to the roof and easily spotted her blond hair like a white flame in the light of the three-quarter moon.</p>
<p>“”Oleander time,” she said. “Lovers who kill each other now will blame it on the wind.” She held up her large hand and spread the fingers, let the desert dryness lick through. My mother was not herself in the time of the Santa Anas. I was twelve years old and I was afraid for her. I wished things were back the way they had been, that Barry was still here, that the wind would stop blowing.</p>
<p>Also, the last lines of this book, tie into these paragraphs. Beautiful way to poetically weave it into the book and end with it too.</p>
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		By: How to Write a Great Last Line &#124; Writers In The Storm		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/09/nail-that-first-line-2/#comment-126702</link>

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		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Apr 2017 11:03:29 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] the very beginning, or the very end of a book. (I wrote a blog on first sentences. You can read it here.) Why? Well, I have to admit, as an author, I spend more time thinking/editing/writing/crafting [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] the very beginning, or the very end of a book. (I wrote a blog on first sentences. You can read it here.) Why? Well, I have to admit, as an author, I spend more time thinking/editing/writing/crafting [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Linda Booth Sweeney		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Linda Booth Sweeney]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Nov 2016 12:41:27 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thanks so much Laura.  I love this post.  It really has the creative juices flowing.  Here&#039;s my first line from a WIP on a children&#039;s book about Buckminster Fuller: 

&quot;As a kid, Bucky never ran the fastest, jumped the farthest, or got the best grades.&quot;]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks so much Laura.  I love this post.  It really has the creative juices flowing.  Here's my first line from a WIP on a children's book about Buckminster Fuller: </p>
<p>"As a kid, Bucky never ran the fastest, jumped the farthest, or got the best grades."</p>
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		By: writersideup		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/09/nail-that-first-line-2/#comment-122278</link>

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		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Nov 2016 18:32:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I LOVE reading about writing craft and I&#039;ve always had a sort of &quot;fetish&quot; for opening sentences so LOVE this article :) Excellent stuff! :D]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I LOVE reading about writing craft and I've always had a sort of "fetish" for opening sentences so LOVE this article 🙂 Excellent stuff! 😀</p>
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		By: Writing Links Round Up 9/26-10/1 &#8211; B. Shaun Smith		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Writing Links Round Up 9/26-10/1 &#8211; B. Shaun Smith]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 03 Oct 2016 20:21:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: Top Picks Thursday! For Readers &#38; Writers 09-29-2016 &#124; The Author Chronicles		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Sep 2016 17:02:24 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] are hard. Laura Drake tells us how to nail that first line, Mary Kole describes how to successfully weave information into later books in a series, and Ruth [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] are hard. Laura Drake tells us how to nail that first line, Mary Kole describes how to successfully weave information into later books in a series, and Ruth [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: jeanne kern		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/09/nail-that-first-line-2/#comment-119338</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[jeanne kern]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Sep 2016 14:05:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/09/nail-that-first-line-2/#comment-119182&quot;&gt;Fae Rowen&lt;/a&gt;.

It always makes me laugh, too, Fae--even first thing in the morning.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/09/nail-that-first-line-2/#comment-119182">Fae Rowen</a>.</p>
<p>It always makes me laugh, too, Fae--even first thing in the morning.</p>
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		By: Writing Links in the 3s and 5&#8230;9/27/16 &#8211; Where Genres Collide		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Sep 2016 11:10:14 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/09/nail-that-first-line-2/ Do you have a killer first line? [&#8230;]]]></description>
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