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		By: jmcgarryxx		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-126416</link>

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		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Mar 2017 18:24:10 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In my book, Operation Mermaid: The Project Kraken Incident, I use a different approach. My book is primarily transcripts of dialogue, so I don&#039;t use the filter words. The parts that aren&#039;t, I imagined they were reports that someone else had written for the big report. These writers would not be professional writers, so they wouldn&#039;t know about a lot of the rules we talk about here. Also, the report had to be done quickly, so there was no time for major revisions. I&#039;ve been there myself.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In my book, Operation Mermaid: The Project Kraken Incident, I use a different approach. My book is primarily transcripts of dialogue, so I don't use the filter words. The parts that aren't, I imagined they were reports that someone else had written for the big report. These writers would not be professional writers, so they wouldn't know about a lot of the rules we talk about here. Also, the report had to be done quickly, so there was no time for major revisions. I've been there myself.</p>
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		By: Janice Hardy		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-126414</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Janice Hardy]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Mar 2017 17:36:16 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-126384&quot;&gt;Francesco Barravecchia&lt;/a&gt;.

I do say in the article that how a writer chooses to use filter words is totally up to them. And this article was about using a particular writing device to achieve a particular affect, there&#039;s no &quot;rule&quot; stated. I&#039;m very much a believer that there is no &quot;one way to write&quot; or even a &quot;right way to write.&quot; Each writer has to decide what best for their story. If they don&#039;t want to try anything I suggest, that&#039;s up to them. It&#039;s their call.

I never once said not to use them, I said how a writer uses them depends on what that writer is trying to achieve with their writing and how filter words affect show, don&#039;t tell. I hope I do influence new writers who feel they must follow a particular rule to be successful, and let them know that&#039;s that true. The better a writer understands how to use the tools at their disposal, the better that writer will likely be. This article simply suggests one tiny tool to help with that.

Every writer needs to do what&#039;s right for them and their story.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-126384">Francesco Barravecchia</a>.</p>
<p>I do say in the article that how a writer chooses to use filter words is totally up to them. And this article was about using a particular writing device to achieve a particular affect, there's no "rule" stated. I'm very much a believer that there is no "one way to write" or even a "right way to write." Each writer has to decide what best for their story. If they don't want to try anything I suggest, that's up to them. It's their call.</p>
<p>I never once said not to use them, I said how a writer uses them depends on what that writer is trying to achieve with their writing and how filter words affect show, don't tell. I hope I do influence new writers who feel they must follow a particular rule to be successful, and let them know that's that true. The better a writer understands how to use the tools at their disposal, the better that writer will likely be. This article simply suggests one tiny tool to help with that.</p>
<p>Every writer needs to do what's right for them and their story.</p>
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		By: Francesco Barravecchia		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-126411</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Francesco Barravecchia]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Mar 2017 16:04:33 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-126397&quot;&gt;Laura Drake&lt;/a&gt;.

You are giving advice - or pretending to do so - to new writers, many of whom could be easily influenced and really end up believing that there is ONE way to write today, as you  state without recognizing the limits of your own observation. Ages are never monolithic and multiple styles always operate, in spite of what narrow minded people try to impose.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-126397">Laura Drake</a>.</p>
<p>You are giving advice - or pretending to do so - to new writers, many of whom could be easily influenced and really end up believing that there is ONE way to write today, as you  state without recognizing the limits of your own observation. Ages are never monolithic and multiple styles always operate, in spite of what narrow minded people try to impose.</p>
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		By: Laura Drake		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Laura Drake]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Mar 2017 09:23:42 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-126384&quot;&gt;Francesco Barravecchia&lt;/a&gt;.

Francesco, &#039;Rules&#039; in writing are ever-changing. I think it goes without saying that what is popular today, will be gone tomorrow. But we&#039;re writing to sell today, right? And there&#039;s always the caveat that you can break any rule you&#039;d like, as long as you&#039;re really good.  Write on!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-126384">Francesco Barravecchia</a>.</p>
<p>Francesco, 'Rules' in writing are ever-changing. I think it goes without saying that what is popular today, will be gone tomorrow. But we're writing to sell today, right? And there's always the caveat that you can break any rule you'd like, as long as you're really good.  Write on!</p>
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		By: Francesco Barravecchia		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 28 Mar 2017 15:41:27 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[How sorry George Orwell, Vladimir Nabokov and Mark Twain, just to name a few, must be feeling right now for having failed to gain your approval! Their works are full of &#039;saw&#039;, &#039;thought&#039;, &#039;decided&#039;, etc. Please, run to burn all their books: they don&#039;t live up to your standards!
The main point that you fail to understand is that there is such a thing as a difference in styles: some writers might be abhorred by the idea of creating any distance between their readers and the events narrated, others might want to use that distance to put the focus on what is going on in the characters that sees, thinks, decides, etc. 
The imperative on eliminating the so-called &#039;filtering words&#039; represents just a recent fashion, something that perhaps will become a law punishable by death or that - more likely - will be replaced sooner or later by another style. You are not doing a good service to new writers by imposing your conformist viewpoint on them.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>How sorry George Orwell, Vladimir Nabokov and Mark Twain, just to name a few, must be feeling right now for having failed to gain your approval! Their works are full of 'saw', 'thought', 'decided', etc. Please, run to burn all their books: they don't live up to your standards!<br />
The main point that you fail to understand is that there is such a thing as a difference in styles: some writers might be abhorred by the idea of creating any distance between their readers and the events narrated, others might want to use that distance to put the focus on what is going on in the characters that sees, thinks, decides, etc.<br />
The imperative on eliminating the so-called 'filtering words' represents just a recent fashion, something that perhaps will become a law punishable by death or that - more likely - will be replaced sooner or later by another style. You are not doing a good service to new writers by imposing your conformist viewpoint on them.</p>
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		By: Top Picks Thursday! For Readers &#38; Writers 11-3-2016 &#124; The Author Chronicles		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Nov 2016 17:05:03 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] The point of view used in the story is part of author voice. John Gilstrap discusses taming POV by thinking of camera placement, Mary Kole shows how to get around 1st-person POV limitations, and Janice Hardy explains how filtering the POV affects show, don’t tell. [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] The point of view used in the story is part of author voice. John Gilstrap discusses taming POV by thinking of camera placement, Mary Kole shows how to get around 1st-person POV limitations, and Janice Hardy explains how filtering the POV affects show, don’t tell. [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Janice Hardy		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-121378</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Janice Hardy]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Nov 2016 12:38:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-121306&quot;&gt;Victoria Marie Lees&lt;/a&gt;.

Most welcome. I found I used them less and less as I trained myself to edit them out after, so odds are you&#039;ll see the same. All that revising afterward will stick and you&#039;ll naturally write without them.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-121306">Victoria Marie Lees</a>.</p>
<p>Most welcome. I found I used them less and less as I trained myself to edit them out after, so odds are you'll see the same. All that revising afterward will stick and you'll naturally write without them.</p>
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		By: Janice Hardy		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-121375</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Janice Hardy]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Nov 2016 12:36:28 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-121255&quot;&gt;wendyunsworth&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks! I do the same thing before I edit, how funny. I have a file of notes and things to check to keep it all fresh in my head.]]></description>
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<p>Thanks! I do the same thing before I edit, how funny. I have a file of notes and things to check to keep it all fresh in my head.</p>
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		By: charityrau		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-121321</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[charityrau]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Nov 2016 12:47:14 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-121147&quot;&gt;Janice Hardy&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2016/10/how-filtering-the-point-of-view-affects-show-dont-tell/#comment-121147">Janice Hardy</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
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		By: Victoria Marie Lees		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Victoria Marie Lees]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Nov 2016 16:55:22 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Excellent point of view tips here with concrete examples. Thanks so much for these, Janice! Filter words come so easily when I&#039;m writing. I need to search for them in revision. I keep hoping with every new story I find less, but I don&#039;t even think about them when writing/creating the story.  Congratulations to Marie D. on winning the critique!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent point of view tips here with concrete examples. Thanks so much for these, Janice! Filter words come so easily when I'm writing. I need to search for them in revision. I keep hoping with every new story I find less, but I don't even think about them when writing/creating the story.  Congratulations to Marie D. on winning the critique!</p>
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