Comments on: Putting Wow on the Page!

By: Margie Lawson

Margie Lawson — Thu, 25 Jan 2018 00:59:14 +0000

In reply to Sherry Gross. Sherry -- Ha! I'm in your head. Perfect! A one week class at West Texas A&M University last June, and now you are thinking and hearing cadence-driven writing. Awesome!

By: Margie Lawson

Margie Lawson — Thu, 25 Jan 2018 00:54:20 +0000

In reply to Andrea Grigg. Hugs to Immersion-Grad Andrea Grigg -- You know I love your writing! Can't wait until the Immersion class at your house on the Gold Coast. I always love, love, love going Down Under and visiting my Aussie friends. I believe the Immersion at your house will be the 17th Immersion I've taught in Australia. Wowzee!

By: Margie Lawson

Margie Lawson — Thu, 25 Jan 2018 00:48:26 +0000

In reply to amandauhlauthor.

Hugs to Immersion-Grad Amanda Uhl!

So fun working with you and your Immersion siblings in Cleveland. Fabulous group!

Happy Deep Editing!

By: Margie Lawson

Margie Lawson — Wed, 24 Jan 2018 05:04:24 +0000

In reply to Reetta Raitanen.

Hello Reetta --

Yes! Lots of power.

Hope I get to see you online again!

By: Margie Lawson

Margie Lawson — Wed, 24 Jan 2018 05:01:28 +0000

In reply to christopherlentzauthor. Hello Chris -- A kettle of excitable fish. Ha -- Love it! Can't wait to work with you in an Immersion class next fall!

By: Margie Lawson

Margie Lawson — Mon, 22 Jan 2018 19:35:26 +0000

In reply to Kristi Rhodes. Hello Kristi Rhodes -- Thank you. Hope I get to meet you sometime!

By: Jennifer

Jennifer — Mon, 22 Jan 2018 12:55:06 +0000

Wow is right. The examples are impressive. I'm heading to the website now to check out the course list . . .

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Writing Links 1/22/18 – Where Genres Collide — Mon, 22 Jan 2018 12:03:03 +0000

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By: lynettemburrows

lynettemburrows — Sun, 21 Jan 2018 16:20:50 +0000

In reply to Margie Lawson. Thanks, Margie! It thrills me that my story stuck in your reads-a-ton mind. I'd rather see you in person, too. Another Immersion class is still one of my goals. Right now, my personal hurdles are a bit too much to get that done, but I'm working on it!

By: Margie Lawson

Margie Lawson — Sat, 20 Jan 2018 22:03:44 +0000

In reply to spurvis500. Hugs to 2-time Immersion-Grad Suzanne Purvis! Ah -- I miss you too. I'm teaching an Immersion class in Phoenix now. Shared examples from FUSED. They love, love, love your smooth and empowered writing! And -- so glad you're teaching THE SIZZLING, SCINTILLATING SYNOPSIS in February. Awesome course!