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		By: jeannenicholas		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131863</link>

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		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Feb 2018 19:29:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Perhaps on a side note, you might critique something NOT in first person as your next offering?  I&#039;d like to see some of the alterations you recommend.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Perhaps on a side note, you might critique something NOT in first person as your next offering?  I'd like to see some of the alterations you recommend.</p>
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		By: Writing Links 2/26/18 &#8211; Where Genres Collide		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Writing Links 2/26/18 &#8211; Where Genres Collide]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Feb 2018 12:12:54 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/ New feature. [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/" rel="ugc">https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/</a> New feature. [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: littlemissw		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131850</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[littlemissw]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Feb 2018 01:53:10 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131834&quot;&gt;Laura Drake&lt;/a&gt;.

I haven&#039;t yet but definitely will next time time round.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131834">Laura Drake</a>.</p>
<p>I haven't yet but definitely will next time time round.</p>
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		By: Laura Drake		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131849</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Laura Drake]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Feb 2018 09:31:17 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131842&quot;&gt;jeanne kern&lt;/a&gt;.

Giving is it&#039;s own reward, jeanne, but thank you.  And my hips thank you that the cookies are virtual!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131842">jeanne kern</a>.</p>
<p>Giving is it's own reward, jeanne, but thank you.  And my hips thank you that the cookies are virtual!</p>
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		By: Laura Drake		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131848</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Laura Drake]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Feb 2018 09:30:32 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131845&quot;&gt;Rachel Lauderdale&lt;/a&gt;.

The future favors the brave, Rachel!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131845">Rachel Lauderdale</a>.</p>
<p>The future favors the brave, Rachel!</p>
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		By: Nikki Weston		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131847</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Nikki Weston]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Feb 2018 08:49:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131816&quot;&gt;Laura Drake&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks Laura for paying it forward in the many ways you do. You&#039;re an inspiration and a hoot, love your posts here! Best - Nikki.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131816">Laura Drake</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks Laura for paying it forward in the many ways you do. You're an inspiration and a hoot, love your posts here! Best - Nikki.</p>
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		By: Nikki Weston		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131846</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Nikki Weston]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Feb 2018 08:47:26 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131801&quot;&gt;Eldred Bird&lt;/a&gt;.

Nice work Eldred, congratulations! I love your attitude too, this is a business and your approach is professional and human. Wishing you much success with this manuscript, and thank you for inspiring others (i.e. me) to submit. Best - Nikki.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131801">Eldred Bird</a>.</p>
<p>Nice work Eldred, congratulations! I love your attitude too, this is a business and your approach is professional and human. Wishing you much success with this manuscript, and thank you for inspiring others (i.e. me) to submit. Best - Nikki.</p>
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		By: Rachel Lauderdale		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131845</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Rachel Lauderdale]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Feb 2018 05:18:20 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[What a fantastic idea!  Can&#039;t wait to read more of the first page critiques and possibly get brave enough to send you my own somewhere in the distant future. :)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What a fantastic idea!  Can't wait to read more of the first page critiques and possibly get brave enough to send you my own somewhere in the distant future. 🙂</p>
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		By: Julie Glover		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131844</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Julie Glover]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Feb 2018 01:22:06 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131800&quot;&gt;Julie Glover&lt;/a&gt;.

Hey, Laura! Do not insult my taste. ;)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131800">Julie Glover</a>.</p>
<p>Hey, Laura! Do not insult my taste. 😉</p>
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		By: jeanne kern		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/02/first-page-critique/#comment-131842</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[jeanne kern]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 24 Feb 2018 15:33:55 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Love, love this! Fabulous comments, helpful to all of us. Applause and warm cookies to you, Laura; what a wonderful thing to do for writers.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Love, love this! Fabulous comments, helpful to all of us. Applause and warm cookies to you, Laura; what a wonderful thing to do for writers.</p>
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