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		By: Top Picks Thursday! For Writers and Readers 05-24-2018 &#124; The Author Chronicles		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Top Picks Thursday! For Writers and Readers 05-24-2018 &#124; The Author Chronicles]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 May 2018 17:12:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] Several bloggers shared tips about characterization. Writers Write recommends avoiding Mary Sue characters, while Bonnie Randall proposes pushing your character past the breaking point. Elizabeth Spann Craig investigates how empathizing with your characters can create a better story, and Margie Lawson suggests writing fresh faces &#8212; beyond the cold, hard stares. [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] Several bloggers shared tips about characterization. Writers Write recommends avoiding Mary Sue characters, while Bonnie Randall proposes pushing your character past the breaking point. Elizabeth Spann Craig investigates how empathizing with your characters can create a better story, and Margie Lawson suggests writing fresh faces &#8212; beyond the cold, hard stares. [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133810</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 May 2018 06:59:45 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[HELLO EVERYONE!

I love all the comments and energy here. Thank you all for taking time to read my blog.

We have TWO WINNERS!

The lecture packet winner is VANESSA FOSTER!

The online course winner is BRONWEN FLEETWOOD!

Another BIG THANK YOU to the WITS team: Laura Drake, Jenny Hansen, Fae Rowen, and Julie Glover. They&#039;re all IMMERSION GRADS, and I&#039;m so proud of them.

If you&#039;re going to RWA National this summer, I&#039;d love to meet you. Please check my Facebook page for specifics about my Meet &#038; Greet, Hug $ Chug. Guaranteed fun!

If you have questions about the online courses or lecture packets offered through Lawson Writer&#039;s Academy, please contact me through my web site.

Thanks again!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HELLO EVERYONE!</p>
<p>I love all the comments and energy here. Thank you all for taking time to read my blog.</p>
<p>We have TWO WINNERS!</p>
<p>The lecture packet winner is VANESSA FOSTER!</p>
<p>The online course winner is BRONWEN FLEETWOOD!</p>
<p>Another BIG THANK YOU to the WITS team: Laura Drake, Jenny Hansen, Fae Rowen, and Julie Glover. They're all IMMERSION GRADS, and I'm so proud of them.</p>
<p>If you're going to RWA National this summer, I'd love to meet you. Please check my Facebook page for specifics about my Meet &amp; Greet, Hug $ Chug. Guaranteed fun!</p>
<p>If you have questions about the online courses or lecture packets offered through Lawson Writer's Academy, please contact me through my web site.</p>
<p>Thanks again!</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133809</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 May 2018 06:37:33 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hugs to 2-time Immersion Grad Mary Karlik --

Love working/playing/laughing with you in Immersion in L.A.  I know I&#039;ll get to see you again!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hugs to 2-time Immersion Grad Mary Karlik --</p>
<p>Love working/playing/laughing with you in Immersion in L.A.  I know I'll get to see you again!</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133808</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 May 2018 06:35:38 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133771&quot;&gt;Lola Dodge (@Lola_Dodge)&lt;/a&gt;.

Hugs to Immersion Grad Lola Dodge!

Absolutely fabulous working with you in Immersion in Los Angeles!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133771">Lola Dodge (@Lola_Dodge)</a>.</p>
<p>Hugs to Immersion Grad Lola Dodge!</p>
<p>Absolutely fabulous working with you in Immersion in Los Angeles!</p>
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		By: Debra Jiles		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133793</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Debra Jiles]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 May 2018 16:25:04 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133786&quot;&gt;Margie Lawson&lt;/a&gt;.

In my haste I forgot to put my last name.  It&#039;s Debra Jiles from last November&#039;s Immersion class at Denny&#039;s.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133786">Margie Lawson</a>.</p>
<p>In my haste I forgot to put my last name.  It's Debra Jiles from last November's Immersion class at Denny's.</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133787</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 May 2018 06:10:44 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133766&quot;&gt;Jennifer Jensen (@jenjensen2)&lt;/a&gt;.

Hello Jennifer Jensen --

You can take one of my online courses in June. 

Oh -- maybe you meant an Immersion class. Hope it works out!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133766">Jennifer Jensen (@jenjensen2)</a>.</p>
<p>Hello Jennifer Jensen --</p>
<p>You can take one of my online courses in June. </p>
<p>Oh -- maybe you meant an Immersion class. Hope it works out!</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133786</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 May 2018 06:05:24 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133765&quot;&gt;Debra&lt;/a&gt;.

Hello Debra --

Thank you. I hope you check out my online courses. You&#039;d be surprised at what you learn. And you sound like a serious learner.

Just sharing info.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133765">Debra</a>.</p>
<p>Hello Debra --</p>
<p>Thank you. I hope you check out my online courses. You'd be surprised at what you learn. And you sound like a serious learner.</p>
<p>Just sharing info.</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133785</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 May 2018 05:42:16 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133762&quot;&gt;Jeanette O&#039;Hagan&lt;/a&gt;.

Hugs to Immersion Grad Jeanette O&#039;Hagan --

So fun working with you in Immersion in Brisbane!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133762">Jeanette O'Hagan</a>.</p>
<p>Hugs to Immersion Grad Jeanette O'Hagan --</p>
<p>So fun working with you in Immersion in Brisbane!</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133784</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 May 2018 05:39:17 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133758&quot;&gt;Carol Ashby&lt;/a&gt;.

Hello Carol --

I remember you, And I loved that group in Colorado Springs. So committed to learning how to add power. 

Thanks so much for posting. I hope I get to see you again sometime.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133758">Carol Ashby</a>.</p>
<p>Hello Carol --</p>
<p>I remember you, And I loved that group in Colorado Springs. So committed to learning how to add power. </p>
<p>Thanks so much for posting. I hope I get to see you again sometime.</p>
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		By: Margie Lawson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133783</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Margie Lawson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 May 2018 05:36:24 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133751&quot;&gt;katewyland&lt;/a&gt;.

Hello Kate --

Have fun deep editing!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/05/writing-fresh-faces-beyond-cold-hard-stares/#comment-133751">katewyland</a>.</p>
<p>Hello Kate --</p>
<p>Have fun deep editing!</p>
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