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		By: Julie Glover		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137479</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Julie Glover]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Sep 2018 02:10:25 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137402&quot;&gt;Karen Rochford Tinsley&lt;/a&gt;.

I think I did fix it. Didn&#039;t I? :)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137402">Karen Rochford Tinsley</a>.</p>
<p>I think I did fix it. Didn't I? 🙂</p>
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		By: Julie Glover		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137478</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Julie Glover]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Sep 2018 02:09:28 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137262&quot;&gt;Amorina Rose&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks, Amorina!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137262">Amorina Rose</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks, Amorina!</p>
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		By: Julie Glover		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Julie Glover]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Sep 2018 02:09:01 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137256&quot;&gt;Iola Goulton&lt;/a&gt;.

Yep, some copy editors give clean manuscript discounts! Thanks, Iola.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137256">Iola Goulton</a>.</p>
<p>Yep, some copy editors give clean manuscript discounts! Thanks, Iola.</p>
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		By: Julie Glover		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137476</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Julie Glover]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Sep 2018 02:08:30 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137205&quot;&gt;lgood67334&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks so much!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137205">lgood67334</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks so much!</p>
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		By: Karen Rochford Tinsley		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137402</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Karen Rochford Tinsley]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Sep 2018 12:28:02 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[So how would you repair that dangling participle?  True, these can be hard to spot, especially after re-reading your own work a bazillion times.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So how would you repair that dangling participle?  True, these can be hard to spot, especially after re-reading your own work a bazillion times.</p>
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		By: Top Picks Thursday! For Writers &#38; Readers 09-20-2018 &#124; The Author Chronicles		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Top Picks Thursday! For Writers &#38; Readers 09-20-2018 &#124; The Author Chronicles]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Sep 2018 17:02:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] Writers are always trying to polish our writing after our drafts are finished. Rachelle Gardner has some tips for tightening your writing, and Julie Glover shares 4 easy edits that make your story flow better. [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] Writers are always trying to polish our writing after our drafts are finished. Rachelle Gardner has some tips for tightening your writing, and Julie Glover shares 4 easy edits that make your story flow better. [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Amorina Rose		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137262</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Amorina Rose]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Sep 2018 12:00:03 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Good post, simple but true. Its the small things]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good post, simple but true. Its the small things</p>
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		By: Iola Goulton		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137256</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Iola Goulton]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 Sep 2018 21:16:15 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Great advice for all writers. For those who want to self-publish: following these tips will help reduce your editing costs.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great advice for all writers. For those who want to self-publish: following these tips will help reduce your editing costs.</p>
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		By: lgood67334		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137205</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[lgood67334]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Sep 2018 01:34:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Wise advice. Never hurts to hear these things again.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wise advice. Never hurts to hear these things again.</p>
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		By: Julie Glover		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137178</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Julie Glover]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Sep 2018 00:58:16 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137172&quot;&gt;wendyleslie&lt;/a&gt;.

You are not alone, Wendy!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/09/easy-edits-that-make-your-story-flow-better/#comment-137172">wendyleslie</a>.</p>
<p>You are not alone, Wendy!</p>
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