Comments on: Putting Fresh Faces on the Page! https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/02/putting-fresh-faces-on-the-page/ A Blog On Writing Sun, 24 Feb 2019 17:05:16 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0 By: Monica Tillery https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/02/putting-fresh-faces-on-the-page/#comment-139912 Sun, 24 Feb 2019 17:05:16 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36517#comment-139912 Loved the examples...and feel compelled to go over my ms with fresh eyes! I especially liked how you added that we need fresh writing, but not too fresh. It's a fine line, and it takes a deft hand. Thanks, Margie!

]]> By: Laurie Edwards https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/02/putting-fresh-faces-on-the-page/#comment-139910 Sun, 24 Feb 2019 00:02:29 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36517#comment-139910 In reply to Angela Hicks.

I'm curious about Enduro. What, when, where?

]]> By: dallenco https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/02/putting-fresh-faces-on-the-page/#comment-139849 Tue, 19 Feb 2019 02:44:11 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36517#comment-139849 The gnat made me laugh too! Love all the examples. They always inspire me!

]]> By: dholcomb1 https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/02/putting-fresh-faces-on-the-page/#comment-139836 Mon, 18 Feb 2019 17:03:13 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36517#comment-139836 loved the examples--thank you for sharing. it all helps in crafting writing.

denise

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/02/putting-fresh-faces-on-the-page/#comment-139830 Mon, 18 Feb 2019 06:33:52 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36517#comment-139830 In reply to Jennifer August.

Hello Jennifer August --

Thank you!

I have to ask... Have we met? Somehow I know you live in Dallas. Right? Hmm...

If we haven't met, hope I get to meet you someday.

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/02/putting-fresh-faces-on-the-page/#comment-139829 Mon, 18 Feb 2019 06:28:23 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36517#comment-139829 In reply to Cheri Patton.

Hugs to 2-time Immersion Grad Cheri Patton!

Ah -- Miss you too! Immersion in Broken Arrow, OK in 2020? Or -- back to Palm Springs, CA!

]]> By: Jenny Hansen https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/02/putting-fresh-faces-on-the-page/#comment-139828 Mon, 18 Feb 2019 04:28:10 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36517#comment-139828 In reply to Margie Lawson.

Woo-hoo!!! Go, Winners! I always wish I could be one of the winners, but alas...I cannot.

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/02/putting-fresh-faces-on-the-page/#comment-139827 Mon, 18 Feb 2019 02:40:34 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36517#comment-139827 HELLO EVERYONE --

If you want to learn how to write fresh like the examples in this blog, do what those writers did.

They all took Empowering Characters' Emotions. Followed by my Deep Editing, and Writing Body Language classes.

Empowering Characters' Emotions.starts March 4th.

Drop by my website -- https://www.margielawson.com/ -- click on Lawson Writer's Academy, and you're there!

If you have questions about online courses offered through Lawson Writer's Academy, please ask. You can contact me through my website, or Facebook message me.

Thank you again for reading my blog.

All smiles............Margie

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/02/putting-fresh-faces-on-the-page/#comment-139826 Mon, 18 Feb 2019 02:32:14 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36517#comment-139826 HELLO EVERYONE!

Wow!

Love this crowd!

A big lovey THANK YOU to the WITS gals for inviting me to guest blog. I always have the best time here.

And another big lovey THANK YOU to the Immersion Grads who wrote the examples I shared in this blog. Brilliant.

I just clicked over to RANDOM.ORG -- and found our TWO WINNERS!

They both happen to be Immersion Grads.

The WINNER of a Lecture Packet is..................Brynn Spears!

The WINNER of an online class is.....................Catherine Hudson!

Congratulations to Brynn and Catherine!

Thanks to EVERYONE for visiting WRITERS IN THE STORM, and reading my blog.

I'll be back blogging on WITS, March 22nd.

See you then, or before then!

All smiles...........Margie

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/02/putting-fresh-faces-on-the-page/#comment-139825 Mon, 18 Feb 2019 02:09:54 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36517#comment-139825 In reply to Pam Stewart.

Hello Immersion Grad Pam Stewart --

I remember your story and your writing from Immersion class in 2014. Both STRONG.

That's at least 20 million stories back. Maybe a touch of hyperbole there. But not much. 🙂

Miss you too. Come see me!

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