Comments on: Creating Compelling Cadence: Small Changes, Big Impact https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/03/creating-compelling-cadence-small-changes-big-impact/ A Blog On Writing Sun, 12 Jan 2025 05:13:24 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0 By: Julie Glover https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/03/creating-compelling-cadence-small-changes-big-impact/#comment-140297 Mon, 25 Mar 2019 20:46:30 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36790#comment-140297 Thanks for all this great stuff, Margie! Love the examples. Cadence is so important, and I have rearranged many sentences to get that right punch.

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/03/creating-compelling-cadence-small-changes-big-impact/#comment-140283 Mon, 25 Mar 2019 05:02:13 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36790#comment-140283 HELLO EVERYONE!

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]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/03/creating-compelling-cadence-small-changes-big-impact/#comment-140282 Mon, 25 Mar 2019 04:12:17 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36790#comment-140282 In reply to Megan Ganesh.

Hello Megan G. --

Good for you for training your cadence ear. If your son hears you reading out loud, you'll train his Cadence Ear too.

All good!

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/03/creating-compelling-cadence-small-changes-big-impact/#comment-140281 Mon, 25 Mar 2019 04:03:54 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36790#comment-140281 In reply to Lori Fulton.

Hello Lori Fulton -

Great to see you here! It's been too long since your Immersion class.

You're smart to keep this blog.

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/03/creating-compelling-cadence-small-changes-big-impact/#comment-140280 Mon, 25 Mar 2019 03:59:37 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36790#comment-140280 In reply to Jenny Hansen.

Hey Jenny --

Like Steena, you always make your cadence strong.

Hope I get to see you at my house in JUNE!

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/03/creating-compelling-cadence-small-changes-big-impact/#comment-140279 Mon, 25 Mar 2019 03:55:42 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36790#comment-140279 In reply to Steena Holmes.

Hello Steena --

Your writing is cadence driven. Maybe you just don't trust your Cadence Ear.

I trust it. You're good!

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/03/creating-compelling-cadence-small-changes-big-impact/#comment-140278 Mon, 25 Mar 2019 03:52:36 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36790#comment-140278 In reply to Linda Dindzans.

Hello Linda --

You're flying to Israel soon! Thanks for taking the time to post on the blog.

So glad I get to work with you in Fab 30 again!

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/03/creating-compelling-cadence-small-changes-big-impact/#comment-140277 Mon, 25 Mar 2019 03:49:22 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36790#comment-140277 In reply to Allison Mitchell.

Hello Allison --

I can tell you read your work out loud. It shows!

Miss you. Hope I get to see you when I'm Down Under mid-October thru mid-November.

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/03/creating-compelling-cadence-small-changes-big-impact/#comment-140276 Mon, 25 Mar 2019 03:34:01 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36790#comment-140276 In reply to jayjhicks.

Jay --

Great! You're ready for your second Immersion!

I'm getting my Aussie Immersions set up. If you know anyone who might be interested in hosting an Immersion Down Under, email me.

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/03/creating-compelling-cadence-small-changes-big-impact/#comment-140275 Mon, 25 Mar 2019 03:31:47 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36790#comment-140275 In reply to L.D. Rose.

Hello L.D. Rose --

Thank you. Glad you liked the blog!

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