Comments on: Five Tips for Writing Tears that Carry Power https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/04/five-tips-for-writing-tears-that-carry-power/ A Blog On Writing Sun, 12 Jan 2025 05:00:29 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.1.2 By: Cathy Elliott https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/04/five-tips-for-writing-tears-that-carry-power/#comment-140829 Wed, 08 May 2019 02:10:23 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36970#comment-140829 Hi Margie! Reading your deep dives blog takes me back to our wonderful Yosemite Immersion Master Class last May...about this time. The best! ! I appreciate your fresh takes on tears and all sob-related description. It's too easy to default to the done-done-done before. Thanks to you, these days I'm anxious to experiment. Hugs to you. Smiles from the a-bit-too-green, Cathy

]]> By: dholcomb1 https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/04/five-tips-for-writing-tears-that-carry-power/#comment-140714 Wed, 01 May 2019 16:57:43 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36970#comment-140714 loved the examples and breakdown.

]]> By: Crystal Johnston https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/04/five-tips-for-writing-tears-that-carry-power/#comment-140601 Mon, 22 Apr 2019 21:58:36 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36970#comment-140601 Loved seeing all the fresh examples of crying and tears. That's a hard one. Thanks Margie!

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/04/five-tips-for-writing-tears-that-carry-power/#comment-140590 Mon, 22 Apr 2019 03:27:07 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36970#comment-140590 HELLO EVERYONE!

A big THANK YOU to all of you for being here!

Loved reading all your posts.

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Congratulations Robyn and Carla!

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]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/04/five-tips-for-writing-tears-that-carry-power/#comment-140589 Mon, 22 Apr 2019 03:14:25 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36970#comment-140589 In reply to Laura Drake.

Hugs to Multi-Immersion Grad and Cruise Grad Laura Drake --

I remember that powerful passage that Darcy Crowder read in your first Immersion class too.

That was May, 2012. Seven years ago. And we both remember the beauty of that passage. It carried so much emotion, without tears.

I just did a search, but didn't find it. I emailed Darcy. As soon as she shares it, I'll put it on my website.

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/04/five-tips-for-writing-tears-that-carry-power/#comment-140588 Mon, 22 Apr 2019 03:12:08 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36970#comment-140588 In reply to Robyn Campbell.

Hello Robyn --

Yay!

Thank you for letting me know you're here -- and smiling!

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/04/five-tips-for-writing-tears-that-carry-power/#comment-140587 Mon, 22 Apr 2019 03:08:39 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36970#comment-140587 In reply to Jessica Pomerantz.

Hello Jessica

You cliched some tears? Aack!

Now you know you can nix some tears and write some in fresh ways. I know you'll write them well.

Thank you for stopping by the blog!

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/04/five-tips-for-writing-tears-that-carry-power/#comment-140586 Mon, 22 Apr 2019 02:58:26 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36970#comment-140586 In reply to Greg Henry.

Hellooo Immersion Grad Greg!

I know you'll use my five tips when you need them.

Thanks for chiming in.

See you in Fab 30 class!

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/04/five-tips-for-writing-tears-that-carry-power/#comment-140585 Mon, 22 Apr 2019 02:56:36 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36970#comment-140585 In reply to sourris25.

Hello Susanne --

I'm cheering for you!

I bet you'll deep edit to add just the right amount of fresh writing and power that works best for the scene.

Thank you for dropping by the blog!

]]> By: Margie Lawson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/04/five-tips-for-writing-tears-that-carry-power/#comment-140584 Mon, 22 Apr 2019 02:51:32 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=36970#comment-140584 In reply to Deb Atwood.

Hello Deb A --

Yay! Glad you're inspired to write tears and sobs fresh!

Thanks for posting.

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