Comments on: How To Tell If Youโ€™re Writing In Deep Point Of View https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/11/how-to-tell-if-youre-writing-in-deep-point-of-view/ A Blog On Writing Thu, 02 Jan 2025 21:42:52 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0 By: Julie Glover https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/11/how-to-tell-if-youre-writing-in-deep-point-of-view/#comment-143484 Mon, 02 Dec 2019 16:06:07 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=38727#comment-143484 What a fantastic before/after! Thanks for sharing your knowledge, Lisa. So helpful!

]]> By: rosihollinbeck https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/11/how-to-tell-if-youre-writing-in-deep-point-of-view/#comment-143483 Mon, 02 Dec 2019 04:19:46 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=38727#comment-143483 Terrific post and wonderful examples. Thanks for this post. I will be linking to it on my blog.

]]> By: dholcomb1 https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/11/how-to-tell-if-youre-writing-in-deep-point-of-view/#comment-143481 Fri, 29 Nov 2019 05:54:10 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=38727#comment-143481 Always love examples to remind me what I need to do and how to do it.

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]]> By: Jenny Hansen https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/11/how-to-tell-if-youre-writing-in-deep-point-of-view/#comment-143480 Wed, 27 Nov 2019 22:55:46 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=38727#comment-143480 In reply to Rick George.

Good to know, Rick! I'll check out her books.

]]> By: Jenny Hansen https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/11/how-to-tell-if-youre-writing-in-deep-point-of-view/#comment-143479 Wed, 27 Nov 2019 22:54:59 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=38727#comment-143479 In reply to Lisa Hall-Wilson.

We don't roll our eyes! We just bask. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> By: Jenny Hansen https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/11/how-to-tell-if-youre-writing-in-deep-point-of-view/#comment-143478 Wed, 27 Nov 2019 22:24:47 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=38727#comment-143478 In reply to winonabennettcross.

Awwwww, thanks Winona!

]]> By: Lisa Hall-Wilson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/11/how-to-tell-if-youre-writing-in-deep-point-of-view/#comment-143477 Wed, 27 Nov 2019 21:15:14 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=38727#comment-143477 In reply to Rick George.

Awesome. Glad it was helpful. I haven't read anything by Moriarty at all, but I'll have to check her out.

]]> By: Lisa Hall-Wilson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/11/how-to-tell-if-youre-writing-in-deep-point-of-view/#comment-143476 Wed, 27 Nov 2019 21:13:43 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=38727#comment-143476 In reply to Jerold Heyward.

Deep POV will not work with omnisicient POV. In deep POV, the reader knows everything the point of view character knows, but that's ALL they know. There's not often too many POV characters in a deep pov novel.
But, you could certainly use some of the tools of deep pov to give emotional depth to key scenes or moments.

]]> By: Lisa Hall-Wilson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/11/how-to-tell-if-youre-writing-in-deep-point-of-view/#comment-143475 Wed, 27 Nov 2019 21:12:09 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=38727#comment-143475 In reply to ecellenb.

Yeah - for sure! In the 5 Day Deep POV Challenge, I give five free lessons and then feedback on the homework from each lesson. But it's only 5 days and after those 5 days the lessons and homework threads disappear. ๐Ÿ˜€ You can find the free group here: https://www.facebook.com/groups/5daydeeppovchallenge/

]]> By: Lisa Hall-Wilson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/11/how-to-tell-if-youre-writing-in-deep-point-of-view/#comment-143474 Wed, 27 Nov 2019 21:10:07 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=38727#comment-143474 In reply to Kelly L Dyksterhouse.

You need to be aware of your scene's emotional arc, your character's story goal, and the effect you're trying to create. That will help you decide how deep to go in any scene. Here's a short post with some ideas:
https://lisahallwilson.com/using-deep-point-of-view-without-dragging-down-the-pace-of-your-novel/

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