Comments on: Share Your Favorite Line at WITS!

By: Sheri

Sheri — Tue, 12 Nov 2019 22:35:35 +0000

In reply to K Maze. Thanks! YA is my first love, and I two YA novels currently taking a hiatus ;) And yes, this would be brilliant if the guy (or gal) was in the construction industry, but for some reason I put in my surfer-injured-physical-therapist-saves-him-in-more-ways-than-one romance. *sigh*

By: K Maze

K Maze — Sun, 10 Nov 2019 16:12:35 +0000

In reply to octoberamanda. "I have history here." Nice line. I also appreciate the song choice.

By: K Maze

K Maze — Sun, 10 Nov 2019 16:10:07 +0000

In reply to Sheri. I always enjoy a sweet romance, it's one of the draws I have towards YA. Your wording around buildings and construction works on many levels and I could see this built into the story.

By: K Maze

K Maze — Sun, 10 Nov 2019 16:07:51 +0000

In reply to James R. Preston. I like the banter of this. It's a thriller feel for sure.

By: K Maze

K Maze — Sun, 10 Nov 2019 16:05:03 +0000

“GO!” the old chef shouted, begging him to leave. The man wore work boots caked in mud, and a dusty aviator cap with flaps floating above his ruddy curls. He pulled a stool screeching across the linoleum and straddled it. Bouncing nervously, he didn’t intend to leave without the information. He dropped his metal-rimmed goggles to his neck, dirt coating his face around the clean eyes that brimmed with more questions than answers.

~A scene snippet from my #scifi #dystopian #YA novella IMPACT

By: Sheri

Sheri — Thu, 07 Nov 2019 10:11:45 +0000

Every time it seemed she was getting past Kaden’s walls, he constructed a new one. It was clear Dakota needed to erect a fortress of her own. Because today, for a brief moment, she’d caught a glimpse of a man she could easily fall for… one who could build her hopes and dreams and then bulldoze them to the ground. She wasn’t sure her heart could survive a demolition at his hands.

Point Break (contemporary sweet romance) - Work in Progress

By: LauraDrake

LauraDrake — Wed, 06 Nov 2019 11:36:10 +0000

In reply to James R. Preston. I like it, James!

By: Jenny Hansen

Jenny Hansen — Tue, 05 Nov 2019 20:23:11 +0000

In reply to dholcomb1. Special projects are always fun. Thanks for sharing your work, Denise!

By: dholcomb1

dholcomb1 — Tue, 05 Nov 2019 18:50:48 +0000

This is from a submission for a special project, so I'm not giving the title, but I write in romance:

A knock on her car window jolted her back to reality as she was taking more calming breaths. Tony. What more could he want? Hadn’t he and her cousin said enough. Putting her key in the ignition to turn on the car’s accessory mode and roll it down was harder than it should be as her arms were still shaking. “What do you want?” Bella had almost barked it at him, her voice sounding coarse from the asthma attack brought on by the panic attack and allergic reaction. It was even a mouthful for her.

denise

By: Amanda H.

Amanda H. — Tue, 05 Nov 2019 13:40:02 +0000

In reply to christopherlentzauthor. I love the fun line!