Comments on: 10 Different Ways to Make Your Point https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/04/telling-showing-and-everything-in-between-ten-ways-to-make-your-point/ A Blog On Writing Sun, 22 Dec 2024 03:45:50 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0 By: ? Writing Links Round Up 6/7 – B. Shaun Smith https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/04/telling-showing-and-everything-in-between-ten-ways-to-make-your-point/#comment-149179 Mon, 07 Jun 2021 07:01:02 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=42254#comment-149179 […] 10 Different Ways to Make Your Point […]

]]> By: Amorina Rose https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/04/telling-showing-and-everything-in-between-ten-ways-to-make-your-point/#comment-148682 Mon, 26 Apr 2021 02:05:20 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=42254#comment-148682 This was excellent. Thank you.

]]> By: rosihollinbeck https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/04/telling-showing-and-everything-in-between-ten-ways-to-make-your-point/#comment-148606 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 23:26:56 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=42254#comment-148606 Wonderful post. I love all your examples. Thanks. I will be posting the link on my blog.

]]> By: Karen DeBonis https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/04/telling-showing-and-everything-in-between-ten-ways-to-make-your-point/#comment-148604 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 19:33:50 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=42254#comment-148604 In my manuscript, I've been so diligent to always show, never tell; to use active words: "He stood," instead of "He was standing;" and all those other important rules. But my writing felt stilted. Thanks for permission to mix it up!

]]> By: Barb DeLong https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/04/telling-showing-and-everything-in-between-ten-ways-to-make-your-point/#comment-148603 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 17:22:59 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=42254#comment-148603 I love, love this type of analysis! Great post. Thanks, Barbara!

]]> By: denisewillson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/04/telling-showing-and-everything-in-between-ten-ways-to-make-your-point/#comment-148602 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 14:11:51 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=42254#comment-148602 Great tips, Barbara. I'll share the love. 🙂
Dee

]]> By: jeanne kern https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/04/telling-showing-and-everything-in-between-ten-ways-to-make-your-point/#comment-148601 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 08:49:06 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=42254#comment-148601 This so-useful and so-insightful essay is exactly what makes WITS so valuable to writers. Thank you.

]]> By: kARI mUMY https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/04/telling-showing-and-everything-in-between-ten-ways-to-make-your-point/#comment-148600 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 05:44:47 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=42254#comment-148600 Excellent, excellent,excellent set of illustrations of different ways to let a reader know a POV character's response. Thanks for sharing.
Carlene

]]> By: dholcomb1 https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/04/telling-showing-and-everything-in-between-ten-ways-to-make-your-point/#comment-148598 Thu, 22 Apr 2021 03:54:58 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=42254#comment-148598 I've used some of those, but not as well as you have.

denise

]]> By: barbaralinnprobst https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/04/telling-showing-and-everything-in-between-ten-ways-to-make-your-point/#comment-148597 Wed, 21 Apr 2021 21:47:54 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=42254#comment-148597 In reply to Jenny Hansen.

I think we all have habits and preferences that we might not be aware of! It's really interesting to go through a scene and see which strategies we tend to use and which we rarely use 🙂

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