Hello Cheri --

I miss you too! Big time.

I can't wait to work with you in your third immersion. I'm starting up in-person Immersions again in 2022. Covid-permitting.

The Virtual Immersion classes are powerful too.

Thanks for posting!

Hello Paula --

You asked about my POWER YELLOW for internalizations.

I created a highlighter-based EDITS System for analyzing scenes. It's covered in one of my online courses, Empowering Characters' Emotions. That course will be taught Sept. 1 - 30. Now you know.

If you have questions, please feel free to contact me through my website.

Thanks for posting!

Jenny --

Thank you!

Hello Kat Baldwin --

So fabulous seeing you here!

Love your enthusiasm. And you know I love encouraging writers to work harder, dig deeper, add more power.

I feel your passion, hear your song, in every book you've written. Your stories are stunningly rendered on the page and locked in my heart forever.

Thank you so much for posting!

Hello Anne G from Perth!

I hope we get to have our west Aussie Immersion class in 2022! We'll make COVID cooperate.

It's smart to pour your story out for as long as you like--and go back and deep edit when the time is right for you.

Thanks for posting!

Hello Alicia --

Thanks for sharing your writing tips.

I'm a big fan of checklists too!

Hello Jeanne --

Aw... Thank you!

And thanks for chiming in!

Hello Dana Renor --

Glad these tips were helpful!

Hello Barb DeLong --

Fabulous to cyber-see you!

Remember your handout packet from Immersion. Lots of goodies there, including my 20 Point Checklist for Openings.

Have fun powering up your opening!