Comments on: Embracing the Mystery: Deep POV

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🖋 Writing Links Round Up 2/28 – B. Shaun Smith — Mon, 28 Feb 2022 20:43:00 +0000

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By: Lori Brown

Lori Brown — Mon, 10 Jan 2022 16:41:47 +0000

In reply to Bill Evans. Aauughhh! You are absolutely correct. It should be MR. Spock. I wonder if I can edit that now...oy. Probably not. Thank you for your kind, thoughtful, and eloquent comments--the definition of myth is spot on--and for pointing out my mistake, Bill. Editor's nightmare. But so much easier to bear when it's done as gently as this was. Thanks again.

By: Lori Brown

Lori Brown — Mon, 10 Jan 2022 16:20:10 +0000

In reply to Jenny Hansen. Thanks for chiming in on this, Jenny!

By: Lori Brown

Lori Brown — Mon, 10 Jan 2022 16:15:18 +0000

In reply to Jenny Hansen. Thanks, Jenny! I agree; it's been really fun. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

By: Jenny Hansen

Jenny Hansen — Mon, 10 Jan 2022 06:13:19 +0000

I just approved some comments, Lori! Wanted to let you know so you could do a browse. This discussion is so fun.

By: Jenny Hansen

Jenny Hansen — Mon, 10 Jan 2022 06:11:13 +0000

In reply to Lori Brown. I thought the same thing, Lori! This comments sounds EXACTLY right.

By: Lori Brown

Lori Brown — Sun, 09 Jan 2022 16:45:12 +0000

In reply to dholcomb1. Exactly. An excellent summary that fits every angle of approach to Deep POV that I can think of. Thanks!

By: dholcomb1

dholcomb1 — Sun, 09 Jan 2022 06:08:05 +0000

deep pov is the gift of showing and not telling

denise

By: Lori Brown

Lori Brown — Sat, 08 Jan 2022 20:25:20 +0000

In reply to Mike. Thank you! I love it when things work out like that. All the best with your new project--I hope you see tangible and ongoing results.

By: Mike

Mike — Sat, 08 Jan 2022 19:14:10 +0000

My go-to POV is 1st person, but my latest project demands 3rd limited. Your article came along at just the right time. Thank you for the solid advice.