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		By: Ken		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Ken]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Sep 2022 02:59:45 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I’d like to introduce you to the young adult, peppered with psychological bites. The novel is called I Don’t Trust you: I Want a Family of My Own. The opening begins like this.

Late break news:

Earlier we reported that a mother was broadsided at a downtown intersection. She was rushed to Saint Mary’s Hospital in Camrose. There she underwent an operation for a subdural hematoma. Doctors now report the operation was successful. No complications. The mother is expected to make a fully recover. Due to her injuries, she will need to be in an induced coma for a while. 

What the doctors, family, and friends don’t know is that Jill fears returning to her present. Her whole life has been turned upside down. Recently. Out of the blue, no warning. Her husband left her. She had to quit homeschooling her children. Send them to a public school. She had to get a low paying receptionist position. She couldn’t afford the mortgage payments, so she sold her spacious house and move into a three-bedroom apartment. Now the accident. Excoriating back pain is her last recollection.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I’d like to introduce you to the young adult, peppered with psychological bites. The novel is called I Don’t Trust you: I Want a Family of My Own. The opening begins like this.</p>
<p>Late break news:</p>
<p>Earlier we reported that a mother was broadsided at a downtown intersection. She was rushed to Saint Mary’s Hospital in Camrose. There she underwent an operation for a subdural hematoma. Doctors now report the operation was successful. No complications. The mother is expected to make a fully recover. Due to her injuries, she will need to be in an induced coma for a while. </p>
<p>What the doctors, family, and friends don’t know is that Jill fears returning to her present. Her whole life has been turned upside down. Recently. Out of the blue, no warning. Her husband left her. She had to quit homeschooling her children. Send them to a public school. She had to get a low paying receptionist position. She couldn’t afford the mortgage payments, so she sold her spacious house and move into a three-bedroom apartment. Now the accident. Excoriating back pain is her last recollection.</p>
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		By: Mazzy Adams		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mazzy Adams]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Sep 2022 04:05:23 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Licence to Die (GRUnGE.OO1) Mazzy Adams (Intrigue and Inspiration with an Upmarket Down Under Vibe)

From the prologue: Up Front, Easter 6 April 2012, Canberra, Australia

Loud bangs demolished Ben&#039;s Good Friday sleep in. He surrendered his fractured dream without regret. His Pillow? Not so much. It had been a rough night. The reek of stale sweat wafting from his t-shirt agreed.
  A bell from the local parish church chimed in, clanging its solemn call to worship on the offbeat.
  &#039;Bah! They&#039;re in cahoots!&#039; He buried his head under the pillow. Sleep wreckers.
  The bell fell silent. The unrepentant clatter morphed into a belligerent knock.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Licence to Die (GRUnGE.OO1) Mazzy Adams (Intrigue and Inspiration with an Upmarket Down Under Vibe)</p>
<p>From the prologue: Up Front, Easter 6 April 2012, Canberra, Australia</p>
<p>Loud bangs demolished Ben's Good Friday sleep in. He surrendered his fractured dream without regret. His Pillow? Not so much. It had been a rough night. The reek of stale sweat wafting from his t-shirt agreed.<br />
  A bell from the local parish church chimed in, clanging its solemn call to worship on the offbeat.<br />
  'Bah! They're in cahoots!' He buried his head under the pillow. Sleep wreckers.<br />
  The bell fell silent. The unrepentant clatter morphed into a belligerent knock.</p>
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		By: Jenny Hansen		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154563</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenny Hansen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Sep 2022 23:45:38 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154559&quot;&gt;Diana Stout&lt;/a&gt;.

These are lovely details, Diana!!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154559">Diana Stout</a>.</p>
<p>These are lovely details, Diana!!</p>
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		By: Diana Stout		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Diana Stout]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Sep 2022 18:40:20 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[From my book, Grendel&#039;s Mother, the first paragraph:

All journeys begin with a single step. I could say my journey began when I was made dead, a no-name ghost in the woods. Or when I first met the dragon when I was too young to be afraid. Or maybe my journey began when the pains started, soon after the last thread of light disappeared in a horizontal sliver crushed between dark ominous clouds fast filling the sky and the earthly boundaries of both my chains and comfort as deemed by the gods:  the raw wilderness. Was it only less than a year ago that I was a naïve child, believing that the life ahead of me was mine to choose?  So innocent. So lost in my own little world of supposed freedom. Self-centered as only a child knows at the time. What a difference a year makes.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>From my book, Grendel's Mother, the first paragraph:</p>
<p>All journeys begin with a single step. I could say my journey began when I was made dead, a no-name ghost in the woods. Or when I first met the dragon when I was too young to be afraid. Or maybe my journey began when the pains started, soon after the last thread of light disappeared in a horizontal sliver crushed between dark ominous clouds fast filling the sky and the earthly boundaries of both my chains and comfort as deemed by the gods:  the raw wilderness. Was it only less than a year ago that I was a naïve child, believing that the life ahead of me was mine to choose?  So innocent. So lost in my own little world of supposed freedom. Self-centered as only a child knows at the time. What a difference a year makes.</p>
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		By: Christine Dorman		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154557</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Christine Dorman]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Sep 2022 15:58:56 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154524&quot;&gt;deleyna&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks, Deleyna! :)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154524">deleyna</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks, Deleyna! 🙂</p>
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		By: Jeri Hoag		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jeri Hoag]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Sep 2022 13:43:09 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Shannon Brady turned the corner for the hallway to her professor’s office. She sighed at the sight of the long corridor. Why is it always dark too? It should&#039;ve been short like her soon to be museum career.

Working Title: Fate&#039;s Wish, Romantic Suspense]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Shannon Brady turned the corner for the hallway to her professor’s office. She sighed at the sight of the long corridor. Why is it always dark too? It should've been short like her soon to be museum career.</p>
<p>Working Title: Fate's Wish, Romantic Suspense</p>
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		By: JACQUOLYN		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154552</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[JACQUOLYN]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Sep 2022 05:07:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154460&quot;&gt;Vanessa Foster&lt;/a&gt;.

An instant hit of melancholy for me. Well done.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154460">Vanessa Foster</a>.</p>
<p>An instant hit of melancholy for me. Well done.</p>
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		By: Jenny Hansen		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenny Hansen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Sep 2022 02:57:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154491&quot;&gt;Lynette&lt;/a&gt;.

Exactly. I really like that contrast.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154491">Lynette</a>.</p>
<p>Exactly. I really like that contrast.</p>
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		By: Cordia		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Cordia]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Sep 2022 00:56:59 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154544&quot;&gt;JACQUOLYN&lt;/a&gt;.

She&#039;s a girl with two father, two countries and no place to call home.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154544">JACQUOLYN</a>.</p>
<p>She's a girl with two father, two countries and no place to call home.</p>
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		By: Cordia		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Cordia]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Sep 2022 00:56:16 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154519&quot;&gt;deleyna&lt;/a&gt;.

Happy Dance!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/08/its-open-mic-day-at-wits-share-your-first-lines/#comment-154519">deleyna</a>.</p>
<p>Happy Dance!</p>
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