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		By: Leon Conrad		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Leon Conrad]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Oct 2023 04:38:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2023/10/the-art-of-expanding-and-condensing-a-story/#comment-160668&quot;&gt;Lisa Norman&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank you, Lisa - I&#039;m glad you find the approach helpful. Stories can be a bit like bread dough: Knead. Let rise. Knock back. Bake. Break off bits to enjoy. 
I think we underestimate the potential that any story has to generate microfiction, poetry, haikus, cameo pieces, reflective essays, and so much more. All of these involve either expanding a tiny moment and looking at it from different angles, or condensing a longer story into a key moment, distilling its essence down to a smaller form. Yeast promotes expansion. Gluten provides tension. 
Stories are the bread of life.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2023/10/the-art-of-expanding-and-condensing-a-story/#comment-160668">Lisa Norman</a>.</p>
<p>Thank you, Lisa - I'm glad you find the approach helpful. Stories can be a bit like bread dough: Knead. Let rise. Knock back. Bake. Break off bits to enjoy.<br />
I think we underestimate the potential that any story has to generate microfiction, poetry, haikus, cameo pieces, reflective essays, and so much more. All of these involve either expanding a tiny moment and looking at it from different angles, or condensing a longer story into a key moment, distilling its essence down to a smaller form. Yeast promotes expansion. Gluten provides tension.<br />
Stories are the bread of life.</p>
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		By: Leon Conrad		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Leon Conrad]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Oct 2023 04:30:13 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2023/10/the-art-of-expanding-and-condensing-a-story/#comment-160663&quot;&gt;Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank you for your comment, Alicia, which made me think about the reading practices you brought up: skipping over things, filling in gaps imaginatively. And then there&#039;s the &#039;just right&#039; - where we are immersed in a story, where we can lose ourselves in it, where we can just follow the flow of events as they are told, or revisit a well-told story and enjoy discovering the unfamiliar familiarity in it. Isn&#039;t this why we engage with story in the first place?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2023/10/the-art-of-expanding-and-condensing-a-story/#comment-160663">Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt</a>.</p>
<p>Thank you for your comment, Alicia, which made me think about the reading practices you brought up: skipping over things, filling in gaps imaginatively. And then there's the 'just right' - where we are immersed in a story, where we can lose ourselves in it, where we can just follow the flow of events as they are told, or revisit a well-told story and enjoy discovering the unfamiliar familiarity in it. Isn't this why we engage with story in the first place?</p>
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		By: Lisa Norman		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa Norman]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Oct 2023 03:05:34 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I jokingly comment that I can&#039;t write short stories, because they always grow into novels. I love your approach to story. It helps me see how I could condense some areas. I like this approach to the flow of story.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I jokingly comment that I can't write short stories, because they always grow into novels. I love your approach to story. It helps me see how I could condense some areas. I like this approach to the flow of story.</p>
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		By: Lynette M Burrows		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lynette M Burrows]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Oct 2023 22:52:49 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[My earliest published fiction were 500-700 word stories for children&#039;s magazines. I had to learn how to expand stories to write novels. Now I write flash fiction from time to time, but I prefer novel length. I like being able to plumb the depths of characters and situations.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My earliest published fiction were 500-700 word stories for children's magazines. I had to learn how to expand stories to write novels. Now I write flash fiction from time to time, but I prefer novel length. I like being able to plumb the depths of characters and situations.</p>
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		By: Eldred Bird		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Eldred Bird]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Oct 2023 22:16:07 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;ve written a lot of six word stories over the years, as well as flash fiction, short stories, and novels. I&#039;ve managed to get pretty proficient at condensing and expanding to fit the need. Overall, I tend to let the story dictate the length. As I write, the characters and the story let me know when I&#039;m on the mark...okay, also my editors and beta readers. They know how to keep me honest.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I've written a lot of six word stories over the years, as well as flash fiction, short stories, and novels. I've managed to get pretty proficient at condensing and expanding to fit the need. Overall, I tend to let the story dictate the length. As I write, the characters and the story let me know when I'm on the mark...okay, also my editors and beta readers. They know how to keep me honest.</p>
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		By: Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2023/10/the-art-of-expanding-and-condensing-a-story/#comment-160663</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Oct 2023 19:09:49 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Pieces of story: condensed and expanded to fill the story need, the &#039;feel&#039; of &#039;just the right size/length&#039; that is part of becoming a pro at what we do.

Because anything less than the right length will feel WRONG to the reader.

It requires the self-discipline to lose beloved - if too long - lovely pieces of writing, and to worry about the effect of a piece that is somehow NOT enough.

The pace, the balance - each writer&#039;s special take.

And something readers can manage a little (skipping and skimming the boring stuff, thinking along fan fiction lines for things originally too terse), but that&#039;s all.

Best served by finding authors where you instinctively feel at home. Like the story of the three bears: just right.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Pieces of story: condensed and expanded to fill the story need, the 'feel' of 'just the right size/length' that is part of becoming a pro at what we do.</p>
<p>Because anything less than the right length will feel WRONG to the reader.</p>
<p>It requires the self-discipline to lose beloved - if too long - lovely pieces of writing, and to worry about the effect of a piece that is somehow NOT enough.</p>
<p>The pace, the balance - each writer's special take.</p>
<p>And something readers can manage a little (skipping and skimming the boring stuff, thinking along fan fiction lines for things originally too terse), but that's all.</p>
<p>Best served by finding authors where you instinctively feel at home. Like the story of the three bears: just right.</p>
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		By: Ellen Buikema		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2023/10/the-art-of-expanding-and-condensing-a-story/#comment-160661</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Ellen Buikema]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Oct 2023 16:31:45 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[For condensing a story, I think about Flash Fiction and how concise that must be.

The one sentence story by Hemingway that you included always makes me sad. It&#039;s amazing how much power is contained in such few words.

Thank you for this thought provoking article, Leon.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For condensing a story, I think about Flash Fiction and how concise that must be.</p>
<p>The one sentence story by Hemingway that you included always makes me sad. It's amazing how much power is contained in such few words.</p>
<p>Thank you for this thought provoking article, Leon.</p>
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