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		By: Sandy Vaile		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-166076</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sandy Vaile]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Aug 2024 01:02:02 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-166039&quot;&gt;Julia&lt;/a&gt;.

Hi Julia,
So pleased you enjoyed the post and I hope you can apply some of it to your story. 
You are spot on that there are plenty of awesome articles on this blog. 

Come on over and join my FB group if you&#039;d like more support and tips. 

Best of luck with your writing.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-166039">Julia</a>.</p>
<p>Hi Julia,<br />
So pleased you enjoyed the post and I hope you can apply some of it to your story.<br />
You are spot on that there are plenty of awesome articles on this blog. </p>
<p>Come on over and join my FB group if you'd like more support and tips. </p>
<p>Best of luck with your writing.</p>
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		By: Sandy Vaile		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sandy Vaile]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Aug 2024 01:01:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-166039&quot;&gt;Julia&lt;/a&gt;.

Hi Julia,
So pleased you enjoyed the post and I hope you can apply some of it to your story. 
You are spot on that there are plenty of awesome articles on this blog. 

Come on over and join my FB group if you&#039;d like more support and tips. 

Happy writing.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-166039">Julia</a>.</p>
<p>Hi Julia,<br />
So pleased you enjoyed the post and I hope you can apply some of it to your story.<br />
You are spot on that there are plenty of awesome articles on this blog. </p>
<p>Come on over and join my FB group if you'd like more support and tips. </p>
<p>Happy writing.</p>
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		By: Julia		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-166039</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Julia]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Aug 2024 10:59:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thank you, Sandy. A post full of actionable advice that most of us need at some point. I will keep this where I can easily refer to it as I edit my YA novel. There are no dud posts in Writers in the Storm, but this is particularly practical and helpful.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Sandy. A post full of actionable advice that most of us need at some point. I will keep this where I can easily refer to it as I edit my YA novel. There are no dud posts in Writers in the Storm, but this is particularly practical and helpful.</p>
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		By: Sandy Vaile		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-166000</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sandy Vaile]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Aug 2024 23:58:11 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165997&quot;&gt;Lisa Fellinger&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks for sharing your experience, Lisa. 
It&#039;s wonderful that you found the article on point. 
Feel free to save the link to share with your editing clients. 

Whta genre do you write?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165997">Lisa Fellinger</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks for sharing your experience, Lisa.<br />
It's wonderful that you found the article on point.<br />
Feel free to save the link to share with your editing clients. </p>
<p>Whta genre do you write?</p>
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		By: Lisa Fellinger		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165997</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa Fellinger]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Aug 2024 20:05:15 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is a great post with great tips. I&#039;ve found with my own manuscripts and those I edit that the &quot;murky middle&quot; problems often boil down to the writer not having a clear sense of the story they really want to tell and what that message is. This outlined so clearly why the middle is so challenging and how to make it easier. Thanks for sharing!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is a great post with great tips. I've found with my own manuscripts and those I edit that the "murky middle" problems often boil down to the writer not having a clear sense of the story they really want to tell and what that message is. This outlined so clearly why the middle is so challenging and how to make it easier. Thanks for sharing!</p>
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		By: Sandy Vaile		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165993</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sandy Vaile]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Aug 2024 03:28:14 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165992&quot;&gt;denise&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks for reading, Denise.
What are you writing at the moment?

I&#039;m working on edits for a Christmas romance novella.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165992">denise</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks for reading, Denise.<br />
What are you writing at the moment?</p>
<p>I'm working on edits for a Christmas romance novella.</p>
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		By: denise		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165992</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[denise]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Aug 2024 02:27:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Great tips and advice for moving the story forward!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great tips and advice for moving the story forward!</p>
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		By: Sandy Vaile		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165991</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sandy Vaile]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Aug 2024 00:19:31 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165990&quot;&gt;Karen Mace&lt;/a&gt;.

You are welcome, Karen.
It&#039;s funny how things appear just when we need them. 

What are you currently working on?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165990">Karen Mace</a>.</p>
<p>You are welcome, Karen.<br />
It's funny how things appear just when we need them. </p>
<p>What are you currently working on?</p>
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		By: Karen Mace		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165990</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Karen Mace]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Aug 2024 23:09:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thanks Sandy. A very helpful and timely post for me 😊]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Sandy. A very helpful and timely post for me 😊</p>
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		By: Sandy Vaile		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165989</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sandy Vaile]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Aug 2024 20:02:04 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165987&quot;&gt;Kathy Steinemann&lt;/a&gt;.

Gosh they are dreadful things, Kathy, and it doesn&#039;t help when the old brain readers what it &#039;thinks&#039; should be on the page rather than what &#039;is&#039; on the page. 

I didn&#039;t find Kathy all the difficult to spell (just kidding, I know you&#039;re talking about your surname). 

Glad you enjoyed the blog and thanks a million for sharing. 
I&#039;ve connected you on social media.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2024/08/4-ways-to-avoid-a-saggy-middle-in-your-novel/#comment-165987">Kathy Steinemann</a>.</p>
<p>Gosh they are dreadful things, Kathy, and it doesn't help when the old brain readers what it 'thinks' should be on the page rather than what 'is' on the page. </p>
<p>I didn't find Kathy all the difficult to spell (just kidding, I know you're talking about your surname). </p>
<p>Glad you enjoyed the blog and thanks a million for sharing.<br />
I've connected you on social media.</p>
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