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		By: Jerold H. Tabbott		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Mar 2025 02:38:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[You mention many good points, but I have to say the analogy, demolishing and rebuilding a home, doesn&#039;t quite work for me. It seems to detract from getting to and detailing your points. I write 3rd person, omniscient, past tense since my stories are very dialogue-driven, involving complex relationships and plotting.

Yet I&#039;d say my characters are mid-depth POVs. I find it particularly useful when two adversarial characters&#039; internal responses don&#039;t match their spoken words in an exchange. This piques readers&#039; interest and expectations, and often injects humor (a private joke the reader and protagonist know, but the antagonist does not).]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You mention many good points, but I have to say the analogy, demolishing and rebuilding a home, doesn't quite work for me. It seems to detract from getting to and detailing your points. I write 3rd person, omniscient, past tense since my stories are very dialogue-driven, involving complex relationships and plotting.</p>
<p>Yet I'd say my characters are mid-depth POVs. I find it particularly useful when two adversarial characters' internal responses don't match their spoken words in an exchange. This piques readers' interest and expectations, and often injects humor (a private joke the reader and protagonist know, but the antagonist does not).</p>
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		By: Lisa Hall-Wilson		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa Hall-Wilson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 03 Mar 2025 14:26:12 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/02/the-essential-deep-pov-checklist-11-tips-for-better-writing/#comment-169886&quot;&gt;Matthew&lt;/a&gt;.

I don&#039;t see deep pov used a lot in literary fiction. I don&#039;t see it alot in mystery/suspense genre, not because it wouldn&#039;t work, but because many writers prefer to keep secrets from the reader that the POV character knows, and that doesn&#039;t work with deep POV. I would love to read a deep POV mystery.
Historicals are another genre that don&#039;t use a lot of deep POV, thought they could (and should imo), because of the emphasis on description and setting.
First Person isn&#039;t automatically deep POV, and the use of the narrator voice conflicts with deep POV, but there are other tools of deep POV that get used a lot.
This is used quite a lot by romance and fantasy. I think it could be quite useful for thriller, but I don&#039;t tend to read those so I can&#039;t say if anyone&#039;s using them.
Deep POV is used a lot in YA, but MG is harder because those readers tend to lack the world experience required to understand deep POV without explanation.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/02/the-essential-deep-pov-checklist-11-tips-for-better-writing/#comment-169886">Matthew</a>.</p>
<p>I don't see deep pov used a lot in literary fiction. I don't see it alot in mystery/suspense genre, not because it wouldn't work, but because many writers prefer to keep secrets from the reader that the POV character knows, and that doesn't work with deep POV. I would love to read a deep POV mystery.<br />
Historicals are another genre that don't use a lot of deep POV, thought they could (and should imo), because of the emphasis on description and setting.<br />
First Person isn't automatically deep POV, and the use of the narrator voice conflicts with deep POV, but there are other tools of deep POV that get used a lot.<br />
This is used quite a lot by romance and fantasy. I think it could be quite useful for thriller, but I don't tend to read those so I can't say if anyone's using them.<br />
Deep POV is used a lot in YA, but MG is harder because those readers tend to lack the world experience required to understand deep POV without explanation.</p>
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		By: Jenny Hansen		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenny Hansen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 03 Mar 2025 13:35:01 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/02/the-essential-deep-pov-checklist-11-tips-for-better-writing/#comment-169914&quot;&gt;Deb&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks for re-subscribing, Deb!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/02/the-essential-deep-pov-checklist-11-tips-for-better-writing/#comment-169914">Deb</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks for re-subscribing, Deb!</p>
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		By: Deb		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Deb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 03 Mar 2025 11:09:56 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[For some reason I&#039;m no longer getting email/newsletters from you so I&#039;m subscribing again. You have helped me so much!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For some reason I'm no longer getting email/newsletters from you so I'm subscribing again. You have helped me so much!</p>
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		By: Matthew		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Matthew]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 28 Feb 2025 17:10:59 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hi Lisa. Nice essay. Would be good to discuss in what kinds of stories this is good or needed, and which it is not or overkill.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Lisa. Nice essay. Would be good to discuss in what kinds of stories this is good or needed, and which it is not or overkill.</p>
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		By: Lisa Hall-Wilson		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa Hall-Wilson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Feb 2025 19:50:57 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/02/the-essential-deep-pov-checklist-11-tips-for-better-writing/#comment-169869&quot;&gt;denise&lt;/a&gt;.

Awesome. If you&#039;re looking to go deeper into any of these topics, I&#039;ve been writing here at WITS for a few years, plus there&#039;s more on my own blog.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/02/the-essential-deep-pov-checklist-11-tips-for-better-writing/#comment-169869">denise</a>.</p>
<p>Awesome. If you're looking to go deeper into any of these topics, I've been writing here at WITS for a few years, plus there's more on my own blog.</p>
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		By: Lisa Hall-Wilson		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa Hall-Wilson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Feb 2025 19:50:13 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/02/the-essential-deep-pov-checklist-11-tips-for-better-writing/#comment-169867&quot;&gt;Bryan J Fagan&lt;/a&gt;.

Glad you found it helpful.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/02/the-essential-deep-pov-checklist-11-tips-for-better-writing/#comment-169867">Bryan J Fagan</a>.</p>
<p>Glad you found it helpful.</p>
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		By: denise		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[denise]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Feb 2025 06:28:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thank you, this is very helpful.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, this is very helpful.</p>
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		By: Bryan J Fagan		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Bryan J Fagan]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Feb 2025 04:31:15 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Good stuff here. Thank you.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good stuff here. Thank you.</p>
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		By: Jennifer Tooker		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jennifer Tooker]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Feb 2025 02:23:33 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/02/the-essential-deep-pov-checklist-11-tips-for-better-writing/#comment-169860&quot;&gt;Jenny Hansen&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks, Jenny!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/02/the-essential-deep-pov-checklist-11-tips-for-better-writing/#comment-169860">Jenny Hansen</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks, Jenny!</p>
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