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		By: Jennifer Windrow		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170888</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jennifer Windrow]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Apr 2025 03:02:27 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170876&quot;&gt;Jerold Tabbott&lt;/a&gt;.

It sounds like you have a really great system to make sure you plug all those icky plot holes. 

And you can always use those throw away stories for marketing material later!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170876">Jerold Tabbott</a>.</p>
<p>It sounds like you have a really great system to make sure you plug all those icky plot holes. </p>
<p>And you can always use those throw away stories for marketing material later!</p>
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		By: Jennifer Windrow		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170887</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jennifer Windrow]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Apr 2025 02:59:50 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170873&quot;&gt;Meryl Brown Tobin&lt;/a&gt;.

You’re very welcome. And isn’t it great when your characters take over your life??]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170873">Meryl Brown Tobin</a>.</p>
<p>You’re very welcome. And isn’t it great when your characters take over your life??</p>
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		By: Jerold Tabbott		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170876</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jerold Tabbott]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Apr 2025 13:18:34 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Nice article, these are all things I ask myself when writing. However, that’s because I typically favor an ensemble cast of characters and use 3rd person, omniscient in past tense. 

I also favor reflecting complex worlds, where remote events color my characters’ actions and inform readers of challenges and results. In some instances I use “throwaway” characters and scenes. I’ve found, though, these are sometimes so interesting as to expand their roles. A throwaway character might fit a more useful role. A background detail might be tweaked to strengthen foreshadowing of a key revelation. Writing, I enjoy in discovering these new uses and hope readers will be equally delighted.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice article, these are all things I ask myself when writing. However, that’s because I typically favor an ensemble cast of characters and use 3rd person, omniscient in past tense. </p>
<p>I also favor reflecting complex worlds, where remote events color my characters’ actions and inform readers of challenges and results. In some instances I use “throwaway” characters and scenes. I’ve found, though, these are sometimes so interesting as to expand their roles. A throwaway character might fit a more useful role. A background detail might be tweaked to strengthen foreshadowing of a key revelation. Writing, I enjoy in discovering these new uses and hope readers will be equally delighted.</p>
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		By: Meryl Brown Tobin		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170873</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Meryl Brown Tobin]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Apr 2025 23:45:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thanks for analyzing the structure of a novel, Jenn. When I start a novel, I have a rough idea where I&#039;m going but my characters tend to take over to such an extent I sometimes can&#039;t wait to get up of a morning and see what&#039;s going to happen next. However, I do know what it is to have long dialogues or internal thoughts that affect pacing and so need cutting, removing or moving.  Thanks for a great read for novelists!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for analyzing the structure of a novel, Jenn. When I start a novel, I have a rough idea where I'm going but my characters tend to take over to such an extent I sometimes can't wait to get up of a morning and see what's going to happen next. However, I do know what it is to have long dialogues or internal thoughts that affect pacing and so need cutting, removing or moving.  Thanks for a great read for novelists!</p>
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		By: Jennifer Windrow		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170833</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jennifer Windrow]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2025 04:18:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170830&quot;&gt;J.E. Barnard&lt;/a&gt;.

I’m really glad you got something good from it.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170830">J.E. Barnard</a>.</p>
<p>I’m really glad you got something good from it.</p>
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		By: Jennifer Windrow		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170832</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jennifer Windrow]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2025 03:44:22 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170829&quot;&gt;Jenny Hansen&lt;/a&gt;.

It really varies. Some charge by the page, some a flat fee. It’s not a cheap edit, but so worth it.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170829">Jenny Hansen</a>.</p>
<p>It really varies. Some charge by the page, some a flat fee. It’s not a cheap edit, but so worth it.</p>
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		By: Jennifer Windrow		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170831</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jennifer Windrow]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2025 03:43:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170826&quot;&gt;denise&lt;/a&gt;.

It’s such a fun thing to do! I adore getting to play in other peoples worlds!!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170826">denise</a>.</p>
<p>It’s such a fun thing to do! I adore getting to play in other peoples worlds!!</p>
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		By: J.E. Barnard		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170830</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[J.E. Barnard]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2025 03:35:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Excellent commentary, thanks. I&#039;ve added this post to my &#039;Other Resources for Writers&#039; blog page.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent commentary, thanks. I've added this post to my 'Other Resources for Writers' blog page.</p>
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		By: Jenny Hansen		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170829</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenny Hansen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2025 03:31:25 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;ve never actually gone to a developmental editor with my work. How much should I expect to pay (ballpark)?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I've never actually gone to a developmental editor with my work. How much should I expect to pay (ballpark)?</p>
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		By: Jenny Hansen		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170828</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenny Hansen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2025 03:30:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170819&quot;&gt;Lynette M Burrows&lt;/a&gt;.

Those are some stellar critique partners, Lynette!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/04/a-peek-inside-the-mind-of-a-developmental-editor/#comment-170819">Lynette M Burrows</a>.</p>
<p>Those are some stellar critique partners, Lynette!</p>
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