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		By: CryptoRobotics		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Oct 2025 19:35:34 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-173732&quot;&gt;seveulear&lt;/a&gt;.

Connect multiple exchange APIs securely in one place: &#060;a href=&#034;[Link deleted]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-173732">seveulear</a>.</p>
<p>Connect multiple exchange APIs securely in one place: &lt;a href=&quot;[Link deleted]</p>
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		By: seveulear		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Oct 2025 17:31:57 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171400&quot;&gt;wis&lt;/a&gt;.

Your post on such an teresting subject has left me speechless. I regularlyly check out your blogs and stay current by reading the material that you offer; nevertheless, the blog that you have posted today is the one that I appreciate the most.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171400">wis</a>.</p>
<p>Your post on such an teresting subject has left me speechless. I regularlyly check out your blogs and stay current by reading the material that you offer; nevertheless, the blog that you have posted today is the one that I appreciate the most.</p>
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		By: wis		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[wis]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 May 2025 07:04:06 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[No need for internet, no need to grind, just you and the mouse. &lt;a href=&quot;https://drift-boss.pro&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow ugc&quot;&gt;Drift Boss&lt;/a&gt; a light but extremely engaging game!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>No need for internet, no need to grind, just you and the mouse. <a href="https://drift-boss.pro" rel="nofollow ugc">Drift Boss</a> a light but extremely engaging game!</p>
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		By: Lynette M Burrows		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lynette M Burrows]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 May 2025 01:51:02 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171356&quot;&gt;Jenny Hansen&lt;/a&gt;.

Head hopping is extremely easy to do even for someone who finds POV easier than most. Thanks for sharing, Jenny.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171356">Jenny Hansen</a>.</p>
<p>Head hopping is extremely easy to do even for someone who finds POV easier than most. Thanks for sharing, Jenny.</p>
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		By: Jenny Hansen		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenny Hansen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 May 2025 20:49:57 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I tend to write stories in third person, but sometimes I enjoy a good foray into first person. 

I will say that POV has always been a struggle for me. I&#039;m naturally curious and I want to know what EVERYONE is thinking about. That doesn&#039;t work for a story, so I had to get better at all the tools so there was no head-hopping. (Like there was in my early decades-ago drafts that I deleted all traces of. LOL)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I tend to write stories in third person, but sometimes I enjoy a good foray into first person. </p>
<p>I will say that POV has always been a struggle for me. I'm naturally curious and I want to know what EVERYONE is thinking about. That doesn't work for a story, so I had to get better at all the tools so there was no head-hopping. (Like there was in my early decades-ago drafts that I deleted all traces of. LOL)</p>
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		By: Lynette M Burrows		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171352</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lynette M Burrows]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 May 2025 12:32:14 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171350&quot;&gt;denise&lt;/a&gt;.

That’s what I find best for me, Denise. Thanks for sharing.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171350">denise</a>.</p>
<p>That’s what I find best for me, Denise. Thanks for sharing.</p>
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		By: denise		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[denise]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 May 2025 05:22:09 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I write in deep third person.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I write in deep third person.</p>
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		By: Lynette M Burrows		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171346</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lynette M Burrows]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 May 2025 16:44:08 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171345&quot;&gt;Matthew&lt;/a&gt;.

I&#039;m glad you&#039;ve found what feels natural and can ignore anyone who denigrates your style of writing.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171345">Matthew</a>.</p>
<p>I'm glad you've found what feels natural and can ignore anyone who denigrates your style of writing.</p>
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		By: Matthew		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Matthew]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 May 2025 15:37:20 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[First person is most natural for me. It seems to suit the farcical stories I write. Most &quot;serious authors&quot; writing on writing denigrate first person POV. &quot;How to Write Novels like Tolstoy&quot; by Richard Cohen one of the few books to give it some play.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>First person is most natural for me. It seems to suit the farcical stories I write. Most "serious authors" writing on writing denigrate first person POV. "How to Write Novels like Tolstoy" by Richard Cohen one of the few books to give it some play.</p>
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		By: Lynette M Burrows		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171343</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lynette M Burrows]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 May 2025 14:45:54 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171340&quot;&gt;J. H. Tabbott&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank&#039;s for reading, J.H. I understand your definition of Third Person and it obviously works for you. The most important thing, IMHO, is to keep doing what works for you and your readers.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/05/choose-a-powerful-foundation-for-your-story-part-two/#comment-171340">J. H. Tabbott</a>.</p>
<p>Thank's for reading, J.H. I understand your definition of Third Person and it obviously works for you. The most important thing, IMHO, is to keep doing what works for you and your readers.</p>
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