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		By: denise		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[denise]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 Nov 2025 05:34:02 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I think I did a pretty good job with evoking emotion in my latest MS.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think I did a pretty good job with evoking emotion in my latest MS.</p>
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		By: Jenny Hansen		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenny Hansen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 Nov 2025 03:46:11 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This post right here? This is my JAM, Jenn. This is what I write, and all the places I fall down in the early drafts. This is a really great thing for me to print and use in my edits. Many thanks to you.

And this: &quot;Real emotion hides between the words and in the silences, the stumbles, the things they can’t quite say.&quot; &lt;-- That&#039;s serious BOOM-age for me.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This post right here? This is my JAM, Jenn. This is what I write, and all the places I fall down in the early drafts. This is a really great thing for me to print and use in my edits. Many thanks to you.</p>
<p>And this: "Real emotion hides between the words and in the silences, the stumbles, the things they can’t quite say." <-- That's serious BOOM-age for me.
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		By: Jennifer Windrow		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jennifer Windrow]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 Nov 2025 02:01:31 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174707&quot;&gt;Brad&lt;/a&gt;.

That sounds like some wonderful advice. And I love that you can carry it forward into your writing!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174707">Brad</a>.</p>
<p>That sounds like some wonderful advice. And I love that you can carry it forward into your writing!</p>
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		By: Brad		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Brad]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Nov 2025 22:44:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174704&quot;&gt;Jenn Windrow&lt;/a&gt;.

I remember at a SAG event I attended the late actor, Uta Hagen, told me that as she would leave the stage after a scene she could use her body language without uttering a word to have the audience on the edge of their seats or even in tears. This is something I use with my characters in my stories and in directing plays and it does work well to connect with readers and theater attendees.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174704">Jenn Windrow</a>.</p>
<p>I remember at a SAG event I attended the late actor, Uta Hagen, told me that as she would leave the stage after a scene she could use her body language without uttering a word to have the audience on the edge of their seats or even in tears. This is something I use with my characters in my stories and in directing plays and it does work well to connect with readers and theater attendees.</p>
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		By: Jenn Windrow		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenn Windrow]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Nov 2025 18:09:23 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174702&quot;&gt;Jeanne Estridge&lt;/a&gt;.

If you don&#039;t already have it, grab a copy of the Emotions&#039;s Thesaurus and keep it on your desk. It is a wonder for those writers who struggle with getting emotion on the page. And when I write, I try to remember the saying, &quot;no tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.&quot; So make yourself cry, and you will make those readers cry too!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174702">Jeanne Estridge</a>.</p>
<p>If you don't already have it, grab a copy of the Emotions's Thesaurus and keep it on your desk. It is a wonder for those writers who struggle with getting emotion on the page. And when I write, I try to remember the saying, "no tears in the writer, no tears in the reader." So make yourself cry, and you will make those readers cry too!</p>
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		By: Jenn Windrow		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174703</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenn Windrow]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Nov 2025 18:07:21 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174700&quot;&gt;Debbie Vilardi&lt;/a&gt;.

YA is all about emotion, they want to feel all the feels when they read. That is why YA characters with a lot of angst are so popular, the reader can connect with them on a deep emotional level.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174700">Debbie Vilardi</a>.</p>
<p>YA is all about emotion, they want to feel all the feels when they read. That is why YA characters with a lot of angst are so popular, the reader can connect with them on a deep emotional level.</p>
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		By: Jeanne Estridge		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174702</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jeanne Estridge]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Nov 2025 17:29:57 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is great advice, Jenn. I feel like I (finally) have a good handle on plot, but I&#039;d like to be stronger at connecting with my readers on an emotional level.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is great advice, Jenn. I feel like I (finally) have a good handle on plot, but I'd like to be stronger at connecting with my readers on an emotional level.</p>
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		By: Debbie Vilardi		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174700</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Debbie Vilardi]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Nov 2025 16:18:38 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is also true for pretty much all YA. Young adults are trying to understand themselves and see how they fit into the larger world. Connecting with characters allows them to explore emotion and the causes for it in a safe space. In some sense, this is key to all narrative writing (though Deep POV isn&#039;t always the right choice.)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is also true for pretty much all YA. Young adults are trying to understand themselves and see how they fit into the larger world. Connecting with characters allows them to explore emotion and the causes for it in a safe space. In some sense, this is key to all narrative writing (though Deep POV isn't always the right choice.)</p>
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		By: Jennifer Windrow		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174699</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jennifer Windrow]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Nov 2025 15:31:59 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-edit-emotion-in-romance-womens-fiction/#comment-174698&quot;&gt;Gayla Crosby&lt;/a&gt;.

You’re welcome! I hope it helps!]]></description>
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<p>You’re welcome! I hope it helps!</p>
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		By: Gayla Crosby		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Gayla Crosby]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Nov 2025 15:19:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is great! It’s just what I needed to learn. Thanks so much!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is great! It’s just what I needed to learn. Thanks so much!</p>
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