Comments on: How to Use Perception to Create Subtext in Deep POV https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-use-perception-to-create-subtext-in-deep-pov/ A Blog On Writing Sun, 11 Jan 2026 07:16:33 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0.1 By: Vince https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-use-perception-to-create-subtext-in-deep-pov/#comment-175698 Sun, 11 Jan 2026 07:16:33 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=56082#comment-175698 Nice article

]]> By: Lisa Hall-Wilson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-use-perception-to-create-subtext-in-deep-pov/#comment-174937 Tue, 02 Dec 2025 02:56:44 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=56082#comment-174937 In reply to Sally M. Chetwynd.

I do speak virtually to writer’s groups 🙂

]]> By: Lisa Hall-Wilson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-use-perception-to-create-subtext-in-deep-pov/#comment-174936 Tue, 02 Dec 2025 02:55:46 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=56082#comment-174936 In reply to Debbie Vilardi.

Sounds challenging , for sure.

]]> By: Debbie Vilardi https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-use-perception-to-create-subtext-in-deep-pov/#comment-174927 Mon, 01 Dec 2025 15:49:22 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=56082#comment-174927 In reply to Lisa Hall-Wilson.

Yes. Omni may be a hard sell. But there is too much the reader needs to know that the character wouldn't even think about to make the story make sense. I started my first draft in first person and realized I was committing the worst sin in writing: confusing the reader. Omni allows for moving the lens in and out and reading a character's mind. So you can move way in. But it is very hard to write and keep consistent and not feel head-hoppy. It's giving me a run for my money.

]]> By: Sally M. Chetwynd https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-use-perception-to-create-subtext-in-deep-pov/#comment-174897 Fri, 28 Nov 2025 21:10:26 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=56082#comment-174897 A lot of material here will be useful when I put together a 2-hour workshop scheduled for late January at a local writing center. The workshop will be about editing, but editing and revision greatly overlap. (We'll be setting up a follow-up workshop on revision in the late spring.)

]]> By: Lisa Hall-Wilson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-use-perception-to-create-subtext-in-deep-pov/#comment-174880 Thu, 27 Nov 2025 19:22:41 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=56082#comment-174880 In reply to denise.

Great! Hope you find the examples I posted helpful as well!

]]> By: denise https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-use-perception-to-create-subtext-in-deep-pov/#comment-174873 Thu, 27 Nov 2025 06:09:24 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=56082#comment-174873 great ideas and ways to implement them.

]]> By: Lisa Hall-Wilson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-use-perception-to-create-subtext-in-deep-pov/#comment-174870 Wed, 26 Nov 2025 22:45:48 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=56082#comment-174870 In reply to Kris.

Thanks! I’ve been writing about deep pov for so very long. These deeper dives are what I consistently get requests for now.

]]> By: Lisa Hall-Wilson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-use-perception-to-create-subtext-in-deep-pov/#comment-174869 Wed, 26 Nov 2025 22:44:55 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=56082#comment-174869 In reply to Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt.

I’m glad you have your writing! It can be rewarding and cathartic for sure!

]]> By: Lisa Hall-Wilson https://writersinthestormblog.com/2025/11/how-to-use-perception-to-create-subtext-in-deep-pov/#comment-174868 Wed, 26 Nov 2025 22:44:10 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=56082#comment-174868 In reply to MIffie Seideman.

It’s like magic 🙂 lol I prefer to have to lean in and engage to understand what’s going on as well.

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