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		By: Cathy Feemster		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[I’m going to keep this article and read it many times in the future. My background is in journalism, so I constantly struggle to get past who what when why and how in my writing. You have given me a challenge to be committed to deep POV. Thanks.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I’m going to keep this article and read it many times in the future. My background is in journalism, so I constantly struggle to get past who what when why and how in my writing. You have given me a challenge to be committed to deep POV. Thanks.</p>
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		By: Jerold H. Tabbott		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jerold H. Tabbott]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Feb 2026 18:46:41 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Would you say one way of defining Deep POV from simple POV is the difference between reflecting physical response and reflecting cognitive (internal/emotional) response?

My novels (so far) have ensemble casts, so I use third person omni POV throughout. Typically, while still conforming to rules to avoid head-hopping, I&#039;ll allow up to three POVs within a scene. But only one is the primary POV, which might include &quot;contemplative&quot; thought. Others, I only show having &quot;reactive&quot; thoughts–expressions of surprise, shock, disbelief, rejection, etc. (&quot;What?&quot;  &quot;Oh, shit!&quot;  &quot;Impossible!&quot;  &quot;No! Not while I&#039;m around!&quot; ). These latter I use in italics.

Your comments on backstory possibly interfering with Deep POV were interesting. I really struggled with including the backstory on two of my characters in my second book. A big part of my problem, though, was that while I needed to provide them with deep, compelling motives for their actions and allegiances, I also needed to withhold their real identities secret until the climax. 

The result is that I had two chapters (one for each–a dream sequence and a flashback) that pop up unexpectedly, without any clear connection to the rest of the story events, but which readers know (because they are vivid, emotional childhood crises) must have some significance. In honesty, my hope is that readers just scratch their head, know these must have some significance, and then let them slip their memory until just before I introduce the &quot;big reveal.&quot;

I don&#039;t think I&#039;d classify my novels as being Deep POV, only that I have occasional elements of deep POV mixed in. If that&#039;s considered a thing....]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Would you say one way of defining Deep POV from simple POV is the difference between reflecting physical response and reflecting cognitive (internal/emotional) response?</p>
<p>My novels (so far) have ensemble casts, so I use third person omni POV throughout. Typically, while still conforming to rules to avoid head-hopping, I'll allow up to three POVs within a scene. But only one is the primary POV, which might include "contemplative" thought. Others, I only show having "reactive" thoughts–expressions of surprise, shock, disbelief, rejection, etc. ("What?"  "Oh, shit!"  "Impossible!"  "No! Not while I'm around!" ). These latter I use in italics.</p>
<p>Your comments on backstory possibly interfering with Deep POV were interesting. I really struggled with including the backstory on two of my characters in my second book. A big part of my problem, though, was that while I needed to provide them with deep, compelling motives for their actions and allegiances, I also needed to withhold their real identities secret until the climax. </p>
<p>The result is that I had two chapters (one for each–a dream sequence and a flashback) that pop up unexpectedly, without any clear connection to the rest of the story events, but which readers know (because they are vivid, emotional childhood crises) must have some significance. In honesty, my hope is that readers just scratch their head, know these must have some significance, and then let them slip their memory until just before I introduce the "big reveal."</p>
<p>I don't think I'd classify my novels as being Deep POV, only that I have occasional elements of deep POV mixed in. If that's considered a thing....</p>
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		By: Lisa Wilson		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa Wilson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Feb 2026 14:53:39 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/fix-flat-deep-pov-7-probing-questions-for-better-immersion/#comment-176398&quot;&gt;Susan Harris Howell&lt;/a&gt;.

Glad it was helpful.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/fix-flat-deep-pov-7-probing-questions-for-better-immersion/#comment-176398">Susan Harris Howell</a>.</p>
<p>Glad it was helpful.</p>
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		By: Lisa Wilson		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa Wilson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Feb 2026 14:53:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/fix-flat-deep-pov-7-probing-questions-for-better-immersion/#comment-176391&quot;&gt;Matthew Rapaport&lt;/a&gt;.

Absolutely. Going deep all the time is exhausting for writer and reader. Not every scene is served by deep POV. Sometime you just open a door, go to work, or fly across the country.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/fix-flat-deep-pov-7-probing-questions-for-better-immersion/#comment-176391">Matthew Rapaport</a>.</p>
<p>Absolutely. Going deep all the time is exhausting for writer and reader. Not every scene is served by deep POV. Sometime you just open a door, go to work, or fly across the country.</p>
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		By: Lisa Wilson		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa Wilson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Feb 2026 14:51:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/fix-flat-deep-pov-7-probing-questions-for-better-immersion/#comment-176388&quot;&gt;Julia&lt;/a&gt;.

The same questions still apply. Not every internal
Threat involves physical danger. If they’re rock climbing, is there any past experience intruding on the present? What’s at stake? Whether the climbing is part of the plot, or a device to facilitate struggle or even conversation, what’s at risk? Fear of failure? Identity - what if they slip in front of someone or they don’t have the right brand on their gear or there’s a stain on their pants? To a perfectionist a stain could be identity threatening. Does that make sense?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/fix-flat-deep-pov-7-probing-questions-for-better-immersion/#comment-176388">Julia</a>.</p>
<p>The same questions still apply. Not every internal<br />
Threat involves physical danger. If they’re rock climbing, is there any past experience intruding on the present? What’s at stake? Whether the climbing is part of the plot, or a device to facilitate struggle or even conversation, what’s at risk? Fear of failure? Identity - what if they slip in front of someone or they don’t have the right brand on their gear or there’s a stain on their pants? To a perfectionist a stain could be identity threatening. Does that make sense?</p>
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		By: Susan Harris Howell		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Susan Harris Howell]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Feb 2026 20:04:23 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thanks for the great examples that remind us what we&#039;re going for here.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the great examples that remind us what we're going for here.</p>
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		By: Matthew Rapaport		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Matthew Rapaport]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Feb 2026 06:59:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Helpful essay, thank you Lisa. I assume pacing considerations come into play here? Gut wrenching deep POV should be relieved with a flatter telling now and then. Not every scene deserves it.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Helpful essay, thank you Lisa. I assume pacing considerations come into play here? Gut wrenching deep POV should be relieved with a flatter telling now and then. Not every scene deserves it.</p>
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		By: Julia		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Julia]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Feb 2026 03:26:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I just read this again (still chewing over my scene!) and I have a question. Deep POV can&#039;t just apply to scenes where fear of failure, violence, social exposure, etc are involved, surely. What about when you want your reader to feel what the character feels in, say, a motorcycle race or rock climbing or swimming across a river? (I&#039;ll go back to thinking about my scene!)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just read this again (still chewing over my scene!) and I have a question. Deep POV can't just apply to scenes where fear of failure, violence, social exposure, etc are involved, surely. What about when you want your reader to feel what the character feels in, say, a motorcycle race or rock climbing or swimming across a river? (I'll go back to thinking about my scene!)</p>
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		By: Lisa Hall-Wilson		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/fix-flat-deep-pov-7-probing-questions-for-better-immersion/#comment-176382</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa Hall-Wilson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Feb 2026 19:07:24 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/fix-flat-deep-pov-7-probing-questions-for-better-immersion/#comment-176378&quot;&gt;Paula Cappa&lt;/a&gt;.

Great! Glad to hear it.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/fix-flat-deep-pov-7-probing-questions-for-better-immersion/#comment-176378">Paula Cappa</a>.</p>
<p>Great! Glad to hear it.</p>
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		By: Lisa Hall-Wilson		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa Hall-Wilson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Feb 2026 19:07:04 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/fix-flat-deep-pov-7-probing-questions-for-better-immersion/#comment-176376&quot;&gt;denise&lt;/a&gt;.

Awesome. I have tended to lean heavily on crit partners because I&#039;m too close to it for emotional arc edits.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/fix-flat-deep-pov-7-probing-questions-for-better-immersion/#comment-176376">denise</a>.</p>
<p>Awesome. I have tended to lean heavily on crit partners because I'm too close to it for emotional arc edits.</p>
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