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		By: Jenny Hansen		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenny Hansen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Feb 2026 02:14:12 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176401&quot;&gt;Lisa Norman&lt;/a&gt;.

ALL great ideas, Lisa!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176401">Lisa Norman</a>.</p>
<p>ALL great ideas, Lisa!</p>
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		By: Sarah (Sally) Hamer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah (Sally) Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 22 Feb 2026 13:05:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176424&quot;&gt;denise&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks, Denise!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176424">denise</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks, Denise!</p>
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		By: Sarah (Sally) Hamer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah (Sally) Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 22 Feb 2026 13:05:38 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176422&quot;&gt;Matthew&lt;/a&gt;.

Good! I find that good writers are often good readers, so they almost automatically check off good writing boxes. It&#039;s usually beginners who struggle with this.
Thanks for the comment!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176422">Matthew</a>.</p>
<p>Good! I find that good writers are often good readers, so they almost automatically check off good writing boxes. It's usually beginners who struggle with this.<br />
Thanks for the comment!</p>
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		By: denise		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[denise]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 22 Feb 2026 06:44:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Great reminder.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great reminder.</p>
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		By: Matthew		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Matthew]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 22 Feb 2026 04:46:27 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hi Sarah 🙋
I think this is the one piece of advice, for character and setting, that my story telling naturally follows 🤔🙄😂]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Sarah 🙋<br />
I think this is the one piece of advice, for character and setting, that my story telling naturally follows 🤔🙄😂</p>
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		By: Sarah Sally		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Sally]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 22 Feb 2026 04:03:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176420&quot;&gt;Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt&lt;/a&gt;.

Sounds like a good system. Thanks for commenting!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176420">Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt</a>.</p>
<p>Sounds like a good system. Thanks for commenting!</p>
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		By: Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176420</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 22 Feb 2026 02:57:32 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[For over 95% of my scenes, a new scene also means a switch in the pov character, so I lead with that character&#039;s name. Then scenes get a brief header with ONLY what has changed: place; day of week, date, time of day. 

I don&#039;t repeat the things which haven&#039;t changed.

Any other setting information comes somewhere in the first paragraphs, before the reader would ask themselves where or when they are.

It is as brief and specific as I can make it; in back and forth scenes, only the character name part of the header will change; the reader knows time has passed.

After the first few scenes of the first book, a reader knows the system, and the details have faded into the background, except that they know I will keep them in the loop with anything they need to know. I create the header in Scrivener to keep myself oriented while writing.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For over 95% of my scenes, a new scene also means a switch in the pov character, so I lead with that character's name. Then scenes get a brief header with ONLY what has changed: place; day of week, date, time of day. </p>
<p>I don't repeat the things which haven't changed.</p>
<p>Any other setting information comes somewhere in the first paragraphs, before the reader would ask themselves where or when they are.</p>
<p>It is as brief and specific as I can make it; in back and forth scenes, only the character name part of the header will change; the reader knows time has passed.</p>
<p>After the first few scenes of the first book, a reader knows the system, and the details have faded into the background, except that they know I will keep them in the loop with anything they need to know. I create the header in Scrivener to keep myself oriented while writing.</p>
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		By: Sarah (Sally) Hamer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah (Sally) Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Feb 2026 16:46:17 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176414&quot;&gt;Jacqueline Sheehan&lt;/a&gt;.

Jacqueline, unfair or not, it does help when a reader can remember things. But a lot of us (putting my hand up) read to enjoy and relax. I do a lot of heavily detailed, non-fiction research work where I have to pay focused attention in my day job so, me having to track down a fictional character or a previous scene or jump to a new place without really remembering where I&#039;ve been, really could make me quit reading. I hate to admit it -- I don&#039;t usually read complicated fiction. At least, not when I have so little down time. Give me something that does
Thanks for the post!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176414">Jacqueline Sheehan</a>.</p>
<p>Jacqueline, unfair or not, it does help when a reader can remember things. But a lot of us (putting my hand up) read to enjoy and relax. I do a lot of heavily detailed, non-fiction research work where I have to pay focused attention in my day job so, me having to track down a fictional character or a previous scene or jump to a new place without really remembering where I've been, really could make me quit reading. I hate to admit it -- I don't usually read complicated fiction. At least, not when I have so little down time. Give me something that does<br />
Thanks for the post!</p>
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		By: Jacqueline Sheehan		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jacqueline Sheehan]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Feb 2026 16:08:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This was so helpful. I teach writing workshops and your points are just what students need to hear. And me, too! I tend to think readers should have a longer memory for character details but that is unfair. We all need a nuanced reminder about who is who.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This was so helpful. I teach writing workshops and your points are just what students need to hear. And me, too! I tend to think readers should have a longer memory for character details but that is unfair. We all need a nuanced reminder about who is who.</p>
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		By: Sarah (Sally) Hamer		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176408</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah (Sally) Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Feb 2026 14:51:36 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176406&quot;&gt;Terry Odell&lt;/a&gt;.

Exactly! Good point!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/02/setting-the-stage-with-powerful-description/#comment-176406">Terry Odell</a>.</p>
<p>Exactly! Good point!</p>
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