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		By: Brenda May		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178672</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Brenda May]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Jul 2026 21:32:18 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is gold. It takes character development to a whole new universe. Clear, concise and brilliant. Thank you for sharing this with us.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is gold. It takes character development to a whole new universe. Clear, concise and brilliant. Thank you for sharing this with us.</p>
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		By: Sarah (Sally) Hamer		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178549</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah (Sally) Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Jun 2026 14:50:22 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178544&quot;&gt;Jackie Rod&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank you, Jackie! I love how you create your characters -- layered and alive!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178544">Jackie Rod</a>.</p>
<p>Thank you, Jackie! I love how you create your characters -- layered and alive!</p>
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		By: Jackie Rod		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jackie Rod]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 21 Jun 2026 22:02:09 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Great post, Sally!  
I loved the introduction before you even got to the Laws governing characters. Readers love characters who step off the pages and into their hearts. 
As always, thanks for sharing your expertise. You rock!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great post, Sally!<br />
I loved the introduction before you even got to the Laws governing characters. Readers love characters who step off the pages and into their hearts.<br />
As always, thanks for sharing your expertise. You rock!</p>
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		By: Sarah (Sally) Hamer		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178538</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah (Sally) Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Jun 2026 23:45:08 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178537&quot;&gt;Moya Bawden&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank you, Moya. I&#039;m glad it &quot;talked&quot; to you.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178537">Moya Bawden</a>.</p>
<p>Thank you, Moya. I'm glad it "talked" to you.</p>
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		By: Moya Bawden		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178537</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Moya Bawden]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Jun 2026 23:03:59 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This was a wonderful,respectful look at the core of writing creativity. I will be keeping it for encouragement on the days my imaginary companions choose not to speak to me. Thank you so much for expressing this so well.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This was a wonderful,respectful look at the core of writing creativity. I will be keeping it for encouragement on the days my imaginary companions choose not to speak to me. Thank you so much for expressing this so well.</p>
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		By: Sarah (Sally) Hamer		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178536</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah (Sally) Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Jun 2026 22:02:26 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178528&quot;&gt;Jennifer Robinson aka Jennifer Larmar - author&lt;/a&gt;.

It is!  LOL!!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178528">Jennifer Robinson aka Jennifer Larmar - author</a>.</p>
<p>It is!  LOL!!</p>
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		By: Jennifer Robinson aka Jennifer Larmar - author		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178528</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jennifer Robinson aka Jennifer Larmar - author]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Jun 2026 15:42:46 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178518&quot;&gt;Sarah (Sally) Hamer&lt;/a&gt;.

Those wretched hangers-on who just won’t let you write in peace 😜
It’s a wonderful world we disappear into whenever we enter our characters’ minds ✍️📚🙏♥️]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178518">Sarah (Sally) Hamer</a>.</p>
<p>Those wretched hangers-on who just won’t let you write in peace 😜<br />
It’s a wonderful world we disappear into whenever we enter our characters’ minds ✍️📚🙏♥️</p>
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		By: Sarah (Sally) Hamer		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178518</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah (Sally) Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Jun 2026 22:23:20 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178517&quot;&gt;Jennifer Robinson aka Jennifer Larmar (author)&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank you, Jennifer. I feel the same way about my characters. They have to speak to me or they just don&#039;t work. I even have some still waiting in the corner of my mind who inhabit unfinished stories, scowling at me because I don&#039;t just get on with it. One day, I keep promising them! I really will allow them their days in the sun.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178517">Jennifer Robinson aka Jennifer Larmar (author)</a>.</p>
<p>Thank you, Jennifer. I feel the same way about my characters. They have to speak to me or they just don't work. I even have some still waiting in the corner of my mind who inhabit unfinished stories, scowling at me because I don't just get on with it. One day, I keep promising them! I really will allow them their days in the sun.</p>
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		By: Jennifer Robinson aka Jennifer Larmar (author)		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178517</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jennifer Robinson aka Jennifer Larmar (author)]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Jun 2026 21:31:37 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Your article is brilliant in every respect and perspective - a wonderful insight into that world we love to inhabit of bringing characters to life and taking them on all sorts of adventures: both the good and the bad.
  
The following portion fully resounded with me:

“A character who is alive will not let you write the wrong scene. They will not let you force them into a shape that doesn’t fit. They will not let you silence them when they need to speak.”

‘Lara’, one of the two protagonists in my first series, would often ‘speak to me’ as I was writing.  In two distinct places she took me down significant paths that were never part of my plans for her, and yet they were absolutely necessary to make her character and circumstances ‘real’ - both in simply telling her story, and also understanding the depth of the emotional, and often lonely, journey she endured learning to live without her soulmate. 

When I had my husband read the first draft of that very long manuscript, as he reached the second one I heard his unhindered exclamation, “What did you do THAT for?” 

I knew exactly what he was referring to and I’ve had several readers since state much the same thing in emails or text messages.  Both decisions were necessary ‘evils’ that were both believable and yet took her down two distinctly different though significant paths for the eventual outcome.  

A few years ago, I stumbled across a fabulous online ‘short expose’ written by Winston Graham, the author of the Poldark series, where he was walking down a Cornish lane one evening and suddenly encountered Demelza, his leading lady.  

They had the must profound conversation as to why he had created her the way he did, what her life with Ross and all the other characters was like now, and simply a revealing of their thoughts of one another in this fictional scenario. 

I absolutely adored the following paragraph and could imagine a similar scene if I was to ever meet my Lara or Adam by chance…

‘We stood there for a long time, smiling at each other, eye searching eye, in mutual recognition of a strange bond. I felt an extraordinary moving intimacy with this woman whom I had never met before. I felt as if I could understand her closest feelings, even her most personal bodily secretions, the stirring of her spirit within her, as well as I ever had my own.’

Every second of their encounter I could imagine as a real experience for him because of the way characters do become a part of you, even though they are still distinct individuals in their own right with their own thoughts and desires.  

Thank you again.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Your article is brilliant in every respect and perspective - a wonderful insight into that world we love to inhabit of bringing characters to life and taking them on all sorts of adventures: both the good and the bad.</p>
<p>The following portion fully resounded with me:</p>
<p>“A character who is alive will not let you write the wrong scene. They will not let you force them into a shape that doesn’t fit. They will not let you silence them when they need to speak.”</p>
<p>‘Lara’, one of the two protagonists in my first series, would often ‘speak to me’ as I was writing.  In two distinct places she took me down significant paths that were never part of my plans for her, and yet they were absolutely necessary to make her character and circumstances ‘real’ - both in simply telling her story, and also understanding the depth of the emotional, and often lonely, journey she endured learning to live without her soulmate. </p>
<p>When I had my husband read the first draft of that very long manuscript, as he reached the second one I heard his unhindered exclamation, “What did you do THAT for?” </p>
<p>I knew exactly what he was referring to and I’ve had several readers since state much the same thing in emails or text messages.  Both decisions were necessary ‘evils’ that were both believable and yet took her down two distinctly different though significant paths for the eventual outcome.  </p>
<p>A few years ago, I stumbled across a fabulous online ‘short expose’ written by Winston Graham, the author of the Poldark series, where he was walking down a Cornish lane one evening and suddenly encountered Demelza, his leading lady.  </p>
<p>They had the must profound conversation as to why he had created her the way he did, what her life with Ross and all the other characters was like now, and simply a revealing of their thoughts of one another in this fictional scenario. </p>
<p>I absolutely adored the following paragraph and could imagine a similar scene if I was to ever meet my Lara or Adam by chance…</p>
<p>‘We stood there for a long time, smiling at each other, eye searching eye, in mutual recognition of a strange bond. I felt an extraordinary moving intimacy with this woman whom I had never met before. I felt as if I could understand her closest feelings, even her most personal bodily secretions, the stirring of her spirit within her, as well as I ever had my own.’</p>
<p>Every second of their encounter I could imagine as a real experience for him because of the way characters do become a part of you, even though they are still distinct individuals in their own right with their own thoughts and desires.  </p>
<p>Thank you again.</p>
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		By: Sarah (Sally) Hamer		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178515</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah (Sally) Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Jun 2026 20:23:25 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178508&quot;&gt;Karen lin&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank you, Karen!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/06/when-your-characters-begin-to-breathe/#comment-178508">Karen lin</a>.</p>
<p>Thank you, Karen!</p>
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