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		By: Julia		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178922</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Julia]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Jul 2026 00:32:13 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Wow, this is good. Especially the final section which sums it all up so punchily. Thank you.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, this is good. Especially the final section which sums it all up so punchily. Thank you.</p>
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		By: Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Jul 2026 05:02:18 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I tell my GWTW-length trilogy from the irregularly rotating pov of the three main characters, and by the end of Chapter 1, the reader should be comfortable with my system.

From my self-proclaimed redneck reviewer Pat Patterson:

&quot;...But while I was waiting for the reveal (which never came, because it&#039;s not THERE!) I found myself turning page after page, and DEVOURING the words, licking my lips figuratively at how delicious they were, and thinking: SHE CAN&#039;T KEEP THIS UP! There is no way she can continue to let me walk around and see and hear and feel what the characters are experiencing; except she did.
Kary is CLEARLY a hero, by any criteria you want to apply apart from armed combat, and she is the center of the book. She lives in isolation in New Hampshire, and writes; she suffers from Chronic Fatigue Syndrome, and it robbed her of her previous career as a physician, and gave her weak/treacherous husband the excuse he needed to rob her of her family. She has other grief in her life, but she does not share the pain casually.&quot;

Kary, but also Bianca (the villain) or Andrew could be the hero.

I aim to let the reader inhabit each as they tell their part of the story, from their pov, what they see as important and worth noting.

It has made it possible for me to write, too, because I channel the character whose pov the scene is, and I&#039;m subject to their focused pov when I decide what to describe or report.

The scene most often goes to the character most affected, but here and there I cheat because one character can tell something another doesn&#039;t see, and that&#039;s the part of the story that comes next.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I tell my GWTW-length trilogy from the irregularly rotating pov of the three main characters, and by the end of Chapter 1, the reader should be comfortable with my system.</p>
<p>From my self-proclaimed redneck reviewer Pat Patterson:</p>
<p>"...But while I was waiting for the reveal (which never came, because it's not THERE!) I found myself turning page after page, and DEVOURING the words, licking my lips figuratively at how delicious they were, and thinking: SHE CAN'T KEEP THIS UP! There is no way she can continue to let me walk around and see and hear and feel what the characters are experiencing; except she did.<br />
Kary is CLEARLY a hero, by any criteria you want to apply apart from armed combat, and she is the center of the book. She lives in isolation in New Hampshire, and writes; she suffers from Chronic Fatigue Syndrome, and it robbed her of her previous career as a physician, and gave her weak/treacherous husband the excuse he needed to rob her of her family. She has other grief in her life, but she does not share the pain casually."</p>
<p>Kary, but also Bianca (the villain) or Andrew could be the hero.</p>
<p>I aim to let the reader inhabit each as they tell their part of the story, from their pov, what they see as important and worth noting.</p>
<p>It has made it possible for me to write, too, because I channel the character whose pov the scene is, and I'm subject to their focused pov when I decide what to describe or report.</p>
<p>The scene most often goes to the character most affected, but here and there I cheat because one character can tell something another doesn't see, and that's the part of the story that comes next.</p>
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		By: Debbie Vilardi		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Debbie Vilardi]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Jul 2026 14:56:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178814&quot;&gt;J R Tomlin&lt;/a&gt;.

I see the series as in omniscient POV but with the author/narrator choosing to be close to Harry most of the time. There are a few other spots in the series where Rowling focuses on someone else. I suspect the connection between Harry and Voldemort happened so she could stay as close to close third  on Harry as possible, but still give the reader some info.

Tolkien is a master of what I call &quot;the baton pass.&quot; One character comes near to another and that new character becomes the focus seamlessly. There are scenes where I&#039;m trying to pull that off.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178814">J R Tomlin</a>.</p>
<p>I see the series as in omniscient POV but with the author/narrator choosing to be close to Harry most of the time. There are a few other spots in the series where Rowling focuses on someone else. I suspect the connection between Harry and Voldemort happened so she could stay as close to close third  on Harry as possible, but still give the reader some info.</p>
<p>Tolkien is a master of what I call "the baton pass." One character comes near to another and that new character becomes the focus seamlessly. There are scenes where I'm trying to pull that off.</p>
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		By: Sarah Sally Hamer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Sally Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Jul 2026 20:18:29 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178822&quot;&gt;Sally M. Chetwynd&lt;/a&gt;.

I agree, I think it will work. There probably are several other ways to do it but, I think, no matter what you use, as long as you stay consistent so the reader understands what you are saying and gets used to it, they&#039;ll get it and not even notice. It&#039;s often the abrupt changes that make it problematic.
Thanks for the comment!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178822">Sally M. Chetwynd</a>.</p>
<p>I agree, I think it will work. There probably are several other ways to do it but, I think, no matter what you use, as long as you stay consistent so the reader understands what you are saying and gets used to it, they'll get it and not even notice. It's often the abrupt changes that make it problematic.<br />
Thanks for the comment!</p>
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		By: Sally M. Chetwynd		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Jul 2026 17:17:29 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In my historical fiction WIP, the entire story needs to be seen from my single MC, in close third-person. But he does not experience all the pertinent events directly, so others come to him to report their experiences. Rather than include quotation marks for every paragraph of those others&#039; narratives (annoying), I am adding a space break, then telling those individuals&#039; stories (in third person), then indicating the return to my MC&#039;s POV with another space break. I think this will work.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In my historical fiction WIP, the entire story needs to be seen from my single MC, in close third-person. But he does not experience all the pertinent events directly, so others come to him to report their experiences. Rather than include quotation marks for every paragraph of those others' narratives (annoying), I am adding a space break, then telling those individuals' stories (in third person), then indicating the return to my MC's POV with another space break. I think this will work.</p>
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		By: Sarah Sally Hamer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Sally Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Jul 2026 13:07:23 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178817&quot;&gt;Karen A Lin&lt;/a&gt;.

That&#039;s the criteria for me too. Who has the most to say, tell, and lose. 
Thanks for the comment!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178817">Karen A Lin</a>.</p>
<p>That's the criteria for me too. Who has the most to say, tell, and lose.<br />
Thanks for the comment!</p>
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		By: Sarah Sally Hamer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Sally Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Jul 2026 13:06:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178816&quot;&gt;Lisa Norman (Deleyna Marr)&lt;/a&gt;.

I love to play with POV too. One of my students writes her scenes in every POV of every character and then chooses which one she thinks works best. Too much information for me -- and, my characters tend to take over in a scene so I don&#039;t get the chance to let anyone else talk, but an interesting way to play.
Thanks, Lisa!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178816">Lisa Norman (Deleyna Marr)</a>.</p>
<p>I love to play with POV too. One of my students writes her scenes in every POV of every character and then chooses which one she thinks works best. Too much information for me -- and, my characters tend to take over in a scene so I don't get the chance to let anyone else talk, but an interesting way to play.<br />
Thanks, Lisa!</p>
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		By: Sarah Sally Hamer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Sally Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Jul 2026 13:04:18 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178815&quot;&gt;denise&lt;/a&gt;.

Which is an excellent way to do it!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178815">denise</a>.</p>
<p>Which is an excellent way to do it!</p>
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		By: Sarah Sally Hamer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Sally Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Jul 2026 13:03:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178814&quot;&gt;J R Tomlin&lt;/a&gt;.

I believe that omniscient is one of the hardest POVs to write and to get right. Which is why it&#039;s so beautiful when we do get it right. And, of course, it really has little to do with what character we choose as our global storyteller, since the omniscient &quot;god&quot; is the one telling the story, not a character, and told from the outside, just relating what a character feels or thinks or says or does. 
Deep POV is the opposite, where we live inside a character, at least while we reading the book.
Thanks for the comment! A good starting point for a long and deep discussion!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/07/point-of-view-is-not-just-a-choice/#comment-178814">J R Tomlin</a>.</p>
<p>I believe that omniscient is one of the hardest POVs to write and to get right. Which is why it's so beautiful when we do get it right. And, of course, it really has little to do with what character we choose as our global storyteller, since the omniscient "god" is the one telling the story, not a character, and told from the outside, just relating what a character feels or thinks or says or does.<br />
Deep POV is the opposite, where we live inside a character, at least while we reading the book.<br />
Thanks for the comment! A good starting point for a long and deep discussion!</p>
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		By: Karen A Lin		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Karen A Lin]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Jul 2026 04:27:01 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Who has most emotional stakes.]]></description>
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