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		By: Julia		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Sep 2026 12:03:45 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I loved this, the post and all the discussion in the comments. I&#039;m not sure I have fully grasped it, but getting there. My three teen protagonists cross into a country very like Afghanistan in search of their kidnapped father. I would say the theme is, what would you do to save your brother? But maybe the soul is in the words of a young local man who offers his help. (Farid speaks in the local language, and the POV character translates for his brothers.)

&quot;‘Why’s he doing this?’ Kai asked.
     I asked Farid. He thought, his eyes not focused in the room, but seeing events we couldn’t see. ‘I was with the rebels, fighting the government. I did some bad things. Now I don’t believe in the rebel leaders. I don’t believe in the government, either. Now I think we must just do the good we can. You helped me in the clinic. The clinic helps thousands of my people. This is what God asks of us. To do good.’&quot;

Am I getting the idea? And, thank you,Sally.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I loved this, the post and all the discussion in the comments. I'm not sure I have fully grasped it, but getting there. My three teen protagonists cross into a country very like Afghanistan in search of their kidnapped father. I would say the theme is, what would you do to save your brother? But maybe the soul is in the words of a young local man who offers his help. (Farid speaks in the local language, and the POV character translates for his brothers.)</p>
<p>"‘Why’s he doing this?’ Kai asked.<br />
     I asked Farid. He thought, his eyes not focused in the room, but seeing events we couldn’t see. ‘I was with the rebels, fighting the government. I did some bad things. Now I don’t believe in the rebel leaders. I don’t believe in the government, either. Now I think we must just do the good we can. You helped me in the clinic. The clinic helps thousands of my people. This is what God asks of us. To do good.’"</p>
<p>Am I getting the idea? And, thank you,Sally.</p>
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		By: Sarah Sally Hamer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Sally Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2026 13:36:16 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/09/the-soul-of-a-story-and-the-places-it-hides/#comment-179630&quot;&gt;Rosemary Rigsby&lt;/a&gt;.

So glad to help, Rosemary. Thank you.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/09/the-soul-of-a-story-and-the-places-it-hides/#comment-179630">Rosemary Rigsby</a>.</p>
<p>So glad to help, Rosemary. Thank you.</p>
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		By: Rosemary Rigsby		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Rosemary Rigsby]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Sep 2026 15:58:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Oh, I needed to read this now. My editor has given me much to think about as I do final edits/revisions, and I trust her judgement. Yet, neither of us caught what the work is really about. Thankyou.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, I needed to read this now. My editor has given me much to think about as I do final edits/revisions, and I trust her judgement. Yet, neither of us caught what the work is really about. Thankyou.</p>
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		By: Sarah Sally Hamer		</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/09/the-soul-of-a-story-and-the-places-it-hides/#comment-179626</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Sally Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Sep 2026 12:21:28 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/09/the-soul-of-a-story-and-the-places-it-hides/#comment-179625&quot;&gt;Andrew&lt;/a&gt;.

What a wonderful way to say how finding the soul of a story works. The soul is NOT the big event. It&#039;s the underpinning, the human-ness, and, I believe, the part that changes the world.
Thanks, Andrew.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/09/the-soul-of-a-story-and-the-places-it-hides/#comment-179625">Andrew</a>.</p>
<p>What a wonderful way to say how finding the soul of a story works. The soul is NOT the big event. It's the underpinning, the human-ness, and, I believe, the part that changes the world.<br />
Thanks, Andrew.</p>
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		By: Andrew		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Andrew]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Sep 2026 04:27:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[As a science fiction writer, I’ve written stories that involve big events playing out across the stars, but I find the soul of the story shines out in the small moments.  Like in one, two characters (who have just traveled into space for the first time from a primitive planet) who are just sitting and watching the spaceships taking off and feeling the sense of awe.

Or in another novel where two immortal characters are having dinner with friends on another world and casually reminiscing about events that happened centuries ago before they left Earth.

These are little scenes that don’t really move the plot and are usually breathers before or after big action scenes. But they stay with me because what they evoke, the wonder of traveling to another world in the first example and the magnitude of time in the second.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As a science fiction writer, I’ve written stories that involve big events playing out across the stars, but I find the soul of the story shines out in the small moments.  Like in one, two characters (who have just traveled into space for the first time from a primitive planet) who are just sitting and watching the spaceships taking off and feeling the sense of awe.</p>
<p>Or in another novel where two immortal characters are having dinner with friends on another world and casually reminiscing about events that happened centuries ago before they left Earth.</p>
<p>These are little scenes that don’t really move the plot and are usually breathers before or after big action scenes. But they stay with me because what they evoke, the wonder of traveling to another world in the first example and the magnitude of time in the second.</p>
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		By: Sarah Sally Hamer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Sally Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 06 Sep 2026 22:37:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/09/the-soul-of-a-story-and-the-places-it-hides/#comment-179619&quot;&gt;Jerold Tabbott&lt;/a&gt;.

Honestly, I&#039;ve found that planning a soul story isn&#039;t as easy as it sounds. It often turns into a &quot;theme&quot; story instead. Not that it&#039;s a bad thing when it does! 

But letting the story unfold as it will often brings us to the main point of it as we go, and we discover the soul inside. 

I consider myself both a plotter AND a pantster, simply because I like to know where I&#039;m going while allowing the story to evolve and surprise me too. So, I rarely worry about the soul showing up. It will. When it&#039;s good and ready. 
Thanks, Jerold!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/09/the-soul-of-a-story-and-the-places-it-hides/#comment-179619">Jerold Tabbott</a>.</p>
<p>Honestly, I've found that planning a soul story isn't as easy as it sounds. It often turns into a "theme" story instead. Not that it's a bad thing when it does! </p>
<p>But letting the story unfold as it will often brings us to the main point of it as we go, and we discover the soul inside. </p>
<p>I consider myself both a plotter AND a pantster, simply because I like to know where I'm going while allowing the story to evolve and surprise me too. So, I rarely worry about the soul showing up. It will. When it's good and ready.<br />
Thanks, Jerold!</p>
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		By: Jerold Tabbott		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jerold Tabbott]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 06 Sep 2026 18:07:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[For my first novel, I was curious how real people would react to being isolated together and facing knowledge they&#039;d been captured to be studied and recruited for a task they couldn&#039;t accept. How would they recognize, accept, and adapt being in an ostensibly hopeless and alien situation. It&#039;s not a particularly new concept, but usually I&#039;d seen it explored with a broad mix of personalities–where there was always one or two who behaved foolishly and ruined solutions for the group. I&#039;ve always disliked the idea of using idiots to manufacture drama and new obstacles. Loving the hard Sci-Fi genre, I made the captors aliens.

I originally thought no further ahead than the scene where my protagonists wake up and slowly piece together a concept of what&#039;s happened to them. Only once they&#039;ve about figured it out do I actually introduce their captor, Khreseea, an alien eco-sociologist who&#039;s specialized in studying humanity as part of her world&#039;s 5000 year old expansionist program.

I had no theme in mind. The story initially proceeds as they&#039;re interviewed and courted by Khreseea, who wants them to cooperate and thus guarantee &#039;the best results for both worlds.&quot; But it evolves into a battle of wits between my protagonists, led by Maggie Kestler, and their K&#039;ladian captors, led by Khreseea and General H&#039;Saichat. Ultimately, Maggie and her crew find themselves examining their own beliefs, questioning what is most important to humanity, and deciding they must find a way to fight back.

The theme, likely long buried in my personal psyche, simply found its way onto the pages. Ultimately, it not only changed how they fought back against their captors, but also how to best save humanity from itself.

So, yes, where you start from (pantsing, at least) may bear no resemblance to where you take your ideas and story.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For my first novel, I was curious how real people would react to being isolated together and facing knowledge they'd been captured to be studied and recruited for a task they couldn't accept. How would they recognize, accept, and adapt being in an ostensibly hopeless and alien situation. It's not a particularly new concept, but usually I'd seen it explored with a broad mix of personalities–where there was always one or two who behaved foolishly and ruined solutions for the group. I've always disliked the idea of using idiots to manufacture drama and new obstacles. Loving the hard Sci-Fi genre, I made the captors aliens.</p>
<p>I originally thought no further ahead than the scene where my protagonists wake up and slowly piece together a concept of what's happened to them. Only once they've about figured it out do I actually introduce their captor, Khreseea, an alien eco-sociologist who's specialized in studying humanity as part of her world's 5000 year old expansionist program.</p>
<p>I had no theme in mind. The story initially proceeds as they're interviewed and courted by Khreseea, who wants them to cooperate and thus guarantee 'the best results for both worlds." But it evolves into a battle of wits between my protagonists, led by Maggie Kestler, and their K'ladian captors, led by Khreseea and General H'Saichat. Ultimately, Maggie and her crew find themselves examining their own beliefs, questioning what is most important to humanity, and deciding they must find a way to fight back.</p>
<p>The theme, likely long buried in my personal psyche, simply found its way onto the pages. Ultimately, it not only changed how they fought back against their captors, but also how to best save humanity from itself.</p>
<p>So, yes, where you start from (pantsing, at least) may bear no resemblance to where you take your ideas and story.</p>
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		By: Sarah Sally Hamer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Sally Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Sep 2026 23:29:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/09/the-soul-of-a-story-and-the-places-it-hides/#comment-179613&quot;&gt;Moya Bawden&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank you, Moya.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/09/the-soul-of-a-story-and-the-places-it-hides/#comment-179613">Moya Bawden</a>.</p>
<p>Thank you, Moya.</p>
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		By: Moya Bawden		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Moya Bawden]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Sep 2026 21:20:37 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Oh, so well put. Thank you.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, so well put. Thank you.</p>
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		By: Sarah Sally Hamer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Sally Hamer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2026 19:35:57 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/09/the-soul-of-a-story-and-the-places-it-hides/#comment-179606&quot;&gt;Lisa Norman&lt;/a&gt;.

YAY!! I&#039;m so glad you trusted yourself enough to ask your writing partner before you deleted a character, especially the most &quot;important&quot; one. Good for you!
Yes, find some time. Writing is one of the ways I heal myself. 

Thanks, Lisa!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2026/09/the-soul-of-a-story-and-the-places-it-hides/#comment-179606">Lisa Norman</a>.</p>
<p>YAY!! I'm so glad you trusted yourself enough to ask your writing partner before you deleted a character, especially the most "important" one. Good for you!<br />
Yes, find some time. Writing is one of the ways I heal myself. </p>
<p>Thanks, Lisa!</p>
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