October 26th, 2018

First Page Critique

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Craft | First Page Critique | WriterStrong

Thank you, brave soul, for trusting me with your work. I hope you find this helpful.
I chose this month's submission to help explain a closer POV. This reads like a movie script. It is omniscient POV (mostly), which was great in the 1800's, but today's reader wants an immersive experience...they want to BE Katniss.… Read the post