August 24th, 2018

First Page Critique

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Craft | First Page Critique | WriterStrong

Just a note first. I'm ready for more first page submissions!  If you've sent one in and I haven't used yours, there could be three reasons. 1. it's too good - people learn from mistakes!  2. It's not perfect, but there's not enough there to spend a whole blog addressing.Read the post

May 2nd, 2018

World Building Using POV

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Craft | Fae Rowen | WriterStrong

This is a true story: 

I looked out my window this morning, as I always do while drinking my breakfast protein shake.

In the heavier than usual wind, the prayer flags flapped loudly.

Through the narrow gaps of brightly-colored material I saw a profusion of blooming tropical flowers.Read the post

April 27th, 2018

First Page Critique

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Craft | WriterStrong

I'm ready for more first page submissions! Just copy and paste your first page into the body of an email, and send it to:

I can't promise to use yours - I'm choosing them mostly for what lessons they can teach.Read the post



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