First p\Page Critique | Writers In The Storm https://writersinthestormblog.com A Blog On Writing Wed, 15 Jan 2025 06:44:23 +0000 en-US hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0.1 https://writersinthestormblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2022/01/WITS-Logo-150x150.jpg First p\Page Critique | Writers In The Storm https://writersinthestormblog.com 32 32 First Page Critique https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/07/34338/ https://writersinthestormblog.com/2018/07/34338/#comments Fri, 27 Jul 2018 11:02:19 +0000 https://writersinthestormblog.com/?p=34338 I chose this month's first page to explain writing tight. I am a 'spare writer', meaning that I cut every unnecessary word, so the read is fast and easy. If a word doesn't tell the reader something they don't know in a compelling way, out it goes. I'm not saying that you have to cut […]

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