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		<title>BIG BANG not Baby Blip: Write a Satisfying Story Ending</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Dec 2023 10:18:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p>As writers, we want to hook our readers and keep them coming back to our books. Being aware of why the blip steals the BANG’s thunder can help.</p>
The post <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2023/12/big-bang-not-baby-blip-write-a-satisfying-story-ending/">BIG BANG not Baby Blip: Write a Satisfying Story Ending</a> first appeared on <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com">Writers In The Storm</a>.]]></description>
		
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		<title>Write Authentic Characters and Connect With Readers</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Sep 2023 08:22:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[Authenticity in writing YA for authors]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p>Authenticity—of your characters and how they react to the world around them—can catch and keep your readers engaged by building an emotional connection.</p>
The post <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2023/09/write-authentic-characters-and-connect-with-readers/">Write Authentic Characters and Connect With Readers</a> first appeared on <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com">Writers In The Storm</a>.]]></description>
		
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		<title>5 Tips to Boost Your Professional Writing Cred</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Dec 2022 10:37:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[Writer's Life]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Writing Craft]]></category>
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		<category><![CDATA[Editing tips]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p>Good writing takes time and practice, but you can kick-start that knowledge. Lori Freeland shares 5 ways to step up your writing game.</p>
The post <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/12/5-tips-to-boost-your-professional-writing-cred/">5 Tips to Boost Your Professional Writing Cred</a> first appeared on <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com">Writers In The Storm</a>.]]></description>
		
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		<title>Not Just Another Post on POV</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Sep 2022 09:35:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[Writing Craft]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[How do you choose POV]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[POV tips and tricks]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[What is writing point of view]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p>Point of view is everything in your story. The prime real estate on the page is inside your POV character’s head. Here are examples and tips to stay on track.</p>
The post <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/09/not-just-another-post-on-pov/">Not Just Another Post on POV</a> first appeared on <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com">Writers In The Storm</a>.]]></description>
		
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		<title>To Comma, or Not to Comma (Part 4)</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/06/to-comma-or-not-to-comma-part-4/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Jun 2022 09:28:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[All about commas 101]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p>Lori Freeland gives us pointers on pauses, sentence clarification, places, people, dates, words at the end of a sentence, and dialogue in part 4 of her series.</p>
The post <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/06/to-comma-or-not-to-comma-part-4/">To Comma, or Not to Comma (Part 4)</a> first appeared on <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com">Writers In The Storm</a>.]]></description>
		
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		<title>To Comma, or Not to Comma (Part 3)</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/03/to-comma-or-not-to-comma-part-3/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Mar 2022 08:47:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[Grammar 101 for writers]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[great grammar tips]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p>Part Three of<br />
Lori Freeland's comma series provides more great comma do's and don't's examines the much-debated Oxford Comma.</p>
The post <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2022/03/to-comma-or-not-to-comma-part-3/">To Comma, or Not to Comma (Part 3)</a> first appeared on <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com">Writers In The Storm</a>.]]></description>
		
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		<title>To Comma, or Not to Comma (Part 2)</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/12/to-comma-or-to-not-to-comma-part-2/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Dec 2021 08:28:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[Writing Craft]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[All about commas 101]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p>Lori Freeland talks about all things comma. Most writers find this tiny, ambiguous mark confusing. To comma, or not to comma that is the question.</p>
The post <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/12/to-comma-or-to-not-to-comma-part-2/">To Comma, or Not to Comma (Part 2)</a> first appeared on <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com">Writers In The Storm</a>.]]></description>
		
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		<title>To Comma, or Not to Comma (Part 1)</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/10/to-comma-or-not-to-comma-part-1/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Oct 2021 07:18:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[Writing Craft]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[correct use of commas]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p>The comma is a scrappy little mark that’s often the bane of an author’s existence. Lori Freeland answers the question—"to comma, or not to comma?"</p>
The post <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/10/to-comma-or-not-to-comma-part-1/">To Comma, or Not to Comma (Part 1)</a> first appeared on <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com">Writers In The Storm</a>.]]></description>
		
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		<title>Location. Location. Location: Bring Your Book to Life Part II</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/08/location-location-location-bring-your-book-to-life-part-ii/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Aug 2021 10:39:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[Writing Craft]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[scene elements]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p>We can get so caught up writing witty banter, choreographing every move that we forget to write in a backdrop. Location will bring your book to life.</p>
The post <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/08/location-location-location-bring-your-book-to-life-part-ii/">Location. Location. Location: Bring Your Book to Life Part II</a> first appeared on <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com">Writers In The Storm</a>.]]></description>
		
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		<title>Backstory: Dodging the Info Dump</title>
		<link>https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/02/backstory-dodging-the-info-dump/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Feb 2021 08:18:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p>Backstory. You can’t write with it. You can’t write without it. So how do you sidestep the information dump and slip subtly into the middle ground? Lori Freeland offers eight ways to do it right.</p>
The post <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com/2021/02/backstory-dodging-the-info-dump/">Backstory: Dodging the Info Dump</a> first appeared on <a href="https://writersinthestormblog.com">Writers In The Storm</a>.]]></description>
		
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