Great questions this month – so much to say, so let’s get started!
Laura Drake asks: I have a question – I’ve read (no, studied) the first half of Story Genius, and it’s changed the way I write. My weakness is plotting (I don’t). So the second half of the book is lost to me – putting together critical scenes, etc. Any suggestions for using Story Genius for pantsers who get hives at the mention of the ‘P’ word?
Here’s something that may come as a surprise: the second half of Story Genius isn’t about Plotting. It’s about exactly what you’re asking here: how to create critical scenes that move your story forward.
I firmly believe that Pansters can do this work, even if you don’t do it in exactly the way I lay out in Story Genius. I created Story Genius as a tool that writers can use to make every story better, with methods that are adaptable to one’s own familiar writing process. It’s not a formula, or a rigid set of rules you have to follow or else. My goal was to identify what it is that readers are actually responding to in every story they hear – to wit: how the protagonist navigates a hard-fought internal change the plot forces them to go through – and offer guidance on how to create that internal struggle, and then make sure it’s not only on the page, but driving the external action.
Here are 5 tips for Pansters that might come in handy to be sure that your story logic holds from the first page to the last:
I hope that helps and doesn’t result in another case of hives -- I’m itching to find out (sorry, couldn’t resist ;-). That said, perhaps you might want to keep a bottle of Calamine lotion at hand, just in case?
The next question allows me to address what some of you, whether Pantser or Plotter, may now be wondering: “Just why the heck is it so important to understand – in an in depth, story specific way – why my protagonist is doing what they do before I write it? Can’t I just figure it out later, in the next draft, maybe?” There are many answers to that question. The following is one of them.
LittleMissW asks: I’ve just been told that my protagonist is unlikable at times. When he’s angry he can say very hurtful things to the people he loves. He can also think derogatory things about people (for example, he describes an over-weight woman as being big enough to have her own gravitational pull). For me, this is what makes him real. We all lash out when we’re hurt or angry. We all have the potential to be judgmental and catty. But the impression I get is that it’s not okay to be unlikable. When does a character cross the line between being realistic and being irredeemable?
I wrote about what “likeable” means right here a couple of months back, but this is such a great question that I want to answer it. If I can sum up, this what I hear you asking: How can you have a character say or do things that, on the surface, appear ugly or mean, without making the character unsympathetic -- which is why people would see him as unlikeable?
In a fabulous bit of synchronicity, the same day I was going to tackle this question, fate – in the form of an article by writer George Saunders in The Guardian -- provided a spot on example of exactly how a writer can solve the problem you’re struggling with. Here’s Saunders laying out, step-by-step, how a writer can dive beneath the surface of an unlikable act, to discover the reason for it, so said act then telegraphs a very different meaning. In other words, here is how you allow a character to do something mean, and yet remain likeable:
“I write, “Bob was an asshole,” and then, feeling this perhaps somewhat lacking in specificity, revise it to read, “Bob snapped impatiently at the barista,” then ask myself, seeking yet more specificity, why Bob might have done that, and revise to, “Bob snapped impatiently at the young barista, who reminded him of his dead wife,” and then pause and add, “who he missed so much, especially now, at Christmas,” – I didn’t make that series of changes because I wanted the story to be more compassionate. I did it because I wanted it to be less lame.
But it is more compassionate. Bob has gone from “pure asshole” to “grieving widower, so overcome with grief that he has behaved ungraciously to a young person, to whom, normally, he would have been nice”. Bob has changed. He started out a cartoon, on which we could heap scorn, but now he is closer to “me, on a different day”.
How was this done? Via pursuit of specificity.”
The takeaway is this: we don’t come to story to find out what someone did – Bob snapping at the barista; your protagonist making fat jokes – we come to find out why they’re doing it. What drove them? What in their lives taught them that that was all right? What inner conflict drives their choices, their action? Give us that and we don’t need characters to be redeemable, or even likeable at all.
Which, of course, means that Saunders’ Bob didn’t have to have a bittersweet “likeable” reason to snap at the barista in order to rivet us, so long as he had a deliciously revealing one.
And now, I’m once again open for questions for my next column – leave them here in the comments, or shoot me an email at: lisa@wiredforstory
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Lisa Cron is the author of Wired for Story and Story Genius. Her video tutorial Writing Fundamentals: The Craft of Story can be found at Lynda.com, and her TEDx talk, Wired for Story, opened Furman University’s 2014 TEDx conference, Stories: The Common Thread of Our Humanity.
Lisa has worked in publishing at W.W. Norton, as an agent at the Angela Rinaldi Literary Agency, as a producer on shows for Showtime and Court TV, and as a story consultant for Warner Brothers and the William Morris Agency. Since 2006, she’s been an instructor in the UCLA Extension Writers’ Program, and she is on the faculty of the School of Visual Arts MFA program in Visual Narrative in New York City. In her work as a story coach, Lisa helps writers, nonprofits, educators, and journalists wrangle the story they’re telling onto the page. She can be reached at wiredforstory.com
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Okay, Lisa, I AM itchy, as well as having shivery knees (I know it's dumb, but I'm afraid of breaking my process!) but I'm going to try it! I'll just light another candle at the Lisa Cron shrine in my office, and go for it.
Not to make y'all jealous (neener, neener, neener!) but I'm going to get to meet Lisa next week, and take 3 workshops from her! And I have a shiny new Idea I'm dying to apply SG to. Win-win!
Thanks, Lisa! I love the 'look back after each scene' suggestion! I'm also finding it helpful to take the same sort of pause before each scene --- not to plot the whole arc of the manuscript, but to think about the vague idea that I'm starting with for that particular scene to see if the Scene Card can help crystallize it. Looking forward to meeting you this fall at WFWA!
Thanks, Lisa! I recently read Story Genius, after having read Wired for Story a few months ago. I can't wait to apply the techniques on my next story! Both books opened my eyes to new and powerful approaches to crafting a compelling story. Thanks again!
This is such a great article - full of so much helpful information that I can't believe how much it applies to the book I have been re-writing about the hundreth time.Had I read your article first, maybe I would have made this process easier for myself, at least I hope I would've. I'm ordering your book now. But there is a lot of info crucial info crammed into this one article. I've always been a panster. Maybe I won't be so much of one from now on. Thank you for your help!
Joyce, go get Story Genius...it'll change the way you write!
I can attest to the fact that Lisa's way of approaching a novel lets you dig much deeper than you think you can. (I have been working individually with her for several months now) And taking it one step at a time, somewhat chronologically means you don't waste time and words writing a lot of chapters that have to be jettisoned later. Sure, you can write fast then revise but why not take it slower and get it closer to "right" the first pass through. The danger of having a pre-conceived plot you're writing toward is that you bend the story to fit the plot rather than the other way around. Listen to Lisa - she knows what she's talking about. Very excited to have her at the conference this year
Wonderful post, Lisa! I like your idea of the physical reminder of point, agenda and misbelief near my computer the same way I kept a laminated copy of "stimulus, response, thought/speech" when I tended to get the order wrong.
And I am definitely going to read Story Genius! And I will try not to write out of order. 🙂 Thanks!
Pounding my head (gently) on my desk. Have read the books, worked my way through the incredibly supportive process with other stories -- and gotten tangled up in knots with my current work in progress because I DID NOT apply these fundamentals. Thanks as always for your generous, clear, and affirmative support of us story folk~!
Wonderful, Lisa! Every time I listen to you speak (I know I'm reading but I actually hear you) I get clarity within my story. My writing partner and I were just talking about the Third Rail, the misbelief, and the origin scene this morning. The post-its are a great idea -- doing it now! xo
Thanks so much for this, Lisa. Talk about just what I need, showing up at exactly the right time!
Thank you so much for answering my question. That makes a lot of sense and is definitely something I can apply to my writing.
Lisa...Thanks so much for this post. I am knee deep in the revision process and need to do some cutting. This will definitely help me weed out what can go. I have ordered your book so I will have it at my elbow when I start my next book and maybe the revision process won't be so painful.
So good. Your Bad Bob example also helps with introducing back story--always a bugaboo. I would also like to learn more and more about deep point of view.
Lisa, Thanks for sharing your wisdom. Even in writing my picture books, I will ask - "What inner conflict drives their choices, their action?"
Thank you so much for these concrete tips. I've almost finished a set of screen cards for my WIP, and I believe my ms is much stronger. I still have issues (probably deep, personal issues) with collapsing time and transitions. And SO... helps a lot. Still, I find myself slogging through what happens next. I think I'm writing these parts for myself, and that I can go back in revision and blend the facts into the action. Any wise words on how to do it, and how to determine when that is appropriate?
Thanks again! I'm so happy that WITS (Laura Drake!) directed me to Story Genius!
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As always, thank you Lisa Cron for these excellent tips on story. Your Story Genius course was the best writing course I have ever taken. I've shared this post generously online. All the best to you.
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