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Time to Get Personal (Skills) - Publishing Decisions, Part 4

Writers in the Storm welcomes Susan Spann, contributing guest for Part 4 of her Publishing Decisions series.

by Susan Spann

Thanks for joining me today as we continue our look at publishing paths and how smart authors choose between them.

Last month we talked about “getting busy” with writing goals and business plans– because authors should never forget that writing is a business as well as an avocation.

When deciding between traditional publication, independent publishing, and the increasingly-popular hybrid career, authors need to pay special attention to personal skills, particularly the ones that translate to platform, marketing and sales.

Audience and platform are critical to publishing success.

“Platform” refers to an author’s visibility, reach and authority within his or her chosen publishing sphere. Authors with wide reach and a reputation for expertise have a wide (or “visible”) platform, and authors with an established platform generally sell better than those without – regardless of the publishing path they pursue.

Nonfiction authors who choose traditional publication usually need a platform before an agent or publisher will show interest in their work. Fiction operates a little differently, in that many first-time novelists have no platform (or only a small one) beforehand – they develop a platform through or in connection with their novels.

Independent authors can either develop a platform in advance or build a following through their work, though as a general rule self-published authors may see more initial sales if they have a network and platform in place before a book launches. Without the support of an imprint or publisher book buyers recognize, the indie author depends heavily on blurbs, reviews, and the power of his or her name.

This doesn’t mean that authors with an audience should always self-publish, or that authors without a platform should despair. The rise of social media makes it easier than ever for authors to build a following – but the size and reach of existing platform is one factor writers should weigh when making decisions among the publishing paths.

Marketing and personal skills can help – or hurt – your writing career.

Authors must learn effective interpersonal and promotional skills, regardless of publishing path. The days of writing a novel and sending it off, unsupported, for the publisher to sell have passed away like the rotary phone and the once-beloved typewriter.

Successful 21st Century authors engage their readers on the page and off it.

Without a publisher to assist with sales and marketing efforts, the independent author has primary responsibility for spreading the word about his or her published work. Fortunately, self-published authors don’t have to walk this road alone – writers, bloggers, reviewers, and other contacts will gladly partner with independent authors to promote their works. Don’t have extensive contacts? Make some, using Twitter, blog comments and social media – and don’t forget to make connections in the real world too!

Traditionally published authors can’t sit on their publishing laurels when it comes to marketing, either. Most publishers won’t spend large sums of money promoting an author’s work.

Successful authors of every kind must develop a marketing plan and carry it out. This means studying marketing tactics, learning what works for your type of writing, and most of all … being personable, not pushy.

Remember: nobody likes a spammer. Marketing requires more than tweeting your title and Amazon link a hundred times a day. The best sales aren’t “made” or “closed” – they’re chosen by a buyer who thinks a product deserves attention. Readers are far more likely to buy your work – regardless of the publishing method – if they like you. Meeting and interacting with people, in person or online, does more for your sales than a thousand hollers of “BUY MY BOOK.” Promotion, like everything else, requires balance. It’s a learned skill – and it’s never too early to start the learning process.

Technical skills are important – but they don’t have to be yours!

Independent authors can either choose to typeset and format their works themselves or hire someone to handle the process for them. This can be either a publishing service or a professional specializing in file conversion, and the process can include editing or not, as the author chooses.

While technical skills are important to the self-published author who wants to keep costs as low as possible, they’re no longer a requirement for authors who choose an independent path. That said, an author should not “go indie” without investigating the process and evaluating the costs and technical skills involved in choosing that path.

Traditional authors don’t typeset and format their works for publication. The publisher handles that side of the business, making the “technical research” somewhat easier. In short: there isn’t any. This is a benefit of surrendering control to the publishing house – the traditional author’s business partner handles the technical details.

What you don’t do can be as important as what you do.

Up to now, we’ve focused on different factors authors should consider when making decisions about a publishing career. We’ve talked about goals and skills and business plans. Next month, we’ll step off the well-paved path and examine the thorny side of publishing decisions – the traps and pitfalls that often draw authors away from the right decision and into the one they later regret.

Have or questions about this entry or other issues of publishing business and law? Please hop into the comments – I love to hear from you!

Susan Spann is a publishing attorney and author who practices in Sacramento, California. CLAWS OF THE CAT, the debut novel in her SHINOBI mystery series featuring ninja detective Hiro Hattori, will be published by Thomas Dunne Books in Spring 2013. Susan blogs about writing, publishing law and seahorses at http://www.SusanSpann.com

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The Fear Factor

Welcome to the first Monday of the month, when we are lucky to share in the wisdom of contributing blogger Shannon Donnelly. Her post today will help get you writing this summer, despite your fears.

by Shannon Donnelly

"I'm convinced that fear is at the root of most bad writing. . . . Good writing is often about letting go of fear and affectation." – Stephen King

Fear shows up in a number of ways, and hits each of us differently. It shows up a lot in the only workshops I teach.
•It shows up in excuses (I’m too old, I’m too busy, I won’t try this because I don’t understand).
•It shows up in procrastination (I’ll catch up later, I’ll try the exercises after the class on my own).
•It shows up in perfectionism (I’m awful because I didn’t do this right, I failed, I suck, I’m stupid).
•It shows up in a refusal to try new things (I’ll post this old story bit instead of writing anything new).

And I can see it every single time.

Then we have the brave souls who face their fears, dive in and fall on their faces. I applaud that. Because they’re learning. Which is the point of a workshop. It’s supposed to be a safe place to try things, to experiment. Instead, I see so many writers who are afraid to spread their wings—as if one mistake is going to be a disaster.

Folks—we learn from our mistakes. Go out and make more of them.

I am amazed how many people resist this idea. They want to be praised. That’s not good. That’s not going to help you learn. What does help is the rewrite and the revision and the experiment. Try something new. Write a scene. Then rewrite it from a different viewpoint. Just because. Throw stuff out there. Try something in first person if you’ve never done first person. Or in present tense. Just try it out. Tell yourself that:
a) it doesn’t have to be perfect
b) it doesn’t have to be good
c) it can actually be really awful
Just let it be what it’s going to be.

Then read (aloud so you catch what you’ve really done) what you’ve written and look at what you can learn from what you did. Look at what works. Look at what doesn’t work. Keep the good stuff.

This happens when I cook, too. I’ve made some awful things—I once put too much baking soda into my gingersnaps. They came out Alka-seltzer hockey pucks—hard and fizzy if you chewed on one. Great for your digestion (if you needed it), and not something anyone would eat (not even the horses would go for them, despite the sugar on the outside). Learned a great lesson on baking soda from that one.

Same applies to my writing. I’ve written awful scenes (and I expect I’ll keep doing that). Sometimes the dialogue clunks like a flat tire. I’ve tried first person, third, second, even. Present tense, past tense—it’s all about stretching those writing muscles and trying new things. You don’t know what really works until you’ve tried it.

I’ve written books that are not for everyone (go read the reviews)—sometimes folks hate my character (hey, it’s better than indifference). And I worry about all of it. I still get the nerves going and I still wonder if I’m any good at any this—no amount of praise ever takes that worry away.

The point of this is you’re never going to get over your fear.
Live with it. Know it’s there. Let it flow into you and out of you again and go write anyway. Use the fear—let it keep you sharp. Let go, too, of the affectations that King talks about—which means get out of the way of your characters. Let them tell you their story and stop pushing them into plots that don’t work. Stop being so damn writerly and just get clean words onto the page.

And if you need more good words from Stephen King buy his book On Writing: Memoirs of a Writing Career. Or read more at: http://grammar.about.com/od/advicefromthepros/a/StephenKingWriting.htm

BIO
Shannon Donnelly's writing has won numerous awards, including a RITA nomination for Best Regency, the Grand Prize in the "Minute Maid Sensational Romance Writer" contest, judged by Nora Roberts, RWA's Golden Heart, and others. Her writing has repeatedly earned 4½ Star Top Pick reviews from Romantic Times magazine, as well as praise from Booklist and other reviewers, who note: "simply superb"..."wonderfully uplifting"....and "beautifully written."

Her latest Regency Historical Romance, Paths of Desire, can be found as an ebook, along with her Regency romances, now available from Cool Gus Publishing. She has had novellas published in several anthologies, has had young adult horror stories published, and is the author of several computer games.

Shannon is a regular speaker at writing conferences, and will be speaking at the 2012 RWA  National conference in Anaheim. She gives online workshops and is the author of Story Telling; Story Showing, an ebook that compliments her popular online class Show and Tell: An Interactive Workshop.

She lives in New Mexico with two horses, two donkeys, two dogs, and the one love of her life. Shannon can be found online at sd-writer.com, facebook.com/sdwriter, and twitter/sdwriter.

We've written a lot about fear this year at Writers in the Storm. Laura Drake and Fae Rowen had a throwdown about their fear of not succeeding vs. fear of success. Two weeks ago Laura wrote about letting your characters deal with their worst fears. Now is the time to share yours, if you haven't already. Or if you've discovered more. What fear is holding you back from getting your book published?

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Worse Than a Cliché

Welcome to the last Friday of the month with contributing word wizardess Tiffany Lawson Inman. We look forward to Tiffany's magic to transform mundane writing to the realms of marvelous. And she's donating a three-page edit to a very lucky reader. Respond to her challenge to be entered in the drawing.

by Tiffany Lawson Inman

A. “What is worse than a cliché?” Tiffany asked, with a look of horror.

B. “What is worse than a cliché?” Tiffany’s voice cracked.  Her mouth quivered, pinched, and her eyes flashed wide as if I had tried to force feed her eyeball soup from Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom.

  • Which one has more power?
  • Which one gave you a better picture of the horror filled facial expression?
  • Which one showed voice?
  • Which one will you remember when you put down the book?

The correct and totally-obvious-answer is, B.

“With a” phrases are equal to, or, yes – worse than a cliché. Think of all the vocal cues, body language, voice, unique style, and action you are holding back from your readers.

EEK!

Within all of the pre-pubbed manuscripts I have edited or critiqued, the ratio of “with a” phrases to manuscript pages was approximately 600 “with a” phrases to 275 manuscript pages.

Gulp.

Note: a few of the phrases included are like, “She hit the snake with a hammer.”  Hmmm…maybe 15 percent of them are friendly uses of the word combo,”with a.”  That leaves 515 unfriendly uses of “with a.”

515 opportunities to make yourselves better writers.

From the handful of pubbed books I looked at, the ratio was more like, 100 with a’s to 350 pages. Much better, right? In fact, these examples were all yanked from pubbed books. (She walked away with a down-turned lip) But that does not give you all the green flag to write a million and two of these into your manuscript!  (With a gleam in her eyes, she stared me down.)

  • …with a glance over my shoulder.
  • …with a quirky smile.
  • …with a hint of distain.
  • …with a sad story in her eyes.
  • …with a roar.
  • …with a howl.
  • …with a dull ache.
  • …with a confused expression.
  • …with a gap-toothed grin.
  • …with a soft laugh.
  • …with a sigh.
  • …with an odd expression.
  • …with a smirk.
  • …with a frown.
  • …with a curtsy.
  • …with a thud.
  • …with a crunch.
  • …with a boom.
  • …with a flare.
  • …with a critical eye.
  • …with a wave.
  • …with a growl.
  • …with a smack.
  • …with a flick of her wrist.
  • …with a cough.
  • …with a sense of purpose.
  • …with a confidence.
  • …with a sickening crunch.

Do they look familiar?  How many do you have?  Use the FIND search in Word and see for yourselves.  Type in: with a

            It’s easy, I promise it won’t hurt. (I called to the writers with a hint of sugar in my tone.)

            Do you need to sit down? Breathe!

Now highlight them.

My challenge for you.  Go in and rewrite.  Get yourself down to between 50 and 100 “with a” phrases in your entire manuscript. Both friendly and unfriendly included in your final count.

Use them sparingly, if at all. And the ones you choose to keep, push yourselves to write them fresh. Kick the basic, plain, unadorned, below average, routine “with a” phrases to the curb.

Another challenge for you: In the comment section below, post a 20-40 word section of your manuscript that includes a “with a” phrase and below it, a fantabulous rewrite.  The rewrite can be more than 40 words.

The author with the best rebirth of a “with a” phrase will get a 3 page edit from me! 

(I flourished the last line of the blog with a virtual-high-kick.) 

Thank you very much for joining me for the last Friday of the month here on WITS! I’ll be checking back throughout the weekend to answer any questions and back on Sunday night to announce the WINNER!

Workshops taught by Tiffany Lawson Inman:

**These courses will be taught at least twice a year. You won’t miss out!**

Follow me on twitter @NakedEditor to see what’s happening and when. New workshops taught every month at Lawson Writer’s Academy !

Want to learn from me in person?  I will be presenting a workshop at Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers Colorado Gold Conference this year. Registration is open!

You can find Tiffany at her website , info-packed-blogs starting back up in late summer 2012.

Tiffany Lawson Inman (NakedEditor) claimed a higher education at Columbia College Chicago. Here, she learned to use body and mind together for action scenes, character emotion, and dramatic story development. She teaches for Lawson Writer’s Academy and presents hands-on-action workshops. As a freelance editor, she provides story analysis and editing services.

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