It’s important to examine the different levels of telling so you know what to look for. Here are three places to look for told prose.

It’s important to examine the different levels of telling so you know what to look for. Here are three places to look for told prose.
Eldred Bird shares writing tips on a tricky show, don't tell situation. Read his insights on revealing emotional state of characters who hide their emotions.
Janice Hardy shows writers how "Showing" is a moving target that varies by which point of view you use, the narrative distance, and even the genre.
Don't reduce characters to categories, making them one-dimensional. Instead, try Tiffany Yates Martin's ways to dig deep to create nuanced characters.
We can get so caught up writing witty banter, choreographing every move that we forget to write in a backdrop. Location will bring your book to life.
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