Susan Watts shares several discoveries that completely changed the way she revises emotional scenes, making the scenes stronger.

Susan Watts shares several discoveries that completely changed the way she revises emotional scenes, making the scenes stronger.
Scene after scene, even after improving viscerals, strengthening interiority, and verifying emotional movement, there were still moments that felt…flat.
It's not about how much emotion is in a scene, it's about how it changes across the scene itself. Do your characters change? Susan can help you with them.
What is the difference between the Heroine's Journey and interiority? Here's a detailed and easy to understand explanation.
In the Hero’s Journey characters confront the world. For the Heroine’s Journey they come to understand themselves. Susan Watts shows us how they work together.
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