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Diversity and Inclusion In Writing

By Megan Ganesh

Why write books with diverse and inclusive characters?

The world is made up of many people whose diverse backgrounds, quirks, experiences, dreams, and interactions with others shape their lives.

Everyone is unique. However, we all have things in common, whether they are things we have witnessed or experienced.

One book I love that does this well is the Victor trilogy, by Theodora Taylor. In the book, the son of an organized crime boss lost his tongue as a child and must use Chinese Sign Language (CSL) to communicate. The book shows the implications of how others in the world perceive him.

He meets the heroine when she teaches him American Sign Language (ASL) and of course a dark romance ensues.

What is diversity and inclusion in writing?

Writing multi-faceted, diverse characters that aren’t stereotypes or just there to tick a box means more to those who can see themselves in a book.

Did you know that there were black pirates? What about female pirates and women who snuck into the royal navy? Of course, I’m not saying that any of us want to be pirates now, but how far would someone go knowing that more was possible for them? We come in many colors and that does not prevent us from breaking into any field.

What about writing a character with a disability who finds love? There are so many real-world examples of these experiences happening and few of them are being shown in books.

As authors, it is our job to do better.

One author who has done this well is Alyssa Cole. In Can’t Escape Love, the heroine is in a wheelchair. In the book, the wheelchair isn’t something that is there to scream, look I’m different, but instead it becomes a character itself and we can see how the experiences of others who are differently-abled from ourselves go about everyday tasks and find love and sexual fulfillment.

What do those stories mean to those that have been included?

  • Seeing oneself in a book
  • Watching a character go through shared experiences or backgrounds
  • Seeing how the character handles a situation

All these mean the world to a person who has only seen themselves as a flat stereotype.

As writers, we have the power to create change. We can show a better world, a full world, instead of perpetuating misinformation. We can use our words to show that no matter the physical or mental abilities, gender identity, race, culture, language, sexual preferences, backgrounds or experiences, there is something shared that connects us all.

In A Girl Like Her, By Talia Hibbert, the main character is an autistic heroine. Talia Hibbert shows how autism manifests for this specific character. (I mention to show the way your character reacts to being differently-abled or a certain diagnosis is unique to them and we must remember to make that clear in our stories, not use generalizations to paint all people with the same brush.)

Who should write these stories?

Own voices are important, and I think if you are a writer and happen to have a story, by all means share it.

But what if you don’t? Can you still write it?

Yes.

But how?

How to write those stories?

  • Create full, multi-dimensional characters who are more than their skin color, orientation, background, etc.
  • Take the time to get to know your character. Let them speak to you and tell their story. (For plot/event driven writers, dig deep into who would experience these events, how would it change them, what type of honest conflict would drive them to behave as they do? Is it the same reaction or have you taken the time to recognize another path?)
  • Research your character using sensitivity and beta readers (more than one).
  • Do your best and know, as with any book, no matter how hard you try, you will find that some people hate it. (3% haters are always going to find you and that’s okay.)

I know some of you might still be unsure if you can do this.

You might think what gives me the right to write this story?

What if I mess it up?

What if this isn’t my story to tell?

And to that I say, the calling to be a writer makes you capable of telling this story. Fear of messing up means you want to do a good job. You know it might not be perfect and you might make mistakes, but you will keep pushing even if it’s hard and you have to start over.

It’s when you don’t question yourself and feel fully confident that you might want to get more eyes on it. (Hello, do you remember your first novel when you thought you knew everything ... yeah, kind of like that.)

And lastly, what if this is exactly the story you need to tell? What if your readers are waiting to see themselves in a book? Waiting for someone to write that story for them, and you are the one to do it?

Don’t let them be forgotten. Not letting them be forgotten is a big one for me and if you made it this far, you might wonder why this is so important to me.

Why this is important to me?

From a young age, I was an avid reader of all things and I got bitten by the romance bug. I was voracious and, like most readers, loved picturing myself as the heroine and being swept away. (I’m probably dating myself, but in the early 90s there were not a lot of diverse or multicultural romances available.)

I was stuck. I wouldn’t stop reading, but in my heart I yearned for characters who looked like me. I wanted to see how they found love and what their lives were like. I wanted to be inspired. It happened when the lines Arabesque by BET and Kimani Press from Harlequin were created. These books were windows into me, what I could be, and what I could do. They introduced me to new concepts, professions, and to family dynamics that were different from my own, It allowed me to dream and hope and see what is possible.

I still have a lot of my old novels. Books by Francis Ray, Rochelle Alers, Brenda Jackson and more. I treasure books that have characters of color who can be main characters, not the sidekicks or those never seen in books at all. They can be prominent characters who are fully recognized and living their lives on the pages.

I’ve found my own hero, and we share two beautiful children. We are a multicultural family as my husband is Sri Lankan. I want to write books where my children can one day see themselves in the possibilities and dreams of the characters.

This is bigger than Race. Francis Ray was one of the first authors that introduced me to a heroine who had a traumatic past and was able to find love. In her book All I Ever Wanted, she showed it was possible to learn to love again after a traumatic experience.

Books can transverse so many things. Touching on mental health, race, class, gender identity, and sexual orientation. As authors, we can introduce our readers to different cultures and more through the stories we write and share with the world.

What story do you feel called to tell? What are your thoughts on diverse and inclusive stories?

I look forward to connecting with you.

Happy Writing

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About Megan

Megan Ganesh

Megan Ganesh is a stay-at-home mom of two littles. She is a voracious reader and enjoys crafts, cooking, and working out. You can find her at home writing inclusive stories, because we all fall in love. Sign up for her newsletter on her website and follow her on InstagramFacebook and Twitter

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Why You Want People to Hate Your Website

by Lisa Norman

One of the most common mistakes I see writers make with branding is to pull their punches. They have power. They have a unique take on life and story. But they also want everyone to like them.

15“I know your works, that you are neither cold nor hot. I wish you were cold or hot. 16So, because you are lukewarm, and neither hot nor cold, I will vomit you out of my mouth.

Revelation 3:14–16

That’s a pretty strong quote. Just by using it in this article, I’ve elicited strong feelings either toward or against me. My spirituality is a part of my brand. If you don’t like it, you won’t like my books.

marketing wheel: discovery, connection, conversion, relationship, retention

Think back to the marketing wheel I shared in a previous post. As a refresher, I refer to your website as a way that people decide if they like you and like your writing. If the website does its job and attracts people, they buy the book, join your email list, and then go on to recommend your book to others, getting the wheel spinning.

That’s what happens when you attract the right people, your superfans. But what happens if you attract the wrong people?

Story Time

Let’s say you write steamy romance. Now, let’s say your website appeals to people who love all kinds of romance: sweet, steamy, everything. You’re out in the world, using social media, and you draw all kinds of romance lovers to your site.

What is going to happen when you attract a reader who loves sweet romance?

Let’s say your website and your online presence work so perfectly, this sweet-romance-loving reader picks up your book and … oh my!

You’ll get a less than stellar review.

That fan isn’t likely to do much to make that wheel turn.

You want to attract avid fans, people who will love you and turn that wheel.

Trying to please everyone results in a bland website that probably won’t attract anyone.

True fans want to know your quirks. They love you because of them. To quote Margie Lawson, “Quirky Sells!”

Let’s look at what happens when you attract the wrong people:

Your website costs more

Specifically, your list can cost more to send and manage. A huge email list is great if it is full of your true fans. You’ll send out an email and you’ll sell books. That list will support itself.

If you have the wrong people on your list, you’ll pay more to send and maintain your newsletter while not getting a strong return on the investment. If your list is generating less than 10% engagement, you may be attracting the wrong people.

In addition, while modern web hosting gives us a generous allowance for traffic, if you have too much traffic your site will slow down and you may have to pay more for hosting. Again: fine if that traffic generates income. Not fun if people who think you are barely tolerable waste your traffic.

Your Search Engine Optimization (SEO) will suffer

If you are ranking for topics that you aren’t a good fit for, people will come to your site and then hit the back button. This is called a “bounce.” When people bounce, search engines downgrade your website for that topic. You want your branding to be so on point, so clear, that search engines never rank you for terms that you are not appropriate for. You also want people to be able to see from the search engine results whether they want to click through to your site or not. Stop them before they come and they won’t bounce.

Your branding can get muddled

Trying to please everyone and offend no one creates a bland brand that is hard to define. Writers who are tied into their superfans sell more books. They know who they are as a writer and they devote their energies to pleasing those superfans. The fans reward them. Once your brand is muddled, you’re likely going to have fewer fans, and those that you have will be less dedicated, less passionate.

You generate bad reviews

Remember: the goal of the website is to encourage people to buy, read, and review the book. If you attract the wrong people, people who aren’t your ideal readers, then you’ll pay for it in lower-star reviews. Don’t be afraid to turn off some people. Your true fans will love you for it!

Think about the authors you love. What draws you to their brand?

About Lisa

head shot of smiling Lisa Norman

Lisa Norman's passion has been writing since she could hold a pencil. While that is a cliché, she is unique in that her first novel was written on gum wrappers. As a young woman, she learned to program and discovered she has a talent for helping people and computers learn to work together and play nice. When she's not playing with her daughter, writing, or designing for the web, she can be found wandering the local beaches.

Lisa writes as Deleyna Marr and is the owner of Deleyna's Dynamic Designs, a web development company focused on helping writers, and Heart Ally Books, an indie publishing firm. She teaches for Lawson Writer's Academy.

Interested in learning more from Lisa? See her teaching schedule below.

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To Comma, or Not to Comma (Part 4)

By Lori Freeland

Are you a comma criminal? Do you steal commas from places where they really need to stay? Or maybe you’re a comma enthusiast and stick them in wherever you “feel” they need to be? If you said yes to one or both, you’re not alone. When it comes to commas, most people don’t go by any solid rules. Not only can that make your sentence structure inconsistent, it can confuse your readers about what you’re trying to say.     

It’s comma time again. I know. Try to contain your groans. We’re almost done! In this fourth part of the series, we’ll talk about pauses, sentence clarification, places, people, dates, words at the end of a sentence, and dialogue. And yes, it’s going to be easier than it sounds. Once you get the hang of commas, using them will come more naturally. I promise.

Have you missed any of the first three installments? No worries. Click on the links below to catch up. Here’s a quick guide if you’re looking for something specific.

  • To Comma, or Not to Comma (Part 1): Part 1 covers general comma abuse, dependent and  independent clauses, plus everything else you thought you didn’t need to know about sentences, clauses, and predicates.

Take a Pause

Sometimes, even if we follow the comma rules, the meaning of words in a sentence can be unclear or need some contrast. Especially when those words fall at the end.

Incorrect: He’s just being quiet silly.

This literally means he’s being “quiet silly.” Which isn’t really a thing.

Correct: He’s just being quiet, silly.  

Incorrect: He was only distracted not stupid.

Correct: He was only distracted, not stupid.

As a general rule, use a comma before “not” at the end of a sentence.

Incorrect: Our robotic math professor seemed different today almost human.

Correct: Our robotic math professor seemed different today, almost human.

Incorrect: That’s John’s new car isn’t it?

Correct: That’s John’s new car, isn’t it?

Sentence Clarification

Commas come in handy if there’s ever an issue with understanding what a sentence means. 

Incorrect: Jeremy gestured at the herd of stampeding horses yelling wildly.

Above, the horses are yelling wildly, not Jeremy. But with a comma added in the right place below, it becomes clear that Jeremy is the one yelling.

Correct: Jeremy gestured at the herd of stampeding horses, yelling loudly.

Places, People, Dates

Use commas to set off specific geographical places and addresses, people’s titles, and dates.

Examples of Places:

  • Dallas, Texas, is where I’m from.
  • I used to live in Madison, Wisconsin, before I moved.
  • My sister lives at 676 Maple Lane, Plano, Texas.

Yes, you need a comma after the state too if it’s not at the end of the sentence. The odd way it looks throws many people off.

Examples of Titles:

  • My primary care doctor is Glenda Green, MD.
  • Glenda Green, MD, is my primary care doctor.

Examples of Dates:

  • September 11, 2001, is a date no one will ever forget.
  • May 18, 1943, was the day my mom was born.

Yes, you need a comma after the year too. Even though it seems weird.  

Exception: There is no comma with just the month and year—unless the date is used an opening clause.

  • I married my husband January 1991.
  • In January 1991, I married my husband. 

TOO, ALSO, EITHER at the end of a sentence

Just like we no longer type that extra space after a period, we can scratch that comma before too, also, and either, providing the words come at the end of a sentence and the meaning is clear.  

Correct: Keep the comma.

  • I, too, like fruit.
  • I, also, like fruit.

Correct: Ditch the comma.

  • I like fruit too.
  • I like also.
  • I don’t like fruit either.

Dialogue

Finally, something most writers are familiar with—dialogue. There’s a simple rule here. We always use commas to set off dialogue. That’s it.

But remember dialogue means what your characters say out loud. It’s external. We’re not talking about the thoughts inside their heads. That’s internal and doesn’t need quotes either. See my post on Dive Deep into Dialogue for, well, a deeper dive into dialogue.  

Incorrect: Jean said I’m not hungry. / I’m not hungry Jean said.

Correct: “I’m not hungry,” Jean said. /Jean said, “I’m not hungry.”

A Final Hint

Use commas when your reader will be confused without them.

Incorrect: To George Lucas was the father of Star Wars.

Because the two names, George and Lucas, usually belong together, we read them as if they are together. But that’s not what the writer of this sentence meant.

Correct: To George, Lucas was the father of Star Wars.

We’re done. You made it! I hope you walked away from this comma series with some concrete takeaways. I’d love to hear them. What have you struggled with? What did you learn? Do you have any comma advice to share? And what other punctuation would you like me to cover? I love requests as much as I love your comments.

Looking for more help? Check out my favorite grammar sites.

  • My favorite go-to or commas is Purdue Owl, where they break down the basic comma rules into a quick guide as well as an extended guide. You can check them out here. Quick Comma Rules and Extended Comma Rules.

But you can also find great information at:

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About Lori

An encourager at heart, author, editor, and writing coach Lori Freeland believes everyone has a story to tell. She’s presented multiple workshops at writer’s conferences across the country and writes everything from non-fiction to short stories to novels—YA to adult.

When she’s not curled up with her husband drinking too much coffee and worrying about her kids, she loves to mess with the lives of the imaginary people living in her head.

You can find her young adult and contemporary romance at lorifreeland.com and her inspirational blog and writing tips at lafreeland.com. Her book, Where You Belong: a runaway series novella, is currently free on Kindle Unlimited. 

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