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3 Ways to Shipwreck your Creativity (Do this instead!)

Writers constantly juggle deadlines, word counts, obligations, and self-care. Often we whine about it (at least I do). Often we shipwreck our own creativity. However, one of the best qualities of any writer is resilience.

Today, I'm taking you on a virtual journey to meet a writer named Anna McLean. She's writing a book about rowing 3000 miles across the Atlantic, based on her real experiences during a rowing contest with her brother, Cameron. The two of them faced many obstacles -- 60-foot waves, sharks, and illness. They handled their obstacles with MacGyver-like skill, using limited resources from their tiny rowboat in a competition called the Talisker Whiskey Challenge (2020).

Their journey offers great lessons about how mental outlook can sharpen a writer’s focus and inspire a wave of creativity.

Being tossed at sea can be a good metaphor for writers during these uncertain times but, despite our societal turmoil, we can refrain from spiraling into an emotional tailspin. As a break from the chatter diverting our writerly attention, I offer this post as a life-vest of analogy to lift your spirits.  

A bit of backstory on the McLean "Seablings" (along with my thoughts in blue).

They began their voyage on the Canary Islands and rowed in constant 2-hour shifts until they reached Antigua 43 days later. Talk about work ethic! This puts my daily writing sprints into perspective as no one but my muse is waking me through the night to swab the deck.

Soon after launching, their navigation system broke. They steered with their feet until they were able to repair it themselves. The mechanical parts breaking would be my cosmic message to turn back to safe, dry, land. I can relate to that rudderless feeling, and the pull of self-pity and doubt.

Their water pump, which provided their allotted 500 milliliters of daily fresh water, also failed, jeopardizing both their health and their goal. Under those circumstances, I would have called for a water taxi and requested some iced tea.

Anna McLean faced real privation during the experience that led to her book.

Yes, she chose to enter the rowing contest. But she was forced into a level of action that few writers must endure in order to tell her story. Below are three quotes inspired by her incredible journey that might help re-energize your creative life.

1. “Teamwork is Dreamwork.”

The rowing pair used this mantra as their motivation and to avoid distractions that could set them off course. They worked as a team, communicating and accepting more of the workload when needed. Anna once rowed 36 hours without a break as her brother recovered from an injury. Cameron, in turn, rowed for three days when she could not get through her nausea. 

They didn’t do it all alone.  When times were exceptionally tough, they called one of their 70 supporters for encouragement and advice. Even in the open ocean our modern technology supports us in ways our predecessors only could imagine.  How lucky we are to be a phone call away from others who can be the wind in our sails and keep our focus on our writing goals.

Close-to-home example of "Teamwork is Dreamwork."

I have seen examples of teammates stepping in at WITS in the past months as members, writers, and readers offer support.  Our writers at WITS have suffered illness, loss of loved ones, and faced natural disasters with fires, floods, and deadly smoke levels in the last month. This blog couldn’t be the treasure trove of resources without the contributions of every writer.

The WITS team stepped in and wrote extra blog posts, writers switched days (and months!) while one writer healed from surgery and another was forced to deal with an insane COVID-world workload. 

Writers work better as a team when a man is down. Like Anna and her brother, the WITS team finds a way and keeps this blog we all love afloat. We appreciate your readership and support! And I'm sending an “Aye, Matey” to the large team of contributors who provide invaluable weekly writing insights.

2. “Row to compete, not just to survive”

If the thought of spending 43 days in the open ocean conjures up nightmare stories like Life of Pi or of Tom Hanks in Castaway, you are not alone.  The rowing pair agreed to see their circumstance as a competition to avoid the traps of disillusionment.

We may not feel we have the energy to move forward but when we dig deep and find that mini burst, it can jump-start our creativity and get more words on the page.

Even if writers compete primarily against themselves, the mindset of overcoming obstacles can help keep a project on course. Pushing the limits of word count and timelines, the market, the constantly changing climate of publication, the drive to create your perfect story, can all become worthy ‘foes’ to motivate you towards your goals. 

Likewise, each of us has our own writing supports. (If you haven’t discovered yours - keep looking! Consider joining Nanowrimo, for example.) Writing supports are key to success as a writer. And don't forget to support yourself. Our biggest support can be the most powerful when it comes from within.

3. “What’s on your search engine?”

Anna shared advice she received to bolster the mental challenges of rowing 3000 miles of the Atlantic Ocean.  

“Our minds are like a search engine - you type in a word and it gives you other words related to it.  So, [on our journey] if we thought about positive things, that led to more positivity.  Every day, I still think ‘what am I putting in my search bar?”

The McLean siblings broke a World Guinness Record traversing the ocean in a 24 x 4 foot boat.  They returned to their Gloucestershire home in victory, but within a few weeks COVID 19 set them once again into confinement. 

Anna now writes and does public speaking engagements via her computer.  Some of her presentations have been shared with up to 6 different countries in one day. She's remaining positive about the perks of working without having to travel. 

Final summary

  1. Teamwork is dreamwork.
  2. Row to compete, not just to survive.
  3. What's on your search engine?

We all have stories inside us, dying to burst onto the page. But they can only come into being if we put our keyboards into action. Our proverbial rowboats are equipped to deliver our messages, but are we at the helm? Are we prepared for the realities that await in the depths of the sea we call publication?

What are your thoughts? Where are you today in your writing journey? Had you heard about Anna McLean? Share your insights, and hope you lift up some writer pals today.

About Kris:

Kris Maze author pic

Kris Maze is an author, freelance writer, and teacher. She enjoys writing twisty, speculative fiction with character driven plots. After years of reading classic literature, mysteries, and thrillers, she started to write her own books. Her first dystopian sci-fi romance, IMPACT, was published in 2020.

She also writes for various publications including a regular post at the award-winning Writers in the Storm Blog. You can follow her author journey at her website at KMazeAuthor.com.

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Layering Your Scene: The Five Key Elements

by Lori Freeland

A writer’s blank page is like an artist’s empty canvas. It takes a lot of work to get from here—

—to here.

An artist doesn’t create a masterpiece in one sitting with a single layer of paint. He has to use several layers, sometimes letting each one dry in between.

As writers, instead of using watercolors or oils or charcoal to wow our audience, we paint pictures with words. With those words, we not only build a visual but a mood and a story. One way to do this is to use the five key elements below in every scene.

  1. dialogue
  2. internal thought
  3. description
  4. action
  5. emotion (voice cues, facial expressions, body language, visceral reactions)

We don’t have to use each one equally. That’s guaranteed to mess with the flow of your scene. But make sure all of them at least make an appearance. If your scene isn’t working and you’re not sure why, chances are you’re missing one of the elements.

In order to layer, you need a place to start—a plumb line. The backbone of your scene. Any of the first four key elements will work. We’ll save emotion for the end. That’s the polish on the prose. And the last thing I put in.  

Your plumb

line will depend on your genre, what’s happening in the scene, and what comes easiest for you as you stare at the blank page.

Mine is dialogue. My characters talk to me before they do anything else, so we’ll start there.

Example:
“Are you kidding me?” Her everyday alto shoots past soprano.

1. Dialogue

Dialogue is what your characters say out loud—and only what your characters say out loud—not what they’re thinking about. It’s always inside quotes.

What Does It Do For You?

Dialogue is a powerful tool. What your characters say and how they say it tells a lot about who they are, what they’re thinking, what’s happening in the scene, and their relationships with each other. Sometimes what I remember most about a book is the witty conversation.  

Watch Out For

  • He said/she said. Avoid long chains of back-and-forth conversation with no other scene elements.
  • Characters not reacting to revelations, not answering questions, or not responding to dialogue in a way that makes sense.

Exception: If you character is doing any of the above on purpose, make sure we see some sort of hint that it’s deliberate and/or a motivation behind it.    

Note: For a more in-depth look at dialogue, see Dive Deep into Dialogue.

2. Internal Thought

Example:
I’ve been an adult half a day, and it already sucks.

Internal thought is what your characters don’t say out loud. It’s what they’re thinking. And it’s never inside quotes.

We can only use internal thought with the POV character—the character telling the story in that particular scene.

Note: If you want to know why, and for a more in-depth look at POV, see P-O-WHAT? Understanding Point of View.

What Does It Do For You?

Internal thought supports dialogue. Example: “That’s not possible.” And it wasn’t. Otherwise, I would’ve already tried.

Expands Dialogue. Example: “You can’t take a freshman to the senior prom.” That was like unwritten law or something.

Contradicts Dialogue. Example: “You would know.” I force my voice level, blowing off the way he’s talking to me. But inside, I’m an off-the-rails rollercoaster.

Internal thought also adds motivation to a character’s actions. What people appear to do isn’t always what it seems. It’s a great way to redeem an unlikeable character or foreshadow what’s to come. Just like we can learn a lot about a person by what he’s saying, we can learn even more by what he’s thinking.

What To Watch Out For

  • Rambling. Too much internal thought can interrupt the action, break up conversation, stall your pace, and kill your tension.
  • Isolation. Having a character alone for too long in a scene results in huge chunks of internal thought. While we do want to know what your character is thinking, we don’t want to know everything he’s thinking for pages and pages. 

Note: For a more in-depth look at internal thought, see The Ins and Outs of Internal Dialogue.

3. Description

Example:
Sunlight streams through the wall of windows overlooking our pool, highlighting Vi’s lavender bob and brightening her fuchsia suit. Twenty years past her party-queen prime, she still somehow manages to rock both those colors. I’d kill to shop where she buys her confidence.

Description is setting plus everything else a reader can see, hear, touch, taste, and smell in the scene. It’s objects (the couch, the coffee cup, the tree). It’s people (your characters, the other people in the background). It’s locations (a room, a park, a car).

What Does It Do For You?

Description sets your stage and builds out the scene in a way no other element can. Think about the props you see in a movie. Or the way a room is decorated. Or the location chosen for the shoot.

When you open a scene, the reader enters an empty white space. How you “fill” that space sets the tone, the mood, and paints the visual. Think a well-lit great room with a roaring fire versus a shoebox bedroom with shadows swaying against the walls.

Description is the backbone for worldbuilding. It lets you really show readers the depths of your imagination and helps them dig into theirs.

What To Watch Out For

  • Overkill. Too much detail, especially when your pace needs to be fast, can kill the mood and weaken the action.
  • Underkill. The first time you introduce a character or a location, that’s where we need the most description and the important details. Is your character in a wheelchair? We need to “see” that upfront. Is it winter? Put him in a coat.   
  • The wrong message. When we meet a new person or go to a new place, we form an instant impression. Make sure your description makes the reader feel the way you want her to feel about your people and places. 
  • Missing pieces. We can only “see” what you actually put on the page. Not what you thought you put on the page. Check for the details as you edit.

4. Action

Example:
When I see Dad standing next to Vi, my flip-flops slap to a sudden stop.

Action is what physically happens in a scene. Description and action go together. What people, animals, objects, or the even the weather is doing usually involves the world around them.

What Does It Do For You?

  • Brings your scene to life. What characters are doing is as important as what they’re saying. The cliché that actions speak louder than words is true.
  • Amps your tension and accelerates your pacing. Think the car chase in a thriller or the slow reveal in a mystery when the murder is finally solved and the killer pointed out. 

What To Watch Out For

  • Impossible action. Visualize your scene like a movie. If you’re not sure that what your characters are doing physically works, act it out. A three-hundred-pound man can’t effectively hide behind a door.
  • Accidental action. Characters who do something contradictory to what you intended. A calm person wouldn’t knock over a table just because. 
  • Unnecessary action. Don’t just add action for the sake of having a character do something. Make it work for the plot and the scene. Use it as an opportunity to build out your character and show the reader something new.

5. Emotion

Example:
A rushing river fills my ears, swallowing all the sound. Invisible fingers fist inside my chest—squeezing, squeezing, squeezing. Smothering my heart. Muffling the sluggish beat. Dissolving, disintegrating, I sink into myself, like I’m being vacuum-sealed from the inside out.

Emotion makes your scene shine. Adding in this last layer is my favorite part. It’s all about showing rather than telling. And when you stop telling your reader how your character feels—and how she should feel—you let the reader experience what your character is experiencing and feel it for herself.

Note: For a more in-depth look at showing, see Show, Don’t Tell: The 3 Most Misunderstood Words in a Writer’s Vocabulary.

Here are Some Ways to Add Emotion with Examples

  • Dialogue Cues: The way a character says something. This description should go right before or right after dialogue.  

Example: “I don’t think so.” Her voice barely carries across the table.

Example: “He’s just a teenager.” He said teenager the same way I said stupid.

  • Facial Expressions: The “body language” of your face. Watch people’s expressions. They give away how someone really feels.

Example: Then her eyes start to clear, the superpower of my lips wears off, and she’s looking at me like she has kisser’s remorse.

Example: In one barbed look, he manages to nail me with equal amounts of accusation and disappointment.

  • Body Language: Non-verbal cues that have to do with a person’s actions or how they hold themselves. It’s a great way to get across how a non-POV character is feeling when we can’t know what he’s thinking.

Example: Jess grips the sides of her chair like she’s on a rollercoaster and her safety harness just snapped.

Example: “You lied.” Cade folds his arms stiffly across his chest and plants his boots a little wider, his tension strung tighter than his Oak Cliff Lacrosse T-shirt.

  • Visceral Reactions: Involuntary inner reactions. Remember, involuntary means you can’t control it. These are things like heartrate, chills, pressure in the lungs, throat closing, stomach dropping. Also, like with internal thought, this only works for the POV character.

Example: She drops a tentative palm on my arm, confusing my heartbeat.

Example: I’m struggling to breathe against what feels like an eighteen-wheeler rolling back and forth across my chest.

Example: The impossible promise I made to her tightens around my neck, choking me hard enough to strangle a rabid pit bull into submission.

What Does It Do For You?

Emotion lets you deepen your characters. If we can connect with someone, we tend to empathize. And that’s a great way to hook your readers. You want them to get overly attached to your characters.

Emotion adds subtext and lets us read between the lines.

Characters often interpret what they see and make decisions about what another person is feeling. This can lead to miscommunication and up your conflict. Conflict drives your story forward.

Emotion is about more than just feelings. It’s about the mood and tone you’re setting as well.

Consider not only how you want your characters to come off to each other but to your reader too.  

What You Need To Watch Out For

  • Overuse. Don’t put emotion into every line, or you’ll end up with 3,000 pages. Sometimes all you need is a little hit. Other times, when it’s important to your character and to your reader to make a big deal about something, you need more. 
  • Bad Timing. Don’t interrupt tense action or fast pacing with long descriptions of emotions. I’m not going to wax poetic about you if we’re being chased through the woods by wolves. I’m going to save that for later.
  • Cliches. Just like with overused words and phrases, there are overused descriptions. If you’ve read it a million times, chuck it and think of something new.

One way to expand your go-to list for adding emotion is to watch movies or TV shows for the ways people behave in certain situations. There is no internal thought on TV. Everything has to be shown by speech and action.

Note: For a super in-depth look at emotion, see Margielawson.com. Margie teaches things no one else does. Between her blog posts, her EDITS System, Lawson Writers’ Academy, and the lecture packets, her website is a writing goldmine. I’ve just given you an overview here of a few of the things she covers.

Bringing all the layers together. Photo from Pixabay.

The 5 Key Elements in Action

As a wrap-up, I’d like to share an example of how just how much the five key elements (dialogue, internal thought, description, action, and emotion) bring to your scene. If you’re familiar with Margie’s EDITS System, I’ve used most of the colors to highlight each part.  

As you read through each “version,” notice how adding each layer gives you more information about what’s happening in the scene and a deeper connection to the characters. We barely get any information from the dialogue only. We have no idea what’s going on. And we don’t really care. Adding in action and description helps the scene make more sense. Throwing in internal thought helps us understand the character. But it’s not until we add emotion that the scene seems to come alive.

Color Key

DIALOGUE: Words a character speaks out loud inside quotation marks.

INTERNAL THOUGHT: Unspoken thoughts. Part of the narrative. POV character only.

SETTING: Descriptions of concrete object—things you can touch—railing, couch, car. And also, in this example, character descriptions.

ACTION: What people or things do. What’s happening in the scene.

EMOTION: Voice Cues/Facial Expressions/Body Language.

VISCERAL REACTIONS: An involuntary body reaction—a reaction a person can’t control—like heartrate, chills, pressure in the lungs, etc. (It has its own color to stand out)

Layering Example from The Accidental Boyfriend

Note: The colors are a busy visual, but look at the patterns and how the layers fit together.

DIALOGUE only

“I can drive myself downtown,” I say.   

“Vi’s already here to pick you up,” Dad says. 

 “If you let me drive, I’ll text you the second I get there,” I say.  

 “The hotel’s twenty minutes away,” I say. “I’ll keep the car in the parking garage the whole week.” 

“Jess,” Dad says. “You’re not driving in Dallas traffic.”


DIALOGUE plus ACTION and SETTING

I glance at my perfect pedicure.

Without knocking, Dad opens the door and strides into my bedroom.

I quickly close my laptop before he sees Mom’s profile on my screen and shove her diary under the stack of writing books piled on my desk.

He walks to the bursting suitcase on the end of my four-poster bed. Pushing down the top with his huge hand, he zips it on the first try and grabs the handle. 

I resume last night’s argument. “I can drive myself downtown.”

“Vi’s already here to pick you up.” He walks out the door.

Pushing my feet into my flip-flops—one pink, one purple—I shove my laptop and348b6b into my backpack and tuck my earbuds into my pocket. Then hurry to run after him. Gripping the railing, I try again. “If you let me drive, I’ll text you the second I get there.”  

All I get is a short grunt as he tramps down the back staircase looking out of place with my neon purple suitcase. Trained by decades of marine posture, his wide shoulders stay at attention, while his wardrobe falls at ease. Retired five years, he’s replaced the starchy uniform with wrinkled tees and faded jeans, clung to his buzz cut, and cried rebel with a single hoop earring—giving him an odd vibe of uptight casual. 

I take the steps two at a time to catch up. “The hotel’s twenty minutes away. I’ll keep the car in the parking garage the whole week.” 

“Jess. You’re not driving in Dallas traffic.” He drops my luggage on the kitchen tile and rounds the corner into the great room.  

I throw my backpack on the island and hurry after him.


DIALOGUE / ACTION / SETTING plus INTERNAL THOUGHT

Telling the truth. Dodging drama. Staying invisible. Painting butterflies on my toes. Things I used to be good at. I glance at my perfect pedicure. I’m down to one out of four.

Without knocking, Dad opens the door and strides into my bedroom.

I quickly close my laptop before he sees Mom’s profile on my screen and shove her diary under the stack of writing books piled on my desk.

He heads to the bursting suitcase on the end of my four-poster bed. Pushing down the top with his huge hand, he zips it on the first try and grabs the handle. 

Feeling reckless, or maybe just desperate, I resume last night’s argument. “I can drive myself downtown.” Or stay home and spare my life a few thousand skid marks.

“Vi’s already here to pick you up,” he says the words as he walks out the door. The only words he’s said to me all morning. Not words I want to hear. Riding and rooming with my literary agent leaves me no escape when my first writers’ conference spirals south. And it will spiral south. 

Pushing my feet into my flip-flops—one pink, one purple—I shove my laptop and the diary into my backpack and tuck my earbuds into my pocket. Then hurry to run after him. Gripping the railing, I try again. “If you let me drive, I’ll text you the second I get there.”  

He tramps down the back staircase looking out of place with my neon purple suitcase. Trained by decades of marine posture, his wide shoulders stay at attention, while his wardrobe falls at ease. Retired five years, he’s replaced the starchy uniform with wrinkled tees and faded jeans, clung to his buzz cut, and cried rebel with a single hoop earring—giving him an odd vibe of uptight casual. 

I take the steps two at a time to catch up. “The hotel’s twenty minutes away. I’ll keep the car in the parking garage the whole week.” 

“Jess. You’re not driving in Dallas traffic.” He drops my luggage on the kitchen tile and rounds the corner into the great room.  

Normally, he wouldn’t notice if I played in traffic. I throw my backpack on the island and hurry after him.


DIALOGUE / ACTION / SETTING / INTERNAL THOUGHT plus SUBTEXT (voice cues, facial expressions, body language and visceral reactions)

Telling the truth. Dodging drama. Staying invisible. Painting butterflies on my toes. Things I used to be good at. I glance at my perfect pedicure. I’m down to one out of four.

Without knocking, Dad opens the door and strides into my bedroom.

I quickly close my laptop before he sees Mom’s profile on my screen and shove her diary under the stack of writing books piled on my desk.

But he doesn’t even turn his head on his way to the bursting suitcase on the end of my four-poster bed. Pushing down the top with his huge hand, he zips it on the first try and grabs the handle. 

Feeling reckless, or maybe just desperate, I resume last night’s argument. “I can drive myself downtown.” Or stay home and spare my life a few thousand skid marks.

“Vi’s already here to pick you up.” He throws the words over his shoulder on his way out the door. The only words he’s said to me all morning. Not words I want to hear. Riding and rooming with my literary agent leaves me no escape when my first writers’ conference spirals south. And it will spiral south. 

Pushing my feet into my flip-flops—one pink, one purple—I shove my laptop and the diary into my backpack and tuck my earbuds into my pocket. Then hurry to run after him. I don’t even make it to the top of the stairs before my chest starts to sink and hollow. Gripping the railing, I try again. “If you let me drive, I’ll text you the second I get there.”  

All I get is a short grunt as he tramps down the back staircase looking out of place with my neon purple suitcase. Trained by decades of marine posture, his wide shoulders stay at attention, while his wardrobe falls at ease. Retired five years, he’s replaced the starchy uniform with wrinkled tees and faded jeans, clung to his buzz cut, and cried rebel with a single hoop earring—giving him an odd vibe of uptight casual. 

I take the steps two at a time to catch up. “The hotel’s twenty minutes away. I’ll keep the car in the parking garage the whole week.” 

“Jess.” He barks my name in his standard stand down private. “You’re not driving in Dallas traffic.” He drops my luggage on the kitchen tile and rounds the corner into the great room 

Normally, he wouldn’t notice if I played in traffic. I throw my backpack on the island and hurry after him.

Do you layer your writing? Is it purposeful, or do you do it instinctively? Feel free to share a before and after line with us down in the comments! Also, Lori welcomes all questions. :-)

About Lori

An encourager at heart, author, editor, and writing coach Lori Freeland believes everyone has a story to tell. She’s presented multiple workshops at writer’s conferences across the country and writes everything from non-fiction to short stories to novels—YA to adult. When she’s not curled up with her husband drinking too much coffee and worrying about her kids, she loves to mess with the lives of the imaginary people living in her head.

You can find her young adult and contemporary romance at lorifreeland.com and her inspirational blog and writing tips at lafreeland.com. Her latest release, The Accidental Boyfriend, is currently free on the Radish app. 

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Six Self-Publishing Considerations

by John Peragine

I recently spoke on a virtual panel for the American Society of Journalists and Authors annual conference on why people should consider self-publishing, and why now may be one of the best times to consider doing it. I have broken down the six thoughts to consider into the acronym "WRITER."

Why Self Publish

We are in a new world of publishing. The old ways of publishing are no longer valid. Even before Covid-19, the world of traditional publishing was in trouble. Some of the big publishing houses are being bought out for their lack of relevance and performance. They often focus on their famous money-making authors and leave the first time authors to fend for themselves. Big advances are almost the thing of legends and myths.

Covid-19 only made matters worse. We have large book chains like Barnes and Noble against the ropes, and the smaller bookstores are closing. The big “A” while necessary, is considered a monopoly, and within the next few years, the way people buy, interact, and read books will change even more.

The great news is that self-publishing has become the standard for many authors, even those who had been successful in the past by using traditional publishing houses. Self-publishing is accessible to anyone and is becoming more accepted among readers and critics.

Research Your Options

There are many different types of publishing that range from traditional to Fully-Vested self-published. Some authors need help with the production aspects - cover, editing, interior design, and distribution. You don’t have to go it alone.

  1. Fully-Vested Self-Publishing: This type of publishing requires the author to do all of the items necessary to publish a book. Because they fulfill all the roles and therefore maximize their returns. This type of publishing can be tricky for those unfamiliar with book production or lack specific graphic design skills.
  2. Assisted Publishing: The author uses freelance editors and designers or works through a service like 99designs.com to help them with different production and publishing tasks.
  3. Hybrid Publishing: This is a crossover between self-publishing and traditional publishing. There are all sorts of models and companies out there. Authors should be wary of “vanity presses,” as they often say they are a Traditional or Hybrid Press. They usually require you to buy your books, and most everything is pay to play. These sorts of publishing houses make their money on the services you pay for, and take a big chunk of your royalties as well. They often lack any backend services, such as a proven marketing and PR plan. Some of the less reputable companies promise “best seller” status, but what they mean is a bump on Amazon for two hours in a subcategory. Do your research!
  4. Coop Publishing: L’Oste Vineyard Press (my company) is this type of publisher. We invest our own money into a project alongside the author. The focus is the backend: a healthy marketing plan to recoup the investment and to share in a tidy profit. Instead of charging the author money for services on the front end as a markup, the publisher pays for a percentage of the cost to produce the book. In a coop-publishing deal, the publisher does not make any profit on the upfront costs.

Interview Your Team

It is essential to hire the right freelancers or services company to help you with your book. There is not only a monetary investment, but there is also your reputation as an author to consider. Do your due diligence and treat people's hiring to do your covers and editing like you would any other job hiring situation. Ask for a resume and recommendations. Ask questions, and then some more questions. If they don’t want to answer, can’t answer, or you discover that their information is incorrect, then you may want to consider hiring someone else.

Negotiate your terms, and ALWAYS have them sign a contract. It doesn’t matter what they promise; it only matters what is written and signed.

Take Control

People are often relieved when they complete their drafts. Whew- they are done. I always say the real work hasn’t started yet. When you self-publish, you become the CEO of your company called your book. Not only are you the CEO, but you are in charge of every aspect, from font choice to wholesale discounts. Because you are in control, you are the one responsible for your book's success. Your name is on the cover, and so whether it succeeds or fails, you are responsible. That is why it is essential to hire the right people to help give your book the best shot possible.

The good news is- you decide the title, the cover, the release date, and everything related to your book. And you keep the full amount of the net royalties rather than the average 5-15% offered by traditional publishing houses.

Establish Your Brand

I tell my clients all the time: you are selling YOU, the author rather than your book. It is crucial to create a brand that is consistent, visible, and engaging. This includes your color schemes, your bio, your headshot, your website, and more. You want to create a brand that will sell any future book that you write.

Establishing and growing a brand takes work and sometimes money to accomplish. This process begins at the moment that you decide to write your book. Begin with your social media channels and your webpage. Let people know who you are, what you write, and get them excited about what you are working on. Building a fanbase begins months before a book is released.

Brand development is the one area, with a few exceptions, that traditional publishers do not spend much time or money on. They are relying on you to come up with your marketing plan. So if you are going to be the one to promote your work and connect with readers, it is making less sense for many authors to allow a traditional publisher to keep the lion’s share of the royalties.

Rinse, Repeat, and Revenue

All of what I have mentioned takes time, planning, assistance, and a budget. You get to decide each of those things.

Remember:

  • Series and multiple book authors do better than many one-book authors.
  • Consider taking some of the profits you make off one book to begin investing in the next one.
  • The more books that you self-publish, the more confident and cost-effective you become.
  • You will figure out what works and what doesn’t. Give yourself time. Never rush the launching of a book.
  • The best results occur when you allow 4-6 months from the time you finish your draft to launch.

Don’t listen to everyone who gives you their “expert” advice. Seek out the experts, and then decide what works best for you. Remember, you are in charge and responsible for your book.

What have your self-publishing experiences been like? What are your fears about self-publishing? Failures? Successes? Please share them with us down in the comments!


About John

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John Peragine has published 14 books and ghostwritten more than 100 others. He is a contributor for HuffPost, Reuters, and The Today Show. He covered the John Edwards trial exclusively for Bloomberg News and The New York Times. He has written for Wine EnthusiastGrapevine Magazine, Realtor.com, WineMaker magazine, and Writer's Digest.

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John began writing professionally in 2007, after working 13 years in social work and as the piccolo player for the Western Piedmont Symphony for over 25 years. Peragine is a member of the American Society of Journalists and Authors. His newest book, Max and the Spice Thieves, will be released Spring 2021. https://www.facebook.com/twilightdjinn/

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