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Throwdown Part 2: Write What You Don't Know

by Fae Rowen

When Laura Drake originally suggested this topic months ago  I knew I would be on the "don't know" end of the throwdown.  Everyone else at Writers in the Storm writes about what they know.  With Sharla Rae's historicals, she researches and researches until she has notebooks filled with information.  Jenny Hansen writes about people and things she knows, changing names to protect the innocent.  Laura writes about women going through life's trauma and coming out the other side, which she's done.  Very well.

Me?  I write about anything that interests me.  I write about unknown planets, alien species, space battles, and future societies.  Hmmmm.  Never been to any of those places and I don't have a time machine.  And I have no military flying experience where I've fired on other planes--or space ships.  Yep, I write what I don't know.

That's not what writing teachers tell their classes.  I can't tell you how many times I've been told to write what I know, that writing anything else is dangerous.  Yes, I never learned that lesson.

Let me tell you why I write science fiction.

•  If I wrote a contemporary, I'd have to have everything correct.  Fashions, cars, restaurants.  What if I had my characters eating poppers before they were invented?  Every reader would let me know.  As a mathematician I have this thing about being right not wrong.  Because in my "other" professional world if you're not right, you're wrong.  All wrong.  There is no gray.

•  If I wrote historicals, I would have to do research.  Now, I'm good at research.  Even extensive research.  But it's not my favorite thing to do.  For instance, I think the absolute best hero in a romance book is a Regency hero.  Give me a titled rake, or even a non-duke, and I can turn starry eyed and fall in love.  But would I ever try to write a regency.  Ha!

Regency readers know what houses were on what streets in Mayfair and every other part of London and the entire English countryside.  They know what dishes were served for every course of casual and fancy party meals.  I think they even know how to play whist.  They know their social history and if a writer transgresses on details, it's pistols at dawn.

• I've been through my share of life's travails.  It's not cathartic for me to rehash the journey.  I'm not good with tears, but I'm very good at forgetting how bad something was, so I just can't capture my angst and emotion on the page.

I write what I don't know.  I imagine a world and a couple of characters.  I imagine what the society on the world would be like.  Who can tell me I'm wrong, as long as the "rules" of the society are coherent and work for that setting and people?  Well, maybe someone.  Let me digress for a quick story.

When I was speaking at a conference about an activity from a textbook I co-authored, I talked about how I developed the lesson.  A man in the back of the packed banquet hall  jumped up and interrupted me.  "You stole that lesson from the textbook I use.  You're lying.  You didn't make it up."

After the audible inhale of the audience I asked him what textbook he used.  He waved it high above his head.  It was my book.  I told him I was one of the co-authors and thanked him for using the book and understanding my lesson so well.  After the session he sheepishly brought the book to the podium and asked if I'd autograph it.

I've never been part of a society made entirely of convicts.  I personally know only one white-collar felon.  But I'm writing a trilogy on their world.  How can I do this?

Well, I do understand what people need to survive.  And I can imagine what I would do when faced with having to fight for my sustenance.  Alliances, betrayals, codes of conduct, rituals, discoveries are all open territory for exploration.  As long as I can thread logic through the backstory that produced such a social climate, I can build a world that my reader can connect with and believe.  That means there are rules--physical and societal--which can't be broken, even if that might make my job as a writer easier.

Building those worlds and defining those rules--that's the fun part.  Want an alien native to your world?  Want it to be bigger than humans?  No problem.  Look at the other alien life on the planet and the plants and make a picture in your mind.  Make sure your creature has a food source and a habitat, possibly with one or both in conflict with the human population if you want another layer of tension in your story.

How did the people get there?  Why do they stay?  What is the level of their technology?  Oh, you can have fun with this one and make up all those cool tech items you wish you had right now.

As a kid I had to walk everywhere.  Long stretches of sidewalk.  I developed a whole moving sidewalk society before I ever read a science fiction book, just because I got tired of walking an hour to my piano lesson every week.

Do I know all the science behind any of my "inventions"?  Nope.  Not my job.  That's a fun project for the engineers. I like to think that writing about what I don't know allows my readers to use their imaginations to explore the "unknown" setting and society.  And to say, "That's cool.  I wish we had that now,"  as the story unfolds.

In my despair at being on what I perceive as the losing end of this throwdown from the get-go, I googled "writing what you don't know."  Surprise, a screenwriter has written a book on the topic.  Julian Hoxter’s book, Write What You Don’t Know,
is internationally popular and has been translated into Chinese.  Makes sense, though.  You may not have lived through the world's worst divorce, but you can imagine the emotions and possible situations, decide whether you want to go the dramatic route or the comedy route, and write what you don't know.  I could see that really working for comedy.

Screenwriters can't have lived through all the things they dream up for movies nowadays.  But they can imagine, and imagination is the bottom line for writing what you don't know.  "Imagination is the ability to form a mental image of something that is not perceived through the senses. It is the ability of the mind to build mental scenes, objects or events that do not exist, are not present or have happened in the past,"says Remez Sasson.  We've all got an imagination.  Think you don't?  Just spend an afternoon playing with a child.  You'll see.

Bret Anthony Johnston is the Director of Creative Writing at Harvard University.  Here's a link to a piece he wrote in The Atlantic magazine on "why fiction’s narrative and emotional integrity will always transcend the literal truth."  He makes an eloquent case for stepping outside the bounds of what you know when you write.

Yes, I write what I don't know.  And that can be scary and difficult at times.  There are no definitive roadsigns marking the territory.  But no one else knows it either, until I write about it.  And that's the real beauty of writing what I don't know.

Where do you fall in this throwdown?  Do you write what you know or do you write what you don't know?  Or a little of both?

On Friday we welcome debut author Ruthie Knox, who will share tips on writing and selling your first book.

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THROWDOWN: Write What You Know vs Write What You Don't Know

By Laura Drake

I’m probably the poster child for the "Write what you know" side of the throwdown.

Why?  I’ll out myself at the end of this post. Let me answer the easy one first.

How?

For the last ten years I’ve had an obsession (yeah, another one.) Pro Bull Riding. I never miss it on TV, and when it’s not televised, I’ve been known to sit on Twitter for hours, waiting for people at the event to Tweet the rider’s scores. I’ve attended all local events, and been to the finals in Vegas twice -- once in a cast and a wheelchair because I broke my leg.

No way I was going to miss it.

Everyone knows I’m a bull riding geek. My boss even bought me a poster of Chris Shivers for my office.

I’ve written and sold three books, all set in the world of Pro Bull Riding. Did I do it because I knew it, or because I love it? Probably both.

I also ride motorcycles. I rode behind my husband on his for 100,000 miles. Then I learned to ride.

I now own two and have logged 100,000 miles of my own.

I wrote a novel about a girl who rides across the country on her motorcycle.

Okay, now the embarrassing part -- Why do I write what I know?

The same reason I could never be a teacher. And why the mere thought of writing Historical novels makes me break out in a sweat.  I have this secret fear that someone is going to discover that I don't know what I'm talking about. They're going to point at me, out me as a poser, and prove that I'm a fraud.

If I teach a class, you can be sure I know a LOT about the subject, because I live in fear of someone raising their hand and asking a question I can't answer. I know it's dumb. I don't expect a teacher to know everything. I don't expect any expert to know everything.

Only me.

I don't get it ether, but there it is.

So, here's where it gets fun -- we love to see which side of the throwdown you're on, and why. Do tell!

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Place Descriptions: It's About Atmosphere Not a Travel log

By Sharla Rae

When I first started writing, the one thing my critique partners complained about most was my lack of descriptions. I hated doing them. Only the action and characters interested me. Who cares what color the sky is? Who cares if the river was muddy or sandy? Just tell the reader where the character is and you’re good. Right?

Oh boy, did I get an earful. And every day I thank my lucky stars for it.

First a disclosure: If you’ve been reading my blogs you might have guessed that this one includes a descriptive list. No, you cannot skip to that part yet. Keep reading.  Please.

Good place descriptions are movies or paintings in words.

  • They show atmosphere
  • They show location or setting
  • They frequently show something about a character’s nature.

Location and atmosphere descriptions always hold hands. Actually they’ve always been married.

Perhaps the easiest example is a horror story. Saying a house is old and creepy is boring, but the right description can send chills down the spine. Peeling paint, a sagging porch, creaking doors, dirty opaque windows, and unexplained noises “show” the reader what old and creepy looks like and infuses the story with a mysterious or scary atmosphere.

Place descriptions may offer insightful clues to a character’s personality.

A simple example: If Joe lives in a shabby house, he might be poor. But if the house is also clean and neat as a pin, he might also be a very proud man. If the house is slovenly and the garden overgrown, the owner might be depressed or lazy. But wait, maybe the inside contradicts the outside. Maybe the character wishes to appear one thing when he’s really something else entirely. You see where I’m going with this.

Where to Start?   

Describing a place we’ve personally experienced isn’t as hard as describing one we haven’t laid eyes one. This is where research comes in.  Oops, a warning light is blinking. Don’t fall into the travel log trap, descriptions that sound like ads for Travel-R-Us. Think atmosphere. If we’re describing a desert, make the reader feel the dry heat, see the bleached blue of the sky, taste grit on parched lips.

Where are the best place descriptions found?

The answer is . . . everywhere. But I’ll simplify.

Books and websites for research are unending. My personal favorite for settings around the world and situations such as disasters like hurricanes, tornados and floods is National Geographic Magazine. Their descriptions of different landscapes and situations are phenomenal, often to the point of poetic. You can find hard copies at the library or visit their web site and watch videos. For different areas within the States, try state magazines, like Arizona Highways. The well-written articles describe interesting places all over the state right down to the local atmosphere. You’ll also find somebackground history.

Another favorite resource of mine, especially for landscapes like forests, rivers, mountains etc. is poetry. Don’t laugh. One of the very best is Hiawatha. The great thing about poems is that they utilize all five senses.

The five senses are essential to description of any kind because they instill atmosphere.   

  • Smell: Old houses are musty; a field of flowers is fragrant. Maybe the character smells the neighbor’s forgotten garbage can.
  • Sight: Keep in mind, colors inspire moods and atmosphere. Is there a sunset, a vase of cheerful flowers on a dresser, maybe a cracked vase of long-dead daisies? Perhaps a majestic green forest grows behind a mansion?
  • Touch: Does the character feel cool grass between their toes, the rough bark on the tree they’ve leaned against, the cold chill of mountain air?
  • Sound/Hearing: What does the character hear? Birds, growling animals, traffic, airplanes, children at play, the bickering couple next door or the sizzle of bacon?

Sometimes it’s fun to personify places and things, giving them a description that might be attributed  to people. The tree stood like a crooked old man, head bowed, skinny arms flailing about its body. This method may of course be reversed when describing a person, but that’s another blog.

There’s one more thing I need to mention. Definitions. Definitions are by nature a description. Don’t discount them when searching for ways to describe anything. You’ll find some examples below at the end of the list.

I’ll be posting a few of my descriptive lists over the next few months. The list in this blog holds words and phrases that might be used to describe trees, forests and wetlands. Use it, make up your own and add to it. Enjoy and share with the rest of us.

Trees/ Forests/Wetlands

 Air even smelled green
Air-dropped a retardant over the forest fire
Bears eating wild blackberries
Bed of pine cones and needles
Branches weighted with 4 or 5 inches of snow
Bush fire/wild fire
Chatter of chipmunks
Conservationist
Crashing of trees echoing through the woodlands
Dank wetland forest
Decked out in rich green raiment
Deep in the wilds
Deer trail on the soft pine floor
Densely tangled ground growth
Dots of orange in the orchard
Flapping birch leaves sounded like the patter of rain
Foliage/verdure/herbage
Forest fires
Fox creeps from his den at night as the raccoon leaves his hollow
Fringe of the forest
Gnarled tree roots
Growing with lawless abandon
Heart of the forest
High whine of sawmill saws
Howl of wolves
Hunters wearing red
Interminable forest
Jungle of smelly peat bogs and gaiters
Leafy plumes of green bowing overhead
Lizard clinging to the bark of a cypress
Majestic Douglas fir
Mantle of cool green peace
Maze of mangrove in the Everglades
Mice nesting in the tree roots
Moss growing on trees
Mucked through gluey mud
Mushrooms growing in the damp soil at the base of trees
Palm fronds
Papery bark of the birch
Park ranger sat in his tower over the forest
Paul Bunyan and Babe the Blue Ox
Peaceful aerial cities (birds & animals)
Peat bog
Pine sent, balsam
Pinery (common name for the white pine area in MN)
Place of shadowy dreams and visions
Pliant branches gave way at the soft passing of
Populous trees of the grove
Pristine
Ringing axes
Roots heaving above ground in a snarl
Rough bark
Sapling (seedling), too weak to withstand
Scraggly gray locks of Spanish moss draped
Scraped raw of trees
Sea of brown saw grass in the Florida Everglades
Secluded pond in the shady cool
Sighing of the wind through the boughs
Smelled like Christmas year round
Smokey the bear
Soft succulent vines shivered
Solitude reigned supreme
Sound of marsh creatures
Spicy evergreen feathered the sky
Splashed with festive color by mother nature
Spongy, root-webbed forest floor
Spread their boughs like a canopy
Squirrels frisked in the tree
Stand of sugar pine
Sunlight seeped through
Swamps infested with mini dive bombers (mosquitoes)
Swatted at carnivorous bugs
Timbermen, lumberjacks, loggers
Tranquil woods
Treacherous wetlands full of quicksand
Tree bled sap
Treetops shrouded in foggy mist
Tropical rain forest
Uninterrupted silence
Unpeopled and untouched
Verdant glen
Wet ground was spongy
Where birds build towns in the trees
Whispering through the
White blanket of egrets covered the mangrove island
Wild boar took refuge in a copse
Wind blowing through the leaves sounded like clapping hands
Wood nymph, wood spirit, Sprite
Wood ticks
Wooded ravine and rank standing water
Woodland paradise
Woody scent
Zip lining over the rainforest canopy

Some Definitions

Arbor: enclosed by trees
Bottomland Hardwood:  Riverine forested or occasional shrub/scrub areas, usually occurring in floodplains, that are seasonally flooded. Typical trees: oaks (overcup, water, laurel, swamp chestnut), sweet gum, green ash, cottonwoods, willows, river birch and occasionally pines.
Candle: A standing tree with a broken top which continues to burn after the main fire front has passed. Usually they send up a fountain of sparks and burning embers which may travel some distance and be of concern if near the unburnt side of a control line.
Cloud Forest: wet mountain forest or jungle; may be shrouded in mist
Conifer: trees that bear cones such as evergreens, pines, firs and spruce. It is soft wood and easily worked
Coppice or copse: thicket or small trees
Crown fire: A fire that advances from top to top of trees or shrubs, usually independent of a surface fire.
Crowsnest: When one tree falls and lodges against another
Diana: Roman goddess of the woods
Duff: Layer of decaying forest litter consisting of organics such as needles, leaves, plant and tree materials covering the mineral soil.
Everglade: swampy area
Hardwood: wood from trees bearing broad leaves vs needles; harder and denser than softwoods. Some hard wood trees: Ash, Bird’s Eye Maple, Sycamore, Birch, Oak, Beech, Teak, Walnut
Hardwood Flat:  Poorly drained interstream flats not associated with rivers or estuaries. Seasonally saturated by high water table or poor drainage. Trees vary but often include sweet gum and red maple.
Huldre: Norwegian female forest troll. She entices woodsman beneath the earth never to be seen again. Although cloven hoofed she’s very beautiful  but her backside is hallow insinuating her beauty is hallow as well.
Maritime Forest: Forest area characterized by stunted growth due to its proximity to salt spray from the ocean. Typical vegetation includes live oak, red maple and swamp tupelo.
Pollard: (n) tree with branches cut down to the trunk to stimulate thick growth of foliage  and new root growth. (v) act of doing the above.
Resin: Type of tree sap that secretes from conifers. Found in soft woods but not hardwoods. Resins are used in many products such as varnish and adhesives.
Satyr: Greek deity of woods.
Slash: Debris resulting from such natural events as wind, fire, or snow breakage; or such human activities as road construction, logging, pruning, thinning, or brush cutting. It includes logs, chunks, bark, branches, stumps, and broken under-story trees or brush. Soft Wood Trees: conifers, Western Cedar, Mahogany, Elm
Swamp Forest:  Poorly drained riverine or non-riverine forest or shrub/scrub areas that are semi-permanently flooded. Typical trees include cypress, black gum, water tupelo, green ash and red maple.
Thicket, bracken:  shrubs, bushes, trees growing thick, brush
Deadfall: tangled mass of fallen trees and branches
Grove: small wooded area or trees growing close together
Heath: shrubby evergreen plants covering tract of open land
Shinnery: dense growth of small trees esp. scrub oak
Weald: forest wilderness; rolling upland region of woods; Wold

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