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I’m a tight writer (I’m cheap too, but in this case, I mean no spare words), so short-short fiction has always fascinated me. But deadlines for novel-length fiction means experimenting with short has remained on a way-back burner. But I’ve just turned in two proposals, so I'm shuffling burners, and playing with this. I thought I'd pass on what I've uncovered about this type of writing.
What is flash fiction? Definitions vary, but generally, they’re complete stories of anywhere from 100 to 1,500 words. All genres lend themselves well to this type of story.
How do you write it? There are some guidelines:
More wisdom from STACE BUDZKO
Why write it?
Example: Warning – the visual is a bit brutal
Forecast by Nik Eveleigh
The wrinkled man pokes a finger in to the slew of guts strewn across the parched ground. The day-dead rabbit that had previously contained them lies on its side three feet away facing east.
A drag of the finger further displaces the ropes of intestine. Cocking his head the man lifts the finger to his lips and tastes. He hops from foot to foot and rolls his eyes in rapture.
Several minutes pass before his eyes drop and regain their focus. With a nod he creaks to his feet and turns to face the silent, expectant crowd.
“Rain. Two Days.”
I'm all in. How about you? Have you ever written any Flash Fiction? Share with us in the comments!
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A bit about Laura's latest release - Days Made of Glass:
Harlie Cooper raised her sister, Angel, even before their mother died. When their guardian is killed in a fire, rather than be separated by Social Services, they run. Life in off the grid in L.A. isn’t easy, but worse, there’s something wrong with Angel.
Harlie walks in to find their apartment scattered with shattered and glass and Angel, a bloody rag doll in a corner. The doctor orders institutionalization in a state facility. Harlie’s not leaving her sister in that human warehouse. But something better takes money. Lots of it.
When a rep from the Pro Bull Riding Circuit suggests she train as a bullfighter, rescuing downed cowboys from their rampaging charges, she can’t let the fact that she’d be the first woman to attempt this stop her. Angel is depending on her.
It’s not just the danger and taking on a man’s career that challenges Harlie. She must learn to trust—her partner and herself, and learn to let go of what’s not hers to save.
A story of family and friendship, trust and truth.
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Okay, I'll be first - come on you guys, show us your stuff!
The past is a place. Like Nebraska, or Italy, or Topeka. Who am I kidding? My past is Topeka. But the houses there aren’t shabby with a patina of decay, like now. They’re new and come-from-the-war proud, with tiny floor plans and postage stamp yards, neat flowerbeds and a family dog. A salesman’s color brochure of suburban living.
On the outside.
On the inside is a kitchen strewn with broken plate shards. Rooms full of shouted words, scarier silences and cowering kids. Rectangular bottles of foul-smelling liquid, hidden in toilet tanks and the bottom pantry shelves, way in the back. I traced the pattern of the springs underneath my bed until I had it memorized. I still see it when I close my eyes to sleep.
We learned to keep secrets before we learned to read.
I spotted other casualties in the hallways of elementary school. Takes one to know one. Like a comic book character, I had special vision. I saw through the regular kid to the confusion and make-it-stop fear. I don’t know if they saw mine.
Thankfully, the past is a place I can step out of.
Even if the present is a hospital room where bright spring flowers struggle to mask the smell of decay, and the normal world rushing by the window is so removed from me that it could be a television show. On the pillow, the angry booze-soaked face of my childhood is just a skull clad in a thin coat of liver-spotted skin. Soon, even that will be gone.
Am I here out of love or obligation?
Is there a difference?
I love this whole entry, but the cadence of this was uplifting: "Rooms full of shouted words, scarier silences and cowering kids." You go girl!
Muah, Jen! I know you'd be amazing at this - and you can create one in your 1/2 hour writing sprints....
I've entered a lot of 100 word FF over on Janet Reid's blog. I tried to show two, a winner and a finalist version, but it appears the comment area may be limited to XXX words. (?) Anyway, here's one I did that was the winner that week..her rules are to use the five words she supplies, and, of course, write a 100 word story.
Words we had to use: chorus, ghost, actor, crane, stage
Back when I won’t more’n a speck, I heard what sounded like a chorus of voices under my bed mumblin’ some word.
I couldn’t rightly make it out at first, so’s I kept on listening, night after night.
Finally, I got it.
Useless.
I reckon they was ghosts.
That actor what shot Lincoln? Useless was last word he said afore he died, no foolin’.
Troublin’ what I see when I crane my neck like so. They been hammering since yesterday.
Come dawn, reckon I’ll be center stage.
It’s alright. I ain’t ever amounted to nothin’.
Funny. Useless comes to mind.
Haunting, Donna! You're talented - I could never write from just 5 words!
Thanks, Laura! A lot of those 100 word stories can be sort of obscure. Glad you liked it! 🙂
One good drill for writing flash fiction is writing op-eds for newspapers. Time was, your typical op-ed was 1,200 words. Then it was cut to 1,000; then to 750; today many papers won't print any op-ed longer than 500 words. My current bet is that with the advent of social media such as Twitter, newspaper op-eds will get shorter still.
Solomon sed.
I believe you're right, Solomon. I never would have believed I could complete a pithy, coherent thought in 140 characters. Now I do it every day! I think it's a great exercise to make you understand the theory of brevity, and to make every single word count.
Such an interesting post! I haven't tried flash fiction, but now I'm sorely tempted...
The fun thing I enjoy about it, Holly, is that you can do it in an hour - gets my creative juices going for my novels. Give it a try! (and if you do, post your results here!)
I've never tried flash fiction...the closest I've ever come is writing haiku. Your info, however, is super inspiring. Thanks for sharing.
You have my admiration, Marilyn. I do not get haiku. I've tried.
It's not flash fiction, but the same reasons you state above are why I love switching gears and writing picture books every so often. It's great exercise to write something completely different from what you normally do.
That doesn't surprise me, coming from Mind-mapper, Orly! Very cool!
I'm in a Meet up writing group, and we write FF every other week from prompts. I now have over 150 stories and learned so much about writing. Now I have to do something with them.
tonikayk, won't you share one with us?
Laura, I was chugging along just fine this morning. Then I took a break and I read your blog. And BAM! You didn't just ignite...you detonated a warhead of creativity in my head. I'd praise you more, but I've got some storytelling to do. NOW!
Sorry to ruin your word count, Chris - but stop back and post what you wrote, okay? Can't wait to see!
Not exactly flash fiction, but I write a rural/family humor column that is sometimes op ed, sometimes short story, rarely fiction except for the parts I have to cut out to make it family-friendly (those are usually the ones that involve cows). I am lucky enough to have an editor who gives me full rein, so I can play with voice, style, subject matter, as long as it's entertaining. In the midst of plowing through the year long process of creating a novel when progress seems to go backward at times, these are like little pieces of sunshine because I get to FINISH something.
Yes, Kari - that's it! You get to FINISH something! Ahhhh.
I had two FF pieces published in Six Minute Magazine in 2012. It was quite fun. I had no idea what I was doing (still the same today), but I enjoyed it.
Hey Matthew - we're writers - we don't know what we're doing to do it - we develop wings on the way down! Will you share one with us?
Thanks Laura. Great idea! This way I can fulfill my writing mission: Focus, Finish, & Fun ! Finish is the hardest part... Except focus. This also reminds me how I enjoy wits!
I'm writing that on a post it and putting it on my computer: FOCUS, FINISH, FUN! Thanks, Mary Tate, you reminded me how much I learn from our readers!
Thanks for the insights on FF. I'll have to try it. I, m engrossed in a trillogy and need a change of pace.
You're going to love it, Jon. You know those random thoughts you get throughout the day? It's a great way to develop them - and give yourself inspiration. I feel like such a writer when I do it - something that's hard to feel, when you're slogging through an entire novel.
This is great. Am going to quote part of it on my blog. Thanks!
Thanks, Lisa! You will include a link back to us, right? Thanks for reading!
Yes of course!
I used to write a flash fiction every so often on the Changeling Press Friday Flash Fiction thing. It was kind of fun. They'd give the theme and you had a max of 150 words to tell the story.
Wow, C.K., that's super-flash fiction! From what I saw, 300 words was the minimum! Sounds like fun though - flash inspiration!
I write YA for Cricket Magazine. The story max is 1800 words. Not many words to develop a fully fleshed-out adventure story. But I like it. Thanks so much, Laura, for these tips. I've shared generously on social media.
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