by Ellen Buikema
One of the most valuable qualities of writing YA Literature is how it addresses the needs of its readers. Young adulthood is a tumultuous time of evolving, searching for self and identity, growing and changing, transforming from the world of childhood to that of adulthood. This rite of passage is a distinct part of life, marked by specific needs—emotional, intellectual, and societal.
Many adult readers enjoy YA novels in part because it allows them to travel back in time to revisit events of their youth, cheering for the protagonists and agonizing with them. There can be a sense of catharsis, following the protagonists on their journeys.
Modern civilization has left a gap. In many societies elders no longer lead their youth through a rite of passage or coming-of-age. YA stories can assist in fill that gap, helping young adults to experience these transitions through the written word.
There are many YA novels that cross over several genres. For example, The Hunger Games, by Suzanne Collins, covers fiction, romance, dystopian science fiction, fantasy, action, and adventure.
Adults in Young Adult stories should take a backseat to the teens, as well as to the action. Adults may appear when needed, and then go away. The protagonists must make their own decisions, go forward with the plan, and figure out their dilemmas themselves. Otherwise the book will be unsatisfying. The struggle needs to be real.
Recognizing yourself in the pages of a YA novel sends the message that you are not alone.
Problems posed in Young Adult fiction don’t have to be limited to teen problems, although there are plenty of those. The teen protagonist may try to save the family by coming up with wild schemes to pay the mortgage, like composing a tune that allows for teleportation, or building a self-refilling refrigerator. Anything goes.
Every one of these problems creates stress for the characters and helps with relatability for the reader.
The themes in Young Adult novels are adult in nature, but not graphic.
The story’s point of view determines how the tale will be received by the reader.
Most Young Adult novels are told from either first-person or third-person perspective. First-person adds intimacy. It brings the reader into the personal experience of the narrator. Third-person, particularly omniscient, allows the reader to catch any clues the characters miss.
There is no right or wrong.
Choose which perspective works best for you and the story. you might begin the first draft in third-person close past-tense, decide that doesn't work for you, and then go back to the beginning and write in first-person present-tense. If after a few chapters you feel you are unhappy with your choice, choose again. Experimentation is good.
When can I swear, dagnabit?
Generally speaking, swearing can be used to shock, for comic effect, to show mood, and can be a form of linguistic violence. Swearing in YA is frowned upon, so it should be kept to a minimum. Grit may be shown in character action and mood.
Language will vary, especially if you are writing a series and the characters are aging, therefore, undergoing complex emotions. In J.K. Rowling’s Harry Potter series, Harry, the main protagonist, ages from an eleven-year-old boy to a seventeen-year-old young adult, with all the confusion hormones bring. His language changes as he ages to keep his character authentic.
Vocabulary will change due both to situations and maturity. A character may be a mimic and after a few days begin to speak as the locals do, or might use different speech around friends than with grandmother.
YA fiction may be considered the literary category where characters achieve the most growth. Teens are in a constant state of change and so should the protagonist in a YA story. The protagonist needs to have new experiences and face roadblocks until the end goal, changing as a person along the way.
Lob on the conflicts to create tension—problems adapting to change, self-identity, relationships. More tension gives greater possibilities for personal growth. You are carving a unique soul. As far as I know, your characters can’t murder you in your sleep, so no worries.
Most authors ask these questions of every scene in any novel. Remember, by answering these questions, you will keep the readers’ interest.
A tip for finding your teen voice: Revisit popular music from your teen years.
In a quiet space, close your eyes and listen to the music. Let your mind wander to a high school dance, music store, a friend’s house, driving in a car with friends, driving alone, hanging out at the pool during the summer, or being alone in your room.
Musical memory is deeply rooted in the mind. When you hear the music and visualize where you’ve heard it in your past, memories from that time will return, allowing you to reconnect with teen memories.
Do you have a favorite YA genre? What technique(s) do you use to reconnect with your younger self? Do you prefer a particular point of view for YA? Please share with us down in the comments section!
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Author, speaker, and former teacher, Ellen L. Buikema has written non-fiction for parents and a series of chapter books for children with stories encouraging the development of empathy—sprinkling humor wherever possible. Her Works In Progress are, The Hobo Code, YA historical fiction and Crystal Memories, YA fantasy.
Find her at http://ellenbuikema.com or on Amazon.
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Really helpful and encouraging. Thank you. I'd only add, you have to love kids to write for them.
Thank you, Julia!
I agree with you.
In my opinion, there is nothing more important than the well-being of children.
I love your advice. It applies to all areas of writing. Thank you for this post. Have a blessed day!
Christy, I'm glad you've found the post useful.
So sorry that you have lost your position. Covid has wreaked a great deal of havoc.
I agree wholeheartedly. You have to LOVE them in order to write for them. As a former teacher, now unemployed due to COVID, I long to be around children. They are my inspiration. Alas, I draw my inspiration from memories and photos of cherished experiences. But, to write in any genre takes a LOVE for it, am I right?
A wonderful post, thank you. I've written YA set in the horse show world. Most of my readers, I believe, are older women looking back at those times. 🙂 I'm finding it difficult to get "teen traction" because most of the advertising focus and buzz goes to YA fantasy, sci-fi, or fairytale retelling it seems. I love your emphasis on character growth. That is what I strive for and is the point of each of the stories.
There are a lot of adults who enjoy YA and I am one of them.
Interesting term, "teen traction." I wonder if other YA genres will become more appealing in our New Normal, whatever that may be?
I don't read a lot of YA, but I have a friend writing in the genre, and I've read his books. His are LGBTQI+
Thank you Ellen. Your recipe for writing young adult fiction is a great starting point for any kind of writing. Your guidelines cover the fundamentals. Any writer who can accomplish a medley of these ingredients will certainly demonstrate mastery. Adding a variety of new ingredients can lead a knowledgeable writer to any other genre of choice.
Great tips here, Ellen. I've shared the post online and have connected with you on social media. Have a beautiful day!
Thank you, Victoria!