It's not about how much emotion is in a scene, it's about how it changes across the scene itself. Do your characters change? Susan can help you with them.

It's not about how much emotion is in a scene, it's about how it changes across the scene itself. Do your characters change? Susan can help you with them.
Here are five revision traps to avoid, especially when you're writing in Deep POV. (A Big One: when you’re revising sentences instead of emotional moments.)
This Deep POV post offers advanced techniques. Deep POV thrives on stress, tension, and internal conflict. It's messy, risky, and opinionated.
How do you show a non-POV character’s priorities, motives, or thoughts when Deep POV only allows the reader to know what the POV character knows?
Have you ever wanted a guide to follow regarding writing in Deep Point of View? Lisa Hall-Wilson has created one just for you!
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