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Why Emotional Scenes Still Feel Flat

It's not about how much emotion is in a scene, it's about how it changes across the scene itself. Do your characters change? Susan can help you with them.

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When Deep POV Revisions Feel Flat (And What To Fix Instead)

Here are five revision traps to avoid, especially when you're writing in Deep POV. (A Big One: when you’re revising sentences instead of emotional moments.)

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Fix Flat Deep POV: 7 Probing Questions for Better Immersion

This Deep POV post offers advanced techniques. Deep POV thrives on stress, tension, and internal conflict. It's messy, risky, and opinionated.

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Writing Subtext for Non-POV Characters

How do you show a non-POV character’s priorities, motives, or thoughts when Deep POV only allows the reader to know what the POV character knows?

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The Essential Deep POV Checklist: 11 Tips For Better Writing

Have you ever wanted a guide to follow regarding writing in Deep Point of View? Lisa Hall-Wilson has created one just for you!

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