

by Penny Sanseveiri
The power of a book title cannot be overstated in the publishing world. A book's title serves as both a promise to readers and a crucial marketing tool that can either propel your book to success or doom it to obscurity.
The first major mistake authors make is creating titles that lack clarity or are difficult to pronounce. This applies to both fiction and nonfiction, though in different ways.
For nonfiction, your title should clearly communicate the problem you're solving or the benefit you're offering. With fiction, readers need to intuitively understand what kind of story they're getting within microseconds of seeing the title. Even character names that are difficult to pronounce can pull readers out of the immersive experience of a story.
Authors often want to be mysterious with their titles, thinking this will intrigue potential readers. However, this approach typically backfires, making it harder for Amazon to categorize the book properly and for readers to find it.
Another critical issue is the use of made-up words, uncommon spellings, or titles that might be confused with other well-known properties.
I once worked with an author who had “accidentally” named his book after a major movie, creating significant marketing challenges. Needless to say, this is a cautionary tale against the strategy of deliberately copying successful book titles (like Stephen King novels) in hopes of appearing in the same search results – a tactic that might seem clever but ultimately leads to disappointed readers who feel tricked.
While you can't copyright a book title, duplicating successful titles is a poor business practice that creates confusion and resentment among readers.
Generic titles present another significant challenge. Many consumers don't first navigate to the Books or Kindle department – they simply enter terms in the main search bar. With a generic title like "Good Things," your book might get lost among crackers, children's books, and countless other products.
So be sure to spend some time researching existing titles before finalizing yours, especially considering how Amazon's algorithm prioritizes established products over new releases.
My recommendation is to also use an incognito browser window when conducting these searches to get unbiased results.
Perhaps the most personal mistake is creating a title that only makes sense to the author. This issue is particularly common with memoirs, where authors develop an emotional attachment to titles with personal significance but little meaning to potential readers.
It’s very hard to let go of a title you love. However, if reviewers consistently indicate confusion between what they expected from the title and what the book actually delivered, it might be time to consider a change.
The good news is that unlike many other aspects of publishing, book titles can be changed if they're not working. While it involves updating covers and metadata, which can be complex with a publisher involved, it's a viable option for books that aren't performing well.
Get started with this by doing a thorough Amazon research to see if your title is causing discoverability issues by appearing in unrelated searches or failing to show up in relevant ones.
Have you had issues with your book titles? What solutions have you found? Please put any questions you have for Penny down in the comments!
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Penny C. Sansevieri, is a powerhouse in the publishing industry. As the Founder and CEO of Author Marketing Experts, Inc., she has revolutionized book marketing, shaping the careers of authors and guiding them to bestseller status. Penny's influence is undeniable—named one of New York Metropolitan Magazine's Top Influencers of 2019, she's known for her cutting-edge Amazon campaigns and innovative strategies that catapult exceptional books onto bestseller lists. She is also the author of 24 books and the co-host of the Book Marketing Tips and Author Success Podcast!
To learn more about Penny's books or her promotional services, visit www.amarketingexpert.com
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Great topic for discussion. Without sounding too woo woo, the title and main character comes to me first. If it doesn't, don’t force it. Start with a working title, or don’t title until you've finished your first draft.
Secondly, I've found the title is in your WIP. When I'm critiquing a fellow writer in my writing tribe, if that writer asks for help with their title and I read/review their story and spot what to me is the essence in their story or novel, I'll mention it.They can decide if that resonates with them.
Wendy, you are the winner in the comment section today. All of us have read this and seen ourselves. I agree that the title is in the manuscript, only we the author can't see it. We need "someone else" to pull the thing out of thin air. 🙂
Oh that's so interesting! It made me exclaim "but of course!" and "Oh dear!" So clear when you say it, so easy to do.
Thank you.
Thanks, Moya - I appreciate it! Glad you liked the post!
My rookie mistake was in being too cute for my own good. My first romance book involved a trip, whales and a dog played a Cupid role. I thought I'd name it Trips and Whales and Puppy Dog Tales. I could use the snappy (I thought) line, "Trips and Whales and Puppy Dog Tales--that's what love is made of" like the old nursery rhyme. Yep. people thought it was a children's book. It was NOT a children's book. I renamed it and rewrote it and put it on Amazon, to discover Amazon will not delete the first option. This blog is too late for me, mores the pity.
Hi Penny,
Like Wendy Pearson, I find the book's title within the story.
You've mentioned some great ideas for finding titles and what to avoid. Thanks!
Penny, I am a beta reader for a writing buddy's novel manuscript. Both her preferred title and her current title have always struck me as bland or even unattractive. Your advice, along with Wendy's, will help me advise her with useful suggestions. Thanks!
thanks, Anna! I appreciate the feedback! And good luck with the book!
Titles are hard! Thanks for these reminders.
I am SO BAD with titles. Literally, my books will be: Thea's story, the nun book, Max's Bad Year. I never know what to call them until the end, and I never love the titles I end up with. It's definitely a blind spot for me, so posts like this help. A lot!
Excellent advice, Penny.
My WIP is an anthology. The working title is Warring Light: Stories from Writers on Calling, Courage, and Illumination in a Dark World.
I welcome your feedback!
Without knowing more about the book it's hard to say.. but the title feels dark. And it's also long. Additionally, what are the benefits to the readers?
So far, I haven't had any problems with titles.